Date: May 31, 2007 09:46 pm Title: Welcome Back
Still loving this! Jim telling Dwight he's in love with him...needing him to know - once. Perfection. Love this!
Date: May 31, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Toby's Dilemma
Hey, wait - you never explained why Dwight was on the roof at night in his underwear with a lightsabre. I could venture a guess but my guesses would likely hurt my brain too much.
Author's Response: This was another reference to The Client. Dwight sometimes spends the night there. This time he heard some noise and thought he was about to bust some criminals.
Date: May 31, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Welcome Back
Poor, poor Dwight. By far the most entertaining of the immediately post-The Job fics I've read.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate the compliment!
Date: May 31, 2007 10:29 am Title: Toby's Dilemma
Poor sad-sack Toby! I love his response to Corporate's decision. "Seriously?" Hah!
And what is Toby going to do with the new complaints? Hmmm.
Date: May 31, 2007 07:59 am Title: Toby's Dilemma
“Wow. Have we become one of those nauseating couples already?” I would love to see cutesy Pam & Jim being nauseating. Ha.
And Poor Toby. He should just change his name to "Poor Toby" now & get it over with.
Date: May 31, 2007 07:54 am Title: Welcome Back
OK, I love this part:
“Wow. So here’s where I’m supposed to act all awkward and pretend that it doesn’t bother me.”
“Exactly, and I’m supposed to pretend that I don’t notice it makes you uncomfortable.
“Excellent. Everything back to normal.” They both smiled and quietly laughed.
You pretty much summed up all of S2 there. Brilliant.
Date: May 31, 2007 06:58 am Title: Toby's Dilemma
I was feeling so sorry for Toby....until the last paragraph.
Cannot wait to read more!
Date: May 31, 2007 01:25 am Title: Welcome Back
This is absolutely fantastic. I love it and I'm so glad I found this. The writing is incredibly on point. You've gotten into the heads of all the characters. I feel that the Jam interaction is something that I'd see on the show. Wonderful job. I can't wait for more.
8 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Welcome Back
Nice blend of Jam and humour. I'm looking forward to reading more
Date: May 30, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Welcome Back
I like this beginning. It really sounds in character. Jim returns because he's in love with Dwight: perfect! Another roof date, and who doesn't love Dwight in his undies!
Looking foward to more summer fun!
Date: May 29, 2007 06:50 am Title: Welcome Back
This was great! I really enjoyed reading it. The conversations between the characters (Jim, Pam, Dwight, Michael and Kevin) seem similar to conversations/comments they would have/say on the show. I love how Dwight & Michael are involved in this story as well. Looking forward to more chapters!
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 03:05 am Title: Welcome Back
Fantastic! I love it. The humour is spot on and I love Michael's line - it really sounds like Michael!
Please write mor sson - I'm addicted...!
Date: May 28, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Welcome Back
Please keep going. I love the way you you tell part of the story from Dwight's perspective. I can't wait to see how JAM spends their summer!
Date: May 28, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Welcome Back
Ok, so I adore this. GREAT banter. Jim saying he stayed because he was in love with Dwight was CLASSIC. And then him going to reception and having that conversation with Pam about their upcoming date - and how akward it was going to be...you just handled that perfectly. Also....GENIUS having Dwight bust them on the roof.
I was already super psyched to see that someone wanted to chronicle their journey throughout the summer...now I'm even more excited after reading the first chapter! Can't wait to see what happens during this story!
8 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Welcome Back
This part is brilliant:
“Wow. So here’s where I’m supposed to act all awkward and pretend that it doesn’t bother me.”
“Exactly, and I’m supposed to pretend that I don’t notice it makes you uncomfortable.
“Excellent. Everything back to normal.” They both smiled and quietly laughed.
What a perfectly JAM way to address a serious issue! I love it!
I can't wait to read more. Thanks for leaving us with the image of Dwight in his underwear, brandishing a light saber...that is going to haunt my dreams.
Date: May 28, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Welcome Back
Wow. Oh, Dwight, how did you become the way you are? Seriously. This was good. Very interesting idea to have her ask Jim why she used his phone. I'd always wondered that myself. I hope you keep this up (that's what she said!)
Date: May 28, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Welcome Back
I have always wondered why Pam called her mom from Jim's phone, so I'm glad your Jim asked that (even if he didn't get an answer.) And the image of Dwight in his underwear with a lightsaber was classic.
This is fun. And the banter and situations sounds just like it could be an episode of the show.
More, please!
Date: May 28, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Welcome Back
Wow, disturbing image of Dwight, but you got Dwights voice down, and I loved this conversation:
“Yeah, somebody asked me out today. I have a date tonight.”
“Wow. So here’s where I’m supposed to act all awkward and pretend that it doesn’t bother me.”
“Exactly, and I’m supposed to pretend that I don’t notice it makes you uncomfortable.
“Excellent. Everything back to normal.” They both smiled and quietly laughed.
so cute!
Date: May 28, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Welcome Back
Fun!
And what's better than Dwight in his undies with light saber?
Author's Response: Especially when it interrupts your first kiss as a couple!