1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2024 02:00 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
This outcome took me by surprise, good job!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Wow, never thought I'd enjoy a Jim/Karen/Pam smutty fic, but YOU deliver it perfectly. That was so hot, mmmm Jim!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Holy f*ck! That is one of the hottest things I've ever read.
Date: June 28, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
This is awesome as always. I can't beleive I missed this one the first time around. This is so well written and paints a very steamy picture to say the least. You seem to have a real feel for just how explicit to make everything. And I love this very PG line tossed in there among the heat: "and he hears Karen growl in that sexy way that she does when she really wants to be touched".
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 10:00 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
I had so much I wanted to say, like how you manage to turn what is essentially PWP into something enjoyable just for the story and the writing, but I'll just skip all that and say "GAH!" for Karen's last line.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
ok i'm such a bad with my reviewing, but i read all of your stuff at LJ and it's amazing. this one is no exception. sooo good! i vote sequel! you know, where they ASK pam? then...it happens for realsies? :) great job.
Date: May 13, 2007 12:02 am Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
To be honest I read almost no slash, but this promised a a threesome and there are far toofew of those. (I mean come on, its a love triangle, lets share the love!!) I wanted to write one but I'm too scared...
Anyways, first of all man do I wish my boyfriend got horny at the sight of sweaty post-run me...he usually just tells me I stink...haha
this was super super hot and begging to be written. awesome job.
Date: May 12, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Shazam! That was...hot. Damn. And Karen is about the best girlfriend ever. I mean, I totally ship Jim & Pam, but how can anything here be considered bad? Answer: it can't, because it's awesome. The end.
Date: May 12, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Yikes! I'm never very comfortable leaving reviews for slash (it's the old lady in me), but this is nice smut you've got here.
Just one thing - the expression is the cat that ate the canary. Google the phrase; it seems to come from an old postcard...
Author's Response:
lol, I had that and then I was like, "is that right?" and I didn't have internet when I was wrting it, but thanks. I'll change it. ;)
Date: May 12, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Oh holy God...wow. I'm kind of speechless right now. That was fracking unreal. Like really good. Whoa. So good that I'm not making sense.
Date: May 12, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
P.S. I thought I'd also add that this has completely inspired me to read every single one of your other stories you have written. I'm not entirely one to go in for graphic The Office erotica, but I can't help myself. :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Why can't I be your lover? Can there be another?
Holy good lord. I'm not going to lie, I'm not one to go in for the two girl/one guy threesome, but DAMN! Talk about hot! Loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. :)