7 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 04:27 am Title: Two
Cosmo Girl, you got me hooked. Love that Jim came to her in the dark. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: June 20, 2007 01:42 am Title: Two
please let me know if this is worth continuing.
Oh God, yes. lol Tonight I have zero shame, and this is really good, so please go on. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 12:30 am Title: Two
Please continue this. I'm really interested to see where you're going with this.
Date: June 19, 2007 11:46 pm Title: Two
Yeah, you should definitely continue.
Date: June 19, 2007 10:02 pm Title: One
Please continue!
Date: June 19, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Two
Of course it's worth continuing....more like an OBLIGATION!!!! What happens next???
Date: June 19, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Two
Are you kidding me!? You must continue!!! Keep truckin' pampongchamp :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Two
YES!!! Definitely worth continuing!!!!
When I saw that there were 2 chapters, I tried to figure out why I hadn't read this when you posted the first chapter...but I'm not even sure if I was on MTT at that point. :/
But yes! Definitely continue! Please! :D
Date: June 19, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Two
Wow!! I'm wondering whether the awkward email was regarding the confession or a prior time that this type of thing occurred. (Tell me they had sex before, and I'll be a happy little SLP. Except for cheating is bad. Bad Jim! Bad, bad, bad...I'm sorry, what was the question?)
The way Jim is acting (the roughness) combined with his reaction to her voice (the tears) makes it seem like he's really, really hurting. Or really angry? Interesting.
It's interesting, also to wonder what would have happened if Karen never found out. Did Karen "bring on" the eventual breakup by her actions specifically caused by knowing? Would Pam have become FNB if Karen didn't know about "the crush" and the remaining feelings? It's so interesting to think about that.
Will there be a next time for Jim and Pam? Will Pam not talk if there is? I want to know, so please continue.
Oh, and I like your little details, like Karen's PJ top being a bit too small for Pam, and Pam thinking about Jim taking the same panties off Karen. But why do I think Jim should be wearing boxers instead of sweatpants? Hmmm. Anyway, zoppity details.
PamPongChamp, I see your blood. It's red, just like mine. Me lobe yoy long time. (Mixing episodes and seasons.)
Author's Response:
All your questions will be answered in due time my friend. The next chapter is almost done and should be ready for posting in the next couple of days.
Thanks so much for all your awesome support, really it means so much to me.
Date: June 19, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Two
Definitely worth continuing... You can't stop now, it would be criminal.
Agressive, silent and forceful Jim is great. I guess he couldn't stand Pam being in the bedroom. Next time Pam definitely should NOT talk.
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Two
More please!!! I was so excited to see an update on this. :D
Date: May 10, 2007 03:04 pm Title: One
Poor Pam. Interesting premise, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: May 10, 2007 03:03 pm Title: One
Poor Pam. Interesting premise, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: May 04, 2007 12:14 pm Title: One
This is going to be good - looking forward to an update!
Date: May 03, 2007 10:15 pm Title: One
Interesting! I look forward to the quick update.
You won't get any scolding from me, although if there's outright cheating, without everyone being "happy" with the arrangement, I might gently comment. Or challenge you to a cage match. I do have weak arms, though... hmmm.
Author's Response:
I appreciate gentle comments...and I'm expecting plenty
...if you only knew where I'm taking this thing
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 07:30 pm Title: One
I can't wait to see what you do with this.
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 02:04 pm Title: One
Me thinkin me like!!! Bad, bad Jim!
Date: May 03, 2007 02:00 pm Title: One
ooh this is a good idea. Just the right kind of awkwardness and greatness that we need! I'm anxious to see what happens! :)
Also: is this sentence supposed to say it took him a moment? Just wondering.....
mIt took him a moent before he realized he was staring.
Author's Response: thank you for pointing that out, I was making corrections through the site and I must have jumbled that up. off to fix it! :)
Date: May 03, 2007 01:33 pm Title: One
Karen doesn't know anything WHAT? Ok, quick update and all is forgiven!
8 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 01:13 pm Title: One
i really like this idea! yeah, it's definitely going to be more than a little awkward ;)
one little nitpick ... you switch tenses a lot, from past to present. but other than that, i'm liking this so far!
Author's Response:
Thats a huge problem I have. I thought Edo had gotten them all, but I'll look harder next time.
Thank you!
Date: May 03, 2007 12:33 pm Title: One
karen doesn't know anything, eh?
needles to say i'm curious as to what she doesn't know.