10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 10:09 pm Title: All in :)
oh my god! that was great! this is officially my new favorite story! please continue it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 09:59 pm Title: All that glitters...
I HAVE NEVER LOVED A CHAPTER AS MUCH AS I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!! I am dead serious. It was great. Perfect writing and dialogue. Gloria is AMAZING, and Jim is such a perfect little soul. That was such a Jim thing to do, I'm so proud of him for doing that. BRAVO!!! I loved the last lines, ...*sigh* I'll find my own Jim some day... great job!
Date: July 12, 2009 09:41 pm Title: Saturday in the Park with Jim
i loved part at the museum. but what was with the proposal? jim could've made it so romantic in the park. but then they started bantering, instead of being serious and sweet. (mind you, i'm only finding problems with that characters, not you, because you write about them so realistically. do you get what i mean? i'm mad at THEM, not you?)
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 08:43 pm Title: All that glitters...
God he's beautiful
Author's Response: I agree. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2007 03:41 pm Title: All in :)
*braces self for steam* Okay, ready.
Me, in my non smut, no sex world - would love to spend more time in my hotel room. In fact, I often think about just checking into a hotel near home just to be not there. Does that sound odd. yep. Okay, onto the review.
Haha, in a way, the um, fondling, reminds me of an episode of Friends, where Phoebe and Mike are holding hands but then Phoebe needs her hand, so she places Mike's hand on her breasts. HAHA.
I wouldn't mind if Jim was the only guy I ever kissed. And trust me, once I kissed him, I am pretty sure I wouldn't want to be kissing anyone else. My brain is so odd.
*giggles* I just read uncgirl's Tales From The Bathroom Floor which proved shower sex was dangerous. So, this caused me a laughing fit.
But I do love Pam being such a germaphobe.
Oh, and the word dollop reminds me of the commercial jingle "a dollop of daisy" my brain is weird.
Happy Jim Pam Future Fluff. HJPFF. Haha.
Author's Response:
I travel a ton - and the first thing I do is throw the covers off the bed in a hotel room.
But the shower is very sanitary...if dangerous.
:)
Date: August 26, 2007 03:18 pm Title: All that glitters...
Okay, that ring.... would wipe out my entire savings. I would be left with pennies after that. :O.
So, I love both Jim and Pam in this and its just, I don't even know how to say how awesome they both are and so yay!
O, and that ring.... :O..... yowza.
Author's Response: Yeah mine too. And then some actually. I do like the idea of them doing something impulsive - and Pam protesting and Jim having none of it. Something so romantic to me about that.
Date: August 26, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Saturday in the Park with Jim
I love fluffy future fics. :D
If your dreams have Jim and Pam together... my office dreams.... usually aren't so.... normal like that.
Its Jim. Of course he remembers. I have a friend like that. And I love him and hate him for it.
Pam, you have to stop saying sorry all the time. Jim isn't Roy.
There was the art museum I went to up in Minneapolis, and so, it was the strangest thing. They had a whole exhibit of one persons work, which to me, was basically, imagine a sheet of graphing paper, and on each little square, a circle was drawn. picture after picture. needless to say, i was no impressed.
PAM! How could you even hesitate? The best man in the world just asked you to marry him in what is, by chance, the worlds most romantic non romantic way!
Author's Response:
This was a really weird dream. Jim and Pam were together - but it did not play out exactly this way.
Art is definitely subjective.
I know right??? How could she? Sheesh.
9 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2007 06:37 pm Title: All in :)
I don't know how I missed this! This was so sweet and beautiful and yummy and hot! I loved that you provided the links so we could feel part of the story. The ring was so beautiful, wow. I've always wanted to go to NYC so I really enjoyed the shots of the brownstone and Central Park, too.
Author's Response:
Well I'm so glad you found it!!! I thought including the links would be fun.
NYC is the best. Of course I'm biased - but I think everyone should come visit here at least once!
So glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: May 02, 2007 09:46 pm Title: All in :)
Aw, such a sweet story. Every bit of it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Semby! It made me smile to write it that's for sure!!!
Date: April 30, 2007 05:33 am Title: All in :)
Well, aren't you the little Smutty McSmutterson? ;) Hee. It was fun just to have them be happy, and yes, Jim did hit the jackpot. Of course, it was very symoblic they should get Dwight mad in the process...
Author's Response:
Yup. That's me. LOL!! It's fun to write them happy and of course Dwight being incensed is just a bonus!!!
Thanks Gen!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 02:07 am Title: All in :)
this whole story was so adorably fluffy! wonderful!
Author's Response: That's what I like to hear StarShine!! Thanks so much!
Date: April 29, 2007 10:54 pm Title: All in :)
yay! i loved it. and i especially liked how you referenced 'sunday in the park with george' like two times in the first chapter. love that show.
Author's Response:
Yay!!! I'm glad. I actually have never seen that show myself. Weird right?!? I've know people who've performed it - and I've seen snippets - but not the whole thing.
Anyway...glad you liked the story!
Date: April 29, 2007 09:50 pm Title: All that glitters...
