Date: October 16, 2007 04:39 am Title: Three Words
this is by far my favorite fanfic i have everr readdd !!
pfftt i think you should continue. but i nkow that would be hard so neverr mindd [x
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!! I appreciate you reading this fic and commenting! I need to get crackin' on more of my stories!!!
Date: June 14, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Three Words
::sigh:: Oh this was great. My two favorite lines..."going to buy some fatigues actually." SO FREAKING FUNNY. Just random enough but completely rational if you're talking to Dwight. Second favorite line, "No we're dating." WAY TO GO JIM! How dare Ryan insinuate that they're just "hooking up!" I loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting! I appreciate it. And, I loved those lines too. It's really weird...but, I have no clue why Jim buying fatigues popped in my head while i was writing that part...but, apparently someone thought it was humorous! Thanks again. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.
Date: June 14, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Three Words
so cute. im sad its over but it was a great ending!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the kind thoughts. I'm sad its over too!
Date: June 14, 2007 09:28 am Title: Three Words
Oh, so sweet. They just fit, don't they?
Author's Response: Yes they do! Correct you are. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: June 14, 2007 08:49 am Title: Three Words
wait! it's finished??? i mean, i know what she's going to do, but still. i was enjoying the story. it's so wonderful! i mean, seriously, "why wait when we're more than ready?" we (as in me) are more than ready for another chapter to this story. but i guess i could just fill in the details myself. but i know you'd write it so well *wink, wink* :)
Author's Response: Yes, it's finished...but, I'm thinking of writing another fanfic about their newly found relationship. So, keep your eyes peeled for a new one from me, or you could check out one of my other fics, The Scarlet Letter, which I'll be updating soon. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it! (and, I was thinking about a epilogue...so, there might be more...)
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 08:16 pm Title: It's Not Over
This reminds me of a t-shirt I saw at Kohl's the other day - it said "It's all fun and games until the cops show up." That fits in perfectly with this chapter!
Author's Response:
Hahaa. I saw that shirt too! Then, I bought a Dunder Mifflin t-shirt! I know, right?!!! And, I took a picture of a shirt with Dwight on it saying "Do you have your tickets to the gun show?"...haha, I now love Kohls because of that. I know I know...I was shopping in the men's department for The Office shirts...sad, huh?
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Keep it up!
Date: June 13, 2007 06:08 pm Title: One Word
Sorry had to add a laugh because my review was #69 and included the word 'chaste'. Hee hee.
Author's Response: Haha. Who are you? Kevin? Hahaha. Thanks for the nice comedic moment there...chaste..
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:07 pm Title: Three Words
What a lovely ending to a great story. I really liked the Karen-Pam interaction at the end. This story was also rather chaste compared to some of the first date fics out there which, although I love me some smut, I found very sweet. Good job!
Author's Response: I just had to add the little Karen/Pam bit. It had to be done. So, thanks for reading and reviewing. It's very much appreciated...
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 05:48 pm Title: One Word
I loved this whole thing. You did a great job making it sweet and real and awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Three Words
Aww... final chapter. I almost typed finale. Which is apprpriate.
(does this mean more scarlet letter soon... not that i'm impatient or anything. and i guess if you want to have a life or something like that...)
And Sunday Morning is a good song. I just started singing it after reading that.
Haha! Loved that little Kevin bit (ladies man jim!)
Okay, so, that was a totally sweet ending, and they kissed and its happy, and the only problem I have is that *cries* I WANT A JIM!!!
Author's Response: Don't we all want a Jim...gah, I do. So, thanks for reading and reviewing everytime. Thanks a bajillion! Oh, I love Maroon 5! Although, it's odd that Rashida Jones did back up for them on that album and yet I'm using the song for JAM purposes..ahaha! Anywho, thanks again for everything...and yes, more SL to come soon. You're the only one that I know thats excited for that...*rolls eyes*
Date: June 13, 2007 04:27 pm Title: Three Words
Ooh! A million gold stars?! And a cape? I feel so special! :) Hee
Seriously tho, you already know my silly feelings on your lovely story but I can't tell you how awesome this was! My favorite part was for sure when Pam leaned and whispered into Jim's ear. So touching and them.
I heart this story and can't wait to put my cape back on although I do plan on traveling during my sabbatical... question: can a million gold stars be redeemed for a plane ticket? That'd be pretty sweet if they could. ha
Anyways, I loved this chapter and story oh so much and I reread it while listening Maroon 5 and that song totally fits! Great great great great great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! MUCHLY! YOu're great...and you know that! Without you this whole story wouldn't have been good at all. Thanks again for everything. I hope to have you back and beta'ing soon...Wait, if you're Superbeta, why would you need a plane ticket? Huh? Hehe..thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Three Words
What a perfect conclusion! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reading! I appreciate it!
