10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was so great! Awesome writing - so steamy!
9 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh you should continue this :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this. So sexy, yet so cute at the same time.
I love how the anticipation of being together led to an insatiable desire - so much that Pam can't even risk getting a cup of tea. I also love how ordinary things, like a recap of a Phillies game or typing, can trigger sexual memories. The simplicity and realism is pretty hot.
Since everyone's sharing their favorite sentences, mine is: "He thanked her for telling him that last night by making her come with his mouth." Gah.
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. You had me at
she now knows what Jim looks like when he comes.
Date: June 28, 2007 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Hot and cute and entirely realistic and HOT.
Did I mention hot?
8 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
So glad Pam is coming out of her shell (TWSS). Seriously, this was hot and sexy and fun. "Are you in good hands?" sigh...
9 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! I will never watch an Allstate commercial the same way again. One more thing, Pam flying over Scranton reminded me of why I stopped watching Days of our Lives. There was a scene after Mike and Carrie finally did it and their bed started flying over the Strip in Vegas. This was fine until they started saying things like "ooh look, the Bellagio" and "wow, that volcano at the Mirage is amazing" Thank you for not going there or I might have had to stop reading fic entirely. Alternatively, if DooL had followed your lead I may still be watching today. Sorry for my incredibly long winded review, trust me it was a compliment.
Date: June 24, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wasn't sure you could top those first two sentences (lawd, child) but I was mistaken. This was fun and hot and how great is Pam in heat? Lucky Jim. Lucky her. Lucky us for having this lovely story.
Date: June 24, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was hot. They're very good when they're driving each other crazy. Hee.
Date: June 24, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I yelped at this. Jeez, this was good smuff.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. You've captured Pam's thoughts especially well as she recalls intimate moments and how they make her feel. And how she looks forward to what's in store....
Date: June 24, 2007 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
And this goes immediately into my favorites.
I think that's all I'm able to say about this right now without rambling incoherently. But guh, seriosuly good. :)
Date: June 24, 2007 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry -- can't review coherently right now. All your fault.
Date: June 24, 2007 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
After two months of taking it slow, she now knows what Jim looks like when he comes.
Best. First. Sentence. Ever.
Date: June 23, 2007 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
um, okay...HOT.
Date: June 23, 2007 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh you cant leave us in suspense for too long! Amazing!
Date: June 23, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing. So many great parts. Loved "At 4:15 she wonders if she is addicted to sex." and "When the question Are you in good hands? was uttered, he half moaned "You have no idea." Perfect!!
Date: June 23, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
This line:
He licks his lips slowly and says “Second time today I’ve seen your fingers work that fast.”
totally did me in. Nice fic.
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have no idea why, but I almost lost it when I read this part:
"She’s been perusing thongs on the Victoria’s Secret website for the last fifteen minutes and imagining him pulling them down her thighs with his teeth."
Maybe because I can only wistfully imagine it...heh heh. :D
Good job!