Date: May 13, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
She squeezed his hand, an unusual public display of affection, and looked at him urgently. “Dwight, I would very much like to get back to the hotel as soon as possible.”
BEST. ENDING. EVER.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it...I love imagining hot and bothered Angela.
Date: May 13, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
Super cute ending--great job! I loved the smirk and eyebrow lift from Dwight during the fight question--so what he would have done
Author's Response: Thanks...have to admit I was pleased when I thought of that.
Date: May 13, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
I really love the stuff at the end with Jim and Pam. Their back and forth banter is great, and it's nice to see this wonderful married relationship.
Of the funny stuff, that thing with Dwight saying Paradox was not only funny, but perfectly Dwight. I can just see him making one of those faces, like when he said "Remember on Lost when they met the Others?" Creed's commercial is great, and Angela's TH about the noise from the roof? Awesome.
Author's Response: Thnaks as always TLK...the ones you mention are among my favorites...yes I had that same Dwight face in mind.
Date: May 13, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
Awww! I needed that, after all the Jim and Karen Beach Cuteness. Funny!
Author's Response: Thanks...let's hope we're not all turning desperately to escapist fluff after this Thursday.
Date: May 13, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
haha this was just too great. I loved that Michael does the James Brown hot tub impression. Wow. You've really honed alll their voices extremely well and the ending? So fluffy, it was just what I needed! Thank you! This was just awesome!
Author's Response: Thnaks wbj...I just couldn't resist adding a dash of fluff at the end. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: May 13, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
This was so wonderful and you hit them all spot on! Great Great job! So happy you wrote this!
Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks again for everything.
8 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
Once again, thanks for writing this cute, fluffy little piece of fluff. I enjoyed it greatly!
Author's Response: Thanks jillyree, it was a lot of fun to write.
Date: May 13, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
I LOVE this story. I particularly liked James Brown Michael in this chapter but I loved all of the commercials throughout the story. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks...I gues actually he was imitatig Eddie Murphy imitating James Brown (one of my favorite SNL skits ever)
Date: May 13, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Part 3: Bonus Question and Aftermath
Yeay for funny fluff! Yeay for the newlywed game! yeay! [/kelly]
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly, I mean Maybe Once
Date: May 10, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
(Commercial) Tonight on COPS, the Scranton P.D. deals with a drunk driver who has lost more than his sobriety. (Footage of Todd Packer with no pants on, handcuffed and bent over a police car)
(Todd Packer) (Slurring) “Ociffer, I’m not drunk. I don’t (bleep) care what your (bleep) brefalizer says. I just had a couple of cocktails. Hey, where are my (bleep) pants? Did you take my pants? What are you, some sort of (bleep) queer?
Awesome. Such a hilarious fic.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. I ha a lot of fun with the commercials
Date: May 08, 2007 05:16 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
I love this story. My favorites:
- Jim's line about Michael needing clarification
-How in sync Pam & Jim are
- Angela admitting to beet field sex
-Jim & Pam having roof sex (that needed to happen at some point).
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm certainly all for Jim-Pam roof sex.
Date: May 07, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
love the COPS commercial!
8 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Part I: Five point questions
ooh I love this idea! Nice job with all the characters. Very fun.
8 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2007 10:05 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
Great concept brokenloon. A very enjoyable read. Can't wait for chapter 3.
Author's Response: Thanks! Work on Ch. 3 will start soon.
Date: May 06, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Part I: Five point questions
Ok..."the butt?" LOLOLOL. this story is seriously so freaking funny. NICE WORK, man! And when Jim said "I can't even get her in the door of a Chili's" ok - what a great joke that was. This is just such a nice antidote to all the JAM angst on the show right now. Thank you so so so much for this.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool, I'm so glad you like it. It's been a lot of fun to write. Here's to Jim and Pam really being newlyweds some day. Hope you're working on writing something for us.
Date: May 06, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
The most daring place you and Jan ever made whoopee? (Hooting and laughter from audience, Bob cracks up) (Darryl) (From audience) ‘Attaboy, Mike! ========== Those are priceless lines above and had me laughing TOO LOUD at 12:40am. Great work!
(Michael) (Looks puzzled, hesitates) I guess…in the butt?
Author's Response: Thanks, always nice to get a laugh. Hope you didn't wake anyone.
Date: May 06, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Part I: Five point questions
Beet Fritters......I don't think I need to say anything else about this, because that was just freaking HIL-arious. But I WILL say more. What a unique, fun idea. Seriously, I'm jealous of your creativity here! And your voices are down pat. I could totally hear Jim when he said "do you know we're on television." lol. Along with every other voice as well. Just perfect.......MOving on to chapter 2 now. Beet Fritters...roflmao
Author's Response: Here you go: http://recipes.lovetoknow.com/wiki/Beet_Fritters_A_La_Dickens_Recipe Yes, I googled beet recipes as research. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: May 06, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
What I thought was funny...pretty much everything. Hee. You pretty much nailed the characters. "I am not short. I’m average. Get your facts straight" - Did DnknFlcka beta this for you? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! It's fun to try to tap into Ryan; his deadpan style kills me.
Date: May 06, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
(Dwight) I have a full suit of armor that I wear occasonaly to keep broken in, just in case the need for it arises.
I laughed my ass off at that line. Of course Dwight has a full suit of armor; he could use it in the event of a bear attack!
This fic is just lovely. Everyone is written so well. I showed it today to one of my co-workers, a fellow Office fan, and he agreed that the characterizations were great.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow EH, thanks a lot. It's been a lot of fun to do.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
Absolutely love this- so much fun! And your characterizations are spot on. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks lama...I recall you as very good with characterization so I'm especially gratified to hear that.
Date: May 06, 2007 03:36 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
great job yet again. this is SO funny. i can't wait to see how this all finishes up :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll get to work on part 3 soon.
9 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
One thing that I neglected to comment on when I got a little preview - Kelly's Sea of Love drawing on the card. Awesome.
Cannot wait for chapter 3.
Author's Response: Thanks, and of course thanks so much for your help, particularly helping me find my inner Kelly.
Date: May 06, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
So much to love about this -- the commercials, of course, kill! And 'in the butt' is a classic. Er, yeah.
Bonus points for the roof -- "the roof counts" Yeah.
Author's Response: Thanks lisahoo! I'm glad you liked the commercials, I had fun with those.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2007 11:30 am Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
Dwight and his armour and, of course, in the butt were the best parts. I don't see how you can top that, but I'd like to see you try.
Date: May 05, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Part II: Ten-point Questions
I love that you used the "in the butt" answer - and that Darryl cheered from the audience! LOL!
Another very entertaining chapter. Angela getting all hot and bothered over Dwight's suit of armor was just great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Those were my favorite bits.