9 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2007 03:42 pm Title: A Beautiful Occupation
Just finished reading all chapters, start to finish. Great job! Looking forward to the next one : )
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for sticking with the story and reading it from the beginning in one sitting. Wow. But, thanks. There will be one more chapter up soon...so keep a look out for it! :)
Date: June 09, 2007 08:48 am Title: A Beautiful Occupation
Question: Do I get to wear a cape? I think it should be required as part of my duties as Superbeta. And theme music. :)
Kev's list; Pam amost spilling the beans. The Harry Potter reference; and Dwight/Jim 's fight. You rock.
And you accidentally left in one of my comments that says SO Dwight! Hehe it's in red, you can't miss it. oops! :)
You know I love this chapter and the next chapter? Rocks so much I should get it back to you v. soon.
Now my official duties as SuperBeta! are officially done (temporarily) *bows*
Author's Response:
Ha. Superbeta reporting to headquarters. One chapter left to beta and return then your mission will be complete. You've done master proud. :)
Thanks again for the help. I can't believe I left a beta marking in there! WHOOPS! Alot of people have pointed that out to me. Oh well. It stinks...but ohwell.
ALright...I'll be talking with you soon, Superbeta.
Date: June 09, 2007 08:27 am Title: A Beautiful Occupation
Great chapter- but I think you have a stray "beta" comment in there about halfway down. I have to love Kevin's "data". Woo, Pam!
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. It seems alot of people have pointed that out. But, thank you! I loved Kevin's data too. Keep on reading, there's on more chapter on the way!
Date: June 09, 2007 06:07 am Title: A Beautiful Occupation
Okay, just FYI - if my mom or someone else comes after you because you make me neglect other things... its all your fault. So, yea, I was like, wake up, check email, and then I will actually start doing stuff. None of this goofing off until noon. Unfortionatly, one of the emails was that this was updated. Evil you!
Darn you, mentioning lunch... because right now I am starving for breakfast. Stomach grumbling starving (see how screwy my priorities are because of you!)
I love that - six months too late - line. Because yep. WAY to long for that to happen.
Glad Kevin made the right choice with his list.
I love rambling Pam tryin to backtrack. Its so fun!
Um, you have a Red So Dwight in there... is that a left over from beta? :P
Okay, so, wonderful pranking and writing Dwight. I give major props for such realisitic Dwight.
Now, really... I am going to try to deal with cleaning and food. Because, this is just getting sad... (not the story, my room).
Author's Response:
Ha...get your priorities straight Jess! Ha. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can always count on you!
Date: June 09, 2007 12:01 am Title: A Beautiful Occupation
hey, just giving a heads up...I think you left some beta work in the story...hint: it's in red
;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I skipped that one! It's much appreciated! Oh, and thanks for reading!
Date: June 07, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Come Away with Me
I hadn't thought about how badly Michael is going to react to the news about Ryan. Wow. Nicely played.
Date: June 07, 2007 12:59 pm Title: The Nearness of You
Nice. I love Pam careening across town only to announce that she's leaving, and the contentment that can be found in a hug from the person who is "home" to you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I loved that whole chapter. Keep on reading!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 12:34 am Title: Come Away with Me
Love this chapter. Because I totally know what you're talking about with the awkward butterflies and ignoring... oh man.. do i know! hehe.. more more!!!
Author's Response: Ha. Don't we all know that feeling? There's more on the way...thanks for reading.
Date: June 06, 2007 08:47 pm Title: The Nearness of You
Your killing me...still no kiss. But as always I love your story. With or without a kiss it's a great fic. And if this is the last chapter, thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really do appreciate all the reviews you left! There is more on the way so keep up the reading and reviewing. Hope to see more reviews soon.
Date: June 06, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Train Wreck
Ugh...no kiss...darn rain. I was sure one of them would turn back around. But none the less, a great job. The Dwight/Jim interaction was funny. Please continue, soon.
Author's Response: Ha. Thanks for your compliments and this second review. Keep reading...you'll get your kiss soon. :)
Date: June 06, 2007 07:49 pm Title: It's Not Over
Grteat Chapter. I'm glad they got past the nervousness of the start of the date and were able to open up to eachother on the beach. That police office is cracking me up. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks. I enjoyed the police bit too. I appreciate your review!
Date: June 06, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Come Away with Me
i love it. you should so continue!
Author's Response: Thanks. There will be two more chapters soon. Keep up the reading and reviewing. I appreciate it!
Date: June 06, 2007 05:20 pm Title: Come Away with Me
Good chapter. I'm glad you picked this story up again. Excellent.