Date: November 17, 2009 08:13 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
I've read this story like a dozen times. Just wanted to let you know how much I like it. I can really feel Jim throughout.
Date: June 16, 2009 03:29 am Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
This is beautifully done; I especially like the last chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 06:36 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
AWESOME ending. Thanks, please write more (in general)
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 06:16 pm Title: Part Five: The First Hospital Trip
Awww poor Pam :( but what a hot ending :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 06:03 pm Title: Part Four: The First Affirmation
The junior flonkerton was awesome, and once again this was SO good!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 05:58 pm Title: Part Three: The First Breakdown
HOT. God seriously, you're fantastic :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 05:46 pm Title: Part Two: The First Test
Seriously so love this. It's so hot, but also really cute!!!
Date: November 23, 2008 05:35 pm Title: Part One: The First Attempt
“Do you want to wear a condom? Would that help? I could poke a hole in it. Broken condoms always seem to work with teenage pregnancy—”
LMAO I loved it.
Aw this is SO cute and hot :)
Date: August 09, 2008 11:12 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
Wow. Really hot, and enjoyed Jim's intermittent squirminess and discomfort with the whole thing. Just... yeah. Hot and I love hearing what might be going on inside Jim's head when he gets that deer in the headlights look. Excellent :)
9 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2008 11:13 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
whoaaaa - i have never read *hot* babyfic before! which is ridiculous, if you consider where babies come from. ahem. anatomy lesson over. this was great. i can't believe i haven't read this until now!
Date: October 24, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
Wow. I am very content right now.
Date: October 23, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
I'm so sad to see this end, because it was WONDERFUL! But what a way to end it...the last two chapters were absolutely stellar. One of my favorite moments, and I think one of your most profound was when Jim was sitting with Evan and honestly just thinking he was slightly wierd...and then suddenly after the nurse commented, his smile just lit up and he couldn't let go of it!...So fabulously realistic (I'm guessing, since I don't have kids) but just LOVELY.
Date: October 23, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
It is too bad it is the end of your foray into babyfic, because this is fanfreakingtastic. The thought of JAM babies is squee-worthy enough, but you have taken it and made it so much more! Good job.
Date: October 23, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
Very true to real life and very true to Jim and Pam's life to be .
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 09:42 am Title: Part One: The First Attempt
I LOVE YOU AND THIS FOR ALWAYS AND EVERRRRR!!!! :D
Date: October 23, 2007 12:36 am Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
I'll be honest. I tuned in for the smut, but before I knew it I got hooked on the baby thing, and ended up going cover to cover in one sitting. ;) Great story.
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
The end? You mean you aren't writing the ever-popular; post-partum; post-six-week-check-up; "we-haven't-done-it-since-your-seventh-month"; "hurry-up-before-the-kid-starts-screaming-again"; "well-quit-moaning-so-loud-and-maybe-he'll-stay-asleep" smut fest? That's the best sex there is!
Kidding.
No, really, you can write it!
Oh, the review .... I LOVE this story.
Date: October 22, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
Uhhh, just beautiful! So well written. Wonderful job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
You made babyfic adorable and in character instead of gag inducing and things. YAY FOR YOU. Seriously, though. Jim and baby Evan made me want to cry with cuteness. sadlkfjas. *loves*
9 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
So thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this story. Thanks for not shying away from the difficulties. They can be a real part of the process too. Makes the reward that much more precious.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Part Six: The First Freakout (On Record)
Aw, Jim. Creeped out to say the least. And dealing with the strange irony of a wife who doesn't want you to see her naked, but yet has bizarre hormonal shifts and changes in uh, appetite.
(Don't know if you'd heard the story, but HooBaby #2 was conceived after Casino Night, so Jim is sort of responsible for that one, too.)
Author's Response: Shut up! That's hilarious.
Date: October 22, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
This last chapter was heaven. I loved the scene with Jim getting to know his baby and this whole story was very well written.
Thanks!
Date: October 22, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
This story was just absolutely wonderful.
I very much enjoy pregnant-Pam stories, and this was definitely one of my favorites.
:)
Date: October 22, 2007 03:39 pm Title: Part Six: The First Freakout (On Record)
i felt the need to come back and review this chapter b/c i love it. Pam's insecurity, Jim wanting to be careful and get what he wants, then being completely distracted by the baby moving, which is just so sweet, right in the middle of the steam. it's good.
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 02:34 pm Title: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts
and wonnnderrrfulll babyfic it was! I seriously enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it!