Date: April 12, 2007 11:09 am Title: Five xxxxx
he suddenly moved toward her again to kiss the corner of her mouth before gently sliding his tongue across her bottom lip
Whoa! Hot! Yum. That beautiful mouth of his....
Hey, who turned up the heat in here?
Author's Response: Hahaha that's hilarious because I know it's so tame compared to the rest of the fic world, but it's definitely the steamiest thing I've written yet and I swear I blushed while typing it.
Date: April 12, 2007 11:07 am Title: Four xxxx
all he really wanted now was to make it perfect.
Ooooo! Good stuff. I like this one a lot. :O
Author's Response: Thanks! Now if only we could see it on TV...
Date: April 12, 2007 11:06 am Title: Three xxx
Their first real kiss and their last.
Waaaah! Break my heart all over again. :(
Author's Response: Sorry! It hurt to write it too.
Date: April 12, 2007 11:05 am Title: Two xx
Yeah, I love the look on his face after she kisses him, and I'll just bet his legs stopping working. I like him repeating that mantra: she's drunk. Funny how that comes back to haunt him on Casino Night...
Good stuff! I like this.
Author's Response:
That's one of my all-time favorite episodes and every time I see it I imagine something different going through his head.
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 12, 2007 11:03 am Title: One x
Aww!!! This is sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 12, 2007 10:26 am Title: One x
I deleted my one review, because it posted it twice, and didn't post the real second one... weird.
anyways, i didn't realize there was an epilouge at first. it was so sweet the way it brought it full circle. jim was pam's first and last kiss. with just a few unimportant kisses (aka roy) inbetween.
Author's Response: Thanks. The epilogue was a last-minute addition because I needed to have them figure it out, even if the rest of us already knew. Plus I really like the idea that Jim has a little sister. I may end up using her more in the future.
Date: April 12, 2007 10:19 am Title: Epilogue
oh Azlin! I loved them! I especially love love loved how the first kiss at the fair was with Jim and they figured it out! Ahhhh this was just awesome. Thanks!
Author's Response: See? This is what happens when I get impatient waiting for my betas back to me! Just kidding. Thanks for the review! :)
8 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 10:12 am Title: Five xxxxx
Is it sad how addicted I have become to TWoP in such a short time? I am thinking that there is something with The office that is kinda like a drug... because anything related to it, I get addicted like THAT
First Kiss - so sweet and innocent
Second Kiss - I loved how Jim thought of the Dundies kiss. It is so totally believable, and its just, poor Jim. Just for that one night, he could believe she was his.
Third Kiss - broke my heart
Fourth Kiss - needs to happen
Fifth Kiss - perfect. And totally made up for breaking my heart
Author's Response:
Yes, The Office is so addicting! I just can't help myself. In fact, I realized the other day that I'm actually in that head over heels kind of love with this show and I've only ever done that for two other things in my life. And they both ended up being jerks, so there you go...
Anyways, glad you liked it!