OMG. I was trying not to rush through this chapter because I was so eager to see the ring you were describing. It is stunning. Jim and Pam have great taste. ;) And Tiffany's? The blue box? *sigh*
And I loved Gloria and her insights. OCs are fun.
Author's Response:
Hee! LOL! I'm glad you liked the ring. It's hard to go wrong w/the blue box - that's for sure.
Gloria was a hoot to write. I'm happy to know you liked her too!
Date: April 29, 2007 05:51 pm Title: All that glitters...
that's my engagement ring...i just haven't gotten it yet...or the guy.
Author's Response:
You and me both - HauntedLaundry. (awesome name btw!) You and me both. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 04:54 pm Title: All in :)
SO FREAKING ROMANTIC. I loved this to pieces.
Author's Response: SO FREAKING GLAD YOU LIKED IT. lol!! Know how you can repay me? Write more Jillyfic. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 04:21 pm Title: All in :)
What a cute story. I love the ring shopping in the previous chapter too.
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks gotkona! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: April 29, 2007 03:11 pm Title: All in :)
OK, I just read this straight through. I can only say "SQUEEE!" Too adorable, too cute, too perfect, too fluffy. Also- can one get "mired in fluff"? Because that made me laugh. Love!
Author's Response:
I love the SQUEEE! ;)
And yes. I think it's entirely possible. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 01:04 pm Title: All in :)
Wonderful ending. I love how they act back at the office...hopefully we'll get to see it on screen someday!
Author's Response: We can dream can't we? Thanks so much for the reviews!
Date: April 29, 2007 12:04 pm Title: All that glitters...
WOW. That was the most adorable, I think, Jim has ever been. Wow...that was just...gah...no words. Amazing.
Author's Response:
Hee! Thanks flamingos. He's a tad too adorable to be believed - but it is certainly fun to write him that way.
So glad you liked it!
Date: April 29, 2007 11:46 am Title: All that glitters...
"Beesly. Behave. You're insulting our good friend Gloria here."
Could Jim *be* any more adorable in this story? [/Chandler] Great chapter.
Author's Response: Nope. He pretty much registers off the adorable meter throughout. ;) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: April 29, 2007 11:39 am Title: Saturday in the Park with Jim
"You think that's sexy - wait till I tell you about Cubism."
He steps back, seemingly horrified. "Pam. We're in public. Control yourself please."
Tee hee! Awesome- sweet but not overly fluffy. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
sweet but not overly fluffy
Always my hope and intention Rowena. Thanks so much!!
Date: April 29, 2007 11:30 am Title: All in :)
SQUEE! I love them squicking out Dwight with their PDA. Hee! Now I'm sitting here imagining Kelly's reaction to Pam's ring. Something like "OH MY GOD PAM THAT IS SOOOO AWESOME IT MUST HAVE COST A FORTUNE--RYYYYYAN! LOOK AT PAM'S RING!!!"
Author's Response: OK - you've got to stop before I find myself writing a sequel where Kelly gushes about the ring. LOL! Suffice it to say - you all have imagined it perfectly.
Date: April 29, 2007 09:47 am Title: All in :)
As he shudders against her he’s not at all surprised to find himself almost immediately amused.
Is amused the right word? (/Jim) Seriously, is that a euphemism or something, because that one word didn't fit (TWSS) for me.
The rest of it, of course, I greatly enjoyed. Great callback to The Convention with the bedspread. ("Blood, urine, or semen." "Oh, God, I hope it's urine.")
I enjoyed Jim teasing Dwight, which of course provides great entertainment for Pam...
Author's Response:
Hmmm. See in my head I saw it as him being completely enamoured and delighted by her in every possible way. I just saw him grinning after all was "said and done" so to speak. So he's not laughing at the situation - he's just amused by her tactics. Maybe I'm not explaining it right but it sounded right to me when I wrote it. Anyway - thanks for letting me know. I'm always interested to find out what does/doesn't ring true. I'm glad you liked the rest of it!!! I travel a ton and know that the whole Convention scene is far too true. Ewwwww! The bedspread is the first thing to go when I check in. Thanks so much for the reviews!
Date: April 29, 2007 09:25 am Title: All that glitters...
Pretty ring! Nice chapter. I can totally see them loving the first ring she tries, and Jim buying it. I really like how Gloria chose the white gold to make it more affordable, and make it possible for her to make the sale! Gloria's Michael-Scott like in her sales abilities.
I'm glad there's another chapter.
Author's Response: That Gloria is one smart cookie indeed!! (even though I honestly don't think white gold is an option at T&Co. But I could be wrong.) Thanks TLK!!
8 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 08:26 am Title: All that glitters...
My perfect man would NEVER buy me diamonds, so I had a little trouble with this chapter, but it was still cute!
Author's Response:
LOL! Well to each her own!! I do think Pam is a bit more traditional but I feel so bad for her currently that I wanted her to have something lavish. Truth be told - receiving something more like this ring would make me the happiest.
Glad the cuteness came through!! Thanks so much for the review!