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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2009 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

LMAO kids.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2009 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

Jim with kids is adorable, and guh him and Pam holding hands SO cute :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2009 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

I hope by swimming trunks you mean shorts lol. and omg LOVE.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2009 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw this is so cute :)

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 11:59 am Title: Chapter 6

This was too cute! I loved the shower thing. Silly grown-ups. Loved that line. Lol<333 Really really enjoyed this story!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay, i likey . ! =)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

This whole story is freaking adorable!  And I love the idea that Pam was ignoring Jim so she could try to get her relationship with Roy back on track.  And it keeps with the very sweet & nostalgic mood of the story (summer in DE, old-fashioned 5 & Dime, melting ice cream), that the final scene is left to our imaginations.  I'm so glad I saw the rec for this on the FF home page! 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

This was one of the first multi-part fics I ever read in this fandom, and it is still one of the best. I love the sweetness throughout, especially the ending, which I think you handle beautifully. Wonderful!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6

They stayed out there until the sun rose and the surfers took over their beach. They fell asleep using their sweaters as pillows, and each other as blankets.

Well, this is a disappointment. You did a great job of the build-up, but then left the conclusion of your story to our imaginations. It feels like you chickened out here. I don't necessarily need a graphic play-by-play, but this is so generic I can't even tell if Pam and Jim are supposed to have  had sex. As I said, a disappointment. Lovemaking on the beach would have been a sweet reward for all their angst. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 04:26 am Title: Chapter 4

Jim wasn’t even listening while Pam was talking. He was just staring at her lips and thinking “do it do it do it,” but his body seemed paralyzed.

 

Perfect. Absolutely captures Jim! 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 04:23 am Title: Chapter 3

Her hand was free for only a split second, though, before Jim took it back. Pam’s heart felt like it jumped into her throat. Whatever was happening between them, it was definitely no longer about safety.

 

This is so sweet, and so in character for these two. Well d one! 

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 07:09 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, this is one of my favorites, I just love it! Excellent job!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful story

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

No no no. Go talk to her.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

Too cute. I have to go number TWO.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

Pam you need to go for it.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

K, Jim is just too cute in this chapter.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1

No review needed - 10 stars! One of my all-time favorites.

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1

My first ever Office fic- and still one of my absolute favorites. You did a wonderful job with story, characterization, setting, detail, romance, everything. And the shower? You're killing me!

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1

One of my favorites in the fandom. :)

Reviewer: dresa Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2006 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

I loved this story!

Very very cute.

Reviewer: eagle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was one of the first fics I read that took Pam and Jim out of the office. Such a sweet story!

Reviewer: swestworld Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 12:04 am Title: Chapter 1

As always...one of my first Office fics and one of my all time favorites. LOVE.

Reviewer: Jen74 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2006 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was just great!!!

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