Date: November 07, 2007 08:08 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
“When you kiss me, it’s a big deal."
Wow, I love that line so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, stampsgal. I was very proud of Jim's last lines there.
Date: November 07, 2007 08:00 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
guh, I hope this has a happy ending.
Author's Response: *secretive smile*
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 07:59 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Oh man...that was seriously one of the greatest, most compelling chapters of fanfic I have ever read. Just unbelievable. The emotions you depict them having ring so true and you just tell the story so perfectly. I will be checking ceaselessly for chapte three of this masterpiece.
Bravo.
Author's Response: Wow, what an insanely nice compliment brokenloon! The pressure is on for ch3 now!
Date: November 07, 2007 07:59 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Oh holy carp! I always wondered what Jim thought through most of S2 after Pam kissed him at the Dundies.
P.S. Angry!Jim is smoking hot!
Author's Response: lol, thanks lisahoo! See, now that I'm rereading, Jim does seem quite angry. As I was writing I just thought of him as really upset, but yeah. He's pissed.
Date: November 07, 2007 07:50 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
wow gripping.
i was reeling and the third kiss? powerful
keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad the third kiss worked. I always spaz out when I have to write something steamy!
9 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 07:41 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Great chapter! Angry Jim is even sexier ; )
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 07:33 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Oh, God, this was...AAAAAAGH! SO amazing! AAAAAAAGH! MORE! QUICKLY!
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you! I'm looking forward to more of your stuff too!
Date: November 06, 2007 02:08 am Title: A Bad Idea
I didn't get to review this before but i LOVED this! Angela's thought were so in character and funny! I could definitley tell you enjoyed it lol. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Snoz. Hope you like ch2!
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:59 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I love that Angela is 90 lbs. and wears goggles to deal with the cats. This is soooo probable! Great story. Hope the woodland creatures are singing to you as you write the next chapter (where Jim does not take advantage of Pam but comes out like a knight in shining armour anyway).
Author's Response: lol, the woodland creatures sweetly scerenaded me as I wrote!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 10:26 am Title: A Bad Idea
“My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
LOL... that got me... This is really, really good. I almost wish Angela could be the voice for the entire thing... almost. More!
Author's Response: I did quite enjoy writing that line :) Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 06:05 am Title: A Bad Idea
Ssooooooooo great!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 07:43 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Wow, this is just brilliant. You channel Angela so well that I'm a little bit afraid. "My cats have conjunctivitis and I have only one set of goggles." I would suggest that women everwyhere memorize that line and use it to shed any unwanted guys hoping to come back to their place. It would get rid of me in a hurry, I know that much. Of course if that didn't work, bringing up the Feline Idiopatic Cystisis would surely do it.
More soon, please.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad people like my Angela stuff! I actually went onto a cat lovers' message board to find some weird disorder that a cat could have. It's also where I found out that some cat owners treat their kitties' pink-eye with a homemade saline solution. Heh.
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 05:29 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I thoroughly enjoyed this. yay!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Yay!
Date: November 04, 2007 05:23 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh this would definitely qualify for the best Dundies ever. Oh S2. How I loved you. Can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Hurry w/more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review xoxoxo. I'm a huge fan of yours, of course :) I'm typing away on ch2!
Date: November 04, 2007 04:16 pm Title: A Bad Idea
What a great first chapter! I really hope that you're able to update soon!
You did a good job with Angela and I enjoyed reading her take on the situation. The conversation she had with Jim was great too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have some homework tonight, but I fully plan on pushing it off until 15 minutes before I have to leave for class and working on chapter two instead :)
Date: November 04, 2007 03:12 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This was an EXCELLENT first chapter. I love how you have the POV of Angela of all people to start it off, that was excellent and absolutely hilarious characterization. I cannot wait to read more!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Lizzie! I'm working on chapter two right now, and I am *very* excited :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 02:58 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This was hilarious! So well written! You've got Angela down perfectly. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: It was sort of weird how easily Angela's voice can pop into your head. A little scary, even. Heh. Thanks!
Date: November 04, 2007 01:39 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh my God, this is fabulous! I always wondered about that car ride home and now I don't have to wonder anymore! The goggles were hysterical and I can't imagine a more perfect Angela.
Author's Response:
What a nice thing to say! Thanks Sweetpea :)
Date: November 04, 2007 01:35 pm Title: A Bad Idea
I love the premise for this story and Angela POV has me LOLing all over the place. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm so glad I made you LOL! Yay!
Date: November 04, 2007 12:59 pm Title: A Bad Idea
You wrote Angela perfectly! Is the rest of the story going to be from her POV or do we get a peek into Drunk!Pam at Tortured!Jim's house? Update soon, I love it!
Author's Response: Wendy! I'm a big fan :) Thanks for the review. I think in chapter two you will get a bit of Drunk!Pam's POV in addition to some of Jim's POV.
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 12:57 pm Title: A Bad Idea
This:
“You cannot come home with me,” Angela finally said, trying to keep her voice even. “My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I loved everything about this. You do an amazing job when you peer back into little moments in previous seasons and find something there that could have happened.
Love it and hope for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have soooooo many ideas for other S3 episodes, but now I want to explore S2 too!
I'm glad the goggles line is going over so well. I felt like such a dork, laughing to myself as I wrote that. I just imagine Angela puttering about in huge oversized safety goggles (she is the safety officer, after all)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 12:24 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Eee! This is cute, I love the Angela POV!
Author's Response: Eee! Thanks so much! :)
Date: November 04, 2007 10:53 am Title: A Bad Idea
wow this is so Angela
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm so happy people seem to be liking the Angela POV! I may have to end this fic with an epilogue from Angela's perspective.
Date: November 04, 2007 10:34 am Title: A Bad Idea
Love Angela's reaction in the car and her warnings to Jim at the door. This is an interesting take on this episode and I'm looking foward to what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the part with Jim at the door, because it was a little tougher to write. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 04, 2007 10:32 am Title: A Bad Idea
i likee this a lott (: that was so angela. haha! i can't wait to read more soon!
Author's Response: lol, thanks flonkertonxx :)