Date: October 15, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your fall descriptions. I could hear the leaves and feel the chill in the air. Beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Your stories always bring tears to my eyes. They're always so detailed and vivid, and I could just feel their happiness in this one.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh to live in a place where the leaves turn colors again... You're making me homesick! ^_^ Beautiful piece!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Superb, as always. You capture this crisp fall morning, the love between Jim and Pam, the sheer happiness in Jim's life now so well. I am envious. Thanks for sharing this. I hope there will be more.
Date: October 14, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
So glad you're sharing it over here, because, hey, it's October, and the leaves are changing colors and it's autumn and Jim and Pam are kissing, so everything works so nicely in this story! Beautiful pictures conjured up with your words, unfold. :)
Date: October 14, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
The corners of your mouth don’t listen to you anymore.
Love that line, E. Great job, yet again.
Date: October 14, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
::sigh:: beautiful. You painted such a picture here...I can see the red and gold canopy of leaves, I can smell the Macintosh apples...just gorgeous.
Date: October 14, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seasons change, indeed. Lovely, as usual.
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
The corners of your mouth don’t listen to you anymore.
Love that line.
Date: October 14, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, unfold. Such a vivid description of the beauty of fall with such an intense first kiss. You painted a lovely picture with your words. :)
Date: October 14, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow this is beautiful