9 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Ooo, great chapter!
Date: July 31, 2007 08:12 am Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Ding dong the witch is dead! Good riddance to Karen, although I have a slight premonition she´ll be back. Oh, well, at least Jam said their ¨I love you¨s, which always makes me happy :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 07:34 am Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Irony with JAM there!
Date: July 30, 2007 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
Someone from the Office murdered? I think I did it.
Date: July 30, 2007 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
I like how you did this chapter in a different type of format. So who could it be? Oscar, Kevin, Phyllis, or Karen?....Keep 'em coming
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
I wonder if Katy did it :)
Author's Response: Nice thought, no one has come up with that idea yet. maybe, maybe not. But fear not, the end is coming soon.
Date: July 30, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Poor Jimmy. I can't wait till he and Pam talk. Jam and jail cells....um bad thoughts from this Lewis...hopefully they don't infect you Lewis. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Barajam, just get Pam out of that hospital in your story! We want to see some post-hospital, "I thought the girl I loved was dead" Jam action. And don't mention infections. Makes me think more of work. Not my happy place! 8-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Whenever I´m quite sure it´s someone in particular, you throw a curve ball at me and make me question my choice. Please keep it going! :-)
Date: July 30, 2007 08:32 am Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
Gah, okay, i tried to stay away from this new chapter, because suspense and mystery kill me. Seriously, i will read the ends of books first just because. But! I couldn't resist! Great chapter and I see the lawyer is looking towards Karen, who is acting quite suspiciously. HOwever, I think she may be the red herring.But then I can't imagine who else could've done it. Damn, if only I could read theend of the book first here too... Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Ok.. it could be that the whol "Roy cheating on Pam" thing is a red herring. Could have nothing to do with the murder. But wait. What if it did? And what if Roy wasn't being serviced by a WOMAN in his car when Stanley saw him? What if...? Oh, I think you know where I'm going here... This story is making me crazy with the accusations.... lol...
Date: July 30, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
No, no..thank you! (You're welcome). So Karen may be the obvious person, there's always an obvious person that doesn't commit the crime... What if Creed was heading in to steal the petty cash and bumped into Roy? And what was Roy doing there so late? Still not sure who dunnit, but I think there's more than one person involved. So many questions! (Still, I secretly hope it's Karen! and only Karen!)
Date: July 30, 2007 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Damn it, is it Karen? Is it Karen? Is it Karen? OH. It could be Roy and Karen conspiring, or something.
You know what, now I'm convinced it's Karen. It's Karen, it's Karen, it's Karen.
Oh, my God, I hate how caught up I am in this. It's the fiction version of a fictional thing and I'm way too absorbed for it to be considered healthy.
Date: July 29, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Arrest
"niiiice." this is a great story!
Date: July 27, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Hoooly crap! I'm actually nervous for a fictional character. Poor Jim!
Date: July 27, 2007 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Dude What additional evidence?? I have a guess, but I don't know if you took it there to show motive. Humm we shall seee. :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Arrest
Great job! Sweet oscar! I cant believe Karen, I bet she left to leave more evidence at Jims apartment...afterall, she did have a key. But, I still dont see the motive for her...
Ok, but I cant go all weekend waiting for the next one!
Date: July 27, 2007 11:37 am Title: Chapter 15 - The Arrest
Awwwwwwwwwww.....SNAP! I still think it was Phyllis.
And papercut, I am going to give you one heck of a papercut if you don't update soon. lol jk
Date: July 27, 2007 07:23 am Title: Chapter 15 - The Arrest
Uhm - Bloody. Hell.
I've been reading this a bit on and off until the last couple of chapters, and now I'm convinced I can't go on without knowing what happens after this and after that and after that that and after that, see? Which means you must update, NOW.
I'm kind of fascinated as to who was the person who actually killed Roy. Brilliant, Ellelque, you've got us all on the edge of our seats and biting our fingers off, let alone our nails.
Date: July 27, 2007 06:41 am Title: Chapter 15 - The Arrest
Oh no! Jim!
I'm completely hooked on this story! :)
Date: July 26, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 14 - Interrogations over
You definitely got me hooked on this story. I can't wait for an update! I think you did a great job with the interregations chapters, really capturing the personalities of each character.
9 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 11:19 am Title: Chapter 14 - Interrogations over
Wow! Its so good! It HAS to be one of the people who left....Karen is a JERK! I cant believe she left Jim there.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 14 - Interrogations over
Jim is quite calm through this all...great job wrapping up the interrogations, can't wait for more! Thanks for taking in my 'constructive compliments' <O> <->
Date: July 26, 2007 04:59 am Title: Chapter 14 - Interrogations over
Nice job with this, I tryly believe in the end Dwight does care about Jim, so I like the touch of Dwight telling Jim he doesn't think he did it.
Date: July 25, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
creed's interrogation is always funny, but this chapter is my fav. as much as i might beg in the future for the killer - Don't tell me! great job <O> <->
Date: July 25, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
LLQ, this story is so good, I can´t wait to see where you take this now that the interrogations are over. You got every character down so well. I especially LOVED Creed!