Date: June 12, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Kelly
This is so much fun! I can absolutely see Michael dismissing Jim as an asshole, despite having encouraged him in the past. Michael isn't exactly a portrait of consistency. As others have said, there is plenty of potential left in the remaining characters--I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this story.
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Michael
Wow, I never thought I'd hear Michael calling Jim an asshole. What happened to his Never ever give up advice anyway? And how far away is 10:30>>
Date: June 12, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Michael
oh to be a fly on that supply closet wall...
can I just say I love this and can't wait already for the next chapter? :) Great job!!! I heart it.
9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Michael
Poor Jim! He's not really an asshole. I like this story and always get excited when there is a new chapter just to see who will find out next. Hmmm, will Karen find out? Then again Andy or Dwight have awesome comedic possibilities. Can't wait to see.
Date: June 12, 2007 02:16 pm Title: Toby
I'm really enjoying this story! You've done a great job capturing secondary-characters (excellent work on Kelly!), and I look forward to the other two installments of the piece. Nice job!!
Date: June 12, 2007 08:17 am Title: Toby
is that last line forshadowing? boy i hope so! i can't wait to see how ridiculous Michael acts when he finds out. i heart this fic. just so you know :)
Date: June 12, 2007 06:21 am Title: Kelly
This is so funny so far. I loved Kelly's, especially. And the fact that she gave it away to Kevin, who gave it away to Toby, haha. And Michael ... oh, NO. This is gonna be a good one!
Can't wait to read more.
Date: June 11, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Toby
"At least it's not Michael." Haha. Famous last words. This is so clever. Am loving this so much!
And what makes it so good is how realistic it is. Everyone is perfectly in character!
Date: June 11, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Toby
So I guess Michael is next. THis is such a fun story!
10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Toby
This is really fun. I could totally see it leaking out like this...
And I can't wait until Michael finds out...! ;-)
Date: June 11, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Toby
Aww, poor Toby! I can just see this whole thing snowballing. Painfully delicious!
Date: June 11, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Toby
Do I sense a little foreshadowing with that last line? Fun chapter. Poor sad-sack Toby. I always enjoy when Toby gets a little attention, too.
Date: June 11, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Kevin
Haha! Kevin! But I thought that Kevin though that every guy's fantasy was to go into the ladies' room. I guess once you've done that, you have to go on to the next fantasy! Although I think Kevin has it wrong again (I think "at one time" is the fantasy, not "in one day", but I could be wrong).
Funny chapter. I always like it when Kevin gets attention!
Date: June 11, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Kevin
Great story!
I love that you've used the "5 Times" framework but that the story flows.
Also, I love that Pam and I share a screen name! What does the 0421 stand for?
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Toby
I love that Pam referred to the HR form as "The Love Contract". Too funny. And how sad was poor Toby's reaction....
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Kevin
"Dude, did you do them both in one day?" You have everyone's voices down so well - Kevin was so Kevin, last chapter your Kelly was so in sync with the show's Kelly. Great job!
Date: June 11, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Kelly
And the winner for Best Fic Title goes to...
Well, that's pretty obvious. I have to admit that I feel a bit bad for Toby, even if his crush on Pam tends to be more on the pathetic side. But you handled it so well! I can't wait to read more.
Date: June 11, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Kevin
Yes! I don't know how you did it, but this chapter is even better than the last. Party on!
10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Kelly
Oh man... that is hilarious! "Dude." lol...And Kelly and Pam really made me laugh. Oh, I can't wait to see how the rest goes...lol...
Date: June 11, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Kelly
Beeswax and 3HolePunchJim? LOLOL. SO good. This is hilarious stuff and I also loved Kevin's itemized list -- especially the thing about the hot coals. I was so proud of Kevin for listing something that wasn't about her boobs. lol. Great stuff here. Keep it coming, you are contributing to my deliquency from work.
Date: June 11, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Kelly
Ha! You captured the hyperactive monkey quality that characterizes Kelly so well! That was very funny.
Date: June 11, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Kelly
yes, I love where this is going.
the title is also dawesome
Date: June 11, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Kelly
This is too funny! I can't wait for the next chapter. You have their voices nailed! And I can totally see Pam and Jim's "doing it" making Kelly forget all about her own love life for a moment. lol
Date: June 11, 2007 11:34 am Title: Kelly
hahaha! i love that they cover it up with the message bit. and Kelly seriously is TOO funny! you got the characters spot-on! great job.
Date: June 11, 2007 11:31 am Title: Kelly
This was so funny. Great job getting Kelly. I could really picture her. Can't wait for the next ones!