10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2009 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god, how have i not read this? maybe i have, and didn't remember. no offense, i've read SO MANY amazing stories in such a short time! loved this, great job!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so adorable!! i loved every second of it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww man, so sweet! I'm having some hormone fluctuations of my own, so I was definitely tearing up at this story- I LOVE it, and so true to character too. Amazing. I think you should pitch this to Greg "God" Daniels.
I hope you get over your writers block soon.. I want MOORE!
Date: September 14, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT! Totally how it's going to happen - I'm pretty convinced.
Author's Response: HA! You are sweet. I could see something similar happening....no doubt. Michael won't be able to control himself. Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool! I liked it! Is there more?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:) I don't think there will be more with this particular story, because I have a mean case of writer's block at the moment. Thanks again for the review!
Date: September 13, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
HA! Love that Michael was eavesdropping. Classic. And that they were fighting about Jim asking her to marry him, clearly after learning that she's preggers. And the description of pregnancy hormone insanity was spot-on!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad to hear the hormone insanity worked. I know what it's like without the pregnancy:) Thanks for the kind words.
Date: September 10, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Michael. So, so ... him. I like this, bitterpill. And loved Jim talking to Pam's stomach. Cute.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad Michael sounded in character. I always worry about that. Appreciate the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic and very realistic. Great take on the whole Pam Pregnancy thing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate the kind review:)
Date: September 10, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Hee. Oh, Michael.
Such a sweet story. I just loved the heck out of it. What a way to start the day. :)
Author's Response: You are too kind! So glad it worked for you:) Oh, Michael, indeed!
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, so sweet, and I LOOVE Michael's reaction at the end. So in character. And the perfect person to happen to overhear. hehehe.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am always hesitant to write Michael, but I thought that would be a perfect spot for him:) Glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: September 10, 2007 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY!! Jam!Babies!! Hang in there Pam, it'll all be ok!
Author's Response: I really think Jenna would play Pregnant!Pam adorably. My gosh, this show makes me so sappy sometimes. Thank you for the review:)
8 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 05:44 am Title: Chapter 1
A plan for Jan reminds me of Friends in a weird way (a plan to get over my man). "A Jan plan. A plan to get over my Jan."
hehe.
I hate hormones also, and I'm NOT pregnant. It doesn't bode well for me.
Haha, so sweet and funny... and Michael should not be allowed at their wedding. Thats a reason to elope if there ever was one.
Author's Response: I am right there with you!! I fear what I'll be like if I ever am pregnant. No one will be safe:) Completely agree regarding Michael: save yourself and elope! Love the Friends reference with a twist:) Thank you!!
Date: September 10, 2007 05:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I'm riding the pregnancy hormone train right now, and you capture it exactly. The mental fog, the indifference, the swinging emotions, the exhaustion...the only thing I haven't had is the inexplicable turned-on-ness, which sucks for me (but not for Pam or Jim!). Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad to hear I captured the hormonal aspect:) I took that from stories from friends and they said it was unlike anything they've ever experienced. Appreciate the review!
Date: September 10, 2007 04:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, from Jan's "smothering" personality, to Pam's out-of-control hormones, to an Arrested Development reference? Wow. This was fabulous.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it. My first attempt at throwing in a little Arrested Development. Two of my favorite shows together:) Thanks, again!
Date: September 10, 2007 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This really has the feeling of the show - on delicious pills.
She points to the kitchen and he nods in that adorable way that he does pretty much everything, and it isn’t until she’s passing his desk, hearing his phone ring, that she realizes she never answered hers.
Oh, well.
For some reason that little moment just nails their dynamic/attitudes at work. And Michael being smothered by more than Jan's breasts? Perfect. I don't know who was more choked up when Jim proposed, Pam, Michael or me...smiling like an idiot here. Thanks for that.
Author's Response: HA! I'm glad it worked for you. I love their dynamic as a team, and think now that they are finally together(right, Greg???), that work will once and for all take a back seat. Thanks, again, for the kind words:)
Date: September 09, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Too cute. It was a great moment and I think you captured them both perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad it worked for you. Appreciate it:)
8 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
A Jam proposal and a Jam baby - who could ask for more? Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Appreciate the kind words:)
Date: September 09, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww that was so good and deserves so much more than that, but seriously
Awwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was having a particulary boring night and this made me smile. Just.. lovely.
Author's Response:
And your kind words made me smile. Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it:)