1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2023 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
ABSOLUTELY MARVELOUS!!! Pranks, fun, swimming and sexy time… well done!
1 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2020 10:49 am Title: Chapter 3
I've read this a bunch, and every time I have to take a minute. Wow.
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2009 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
amazing, I love your "one parters" lol
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Hannah -- it's great to hear from fellow authors!
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2009 12:28 am Title: Chapter 2
This is so cute and funny, I love it :)
Author's Response: :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2009 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO I love the idea of pranking Dwight, and then throwing in some smut, oh how I love it and you.
Author's Response: Thanks, Hannah!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2006 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
the line "fuck the tribbles" is the funniest thing i've heard in a long time, great job!!
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks, Rebecca :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Do you know what I thought the first time I met you?"
....
She nips his earlobe and says, throatily, "Looonnnggg," and his toes curl.
My toes are curling, too. Wow. WOW. I have utterly dissolved into a puddle of goo.
Funny, this was one of my first thoughts about Jim, too. :D
"I think we may have scared off the lake creature." LOL! I can actually HEAR Jim saying this.
Thanks for a lovely fantasy. Pam and Jim are acting like real adults--she teases him but not forever; once she realizes what she's doing and what it means, she follows through like a lady. :) However, I think a normal male who had waited for a woman as long as Jim has waited for Pam would have a LOT less self-control. But this is a fantasy, so it works.
Oh, and as a prank on Dwight, it's up there with putting Dwight's desk in the men's room. Very funny, and Dwight's reaction is 100% believable. I definitely believe he would bring everything from a neutron emission detector to ground-penetrating radar with him on a camping trip.
Going back to re-read it now...
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks, NEJam! Yeah, I took several liberties in the name of gratuitous fantasy ;) Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Eep, I just realized that I didn't leave a review for this before.
Scorching doesn't even come close to describing how fucking hot this was! Holy hell, woman! That was just unbelievably erotic, and sexy like guuuhhh... So yeah, I liked it. Or maybe I fucking loved it and have read it several times, it's hard to say. ;-)
I loved this line, before it got really smutty: There follows a long moment during which he's afraid he might die before he can touch her properly. Nice, I really liked that. And the line about not knowing if the stars she's seeing are real or not was also excellent.
And I really loved the ending, when they owned what had just happened by admitting they don't sleepwalk anymore. Perfect way to end it.
Mmm, very[/Jim] good JamSmut!!
Author's Response: Heh heh, thanks, Shroom! I aim to please ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
good lord. i...that was...yowza.
so much of the hotness and feeling in your stories comes from the way that you write the non-smutty (well, maybe the not-100%-smutty) parts that are in turns funny & sweet. the way you write the banter, etc. adds so much...and just makes the smut that much hotter.
yum.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for that, yippee!
9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 3
I was sure I'd commented on Chapter 3 (I know for sure I read it!!).
So, anyway, um...WHOA! Girl, you have a gift for finding the reality of a situation and putting it on the page with the emotions intact. And you did that here, and it was steamy! My, my, my.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lis - that really means a lot to me :) I'm glad it was more for you than just the JamPorn it was for me!
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think that was one of the most erotic scenes I've ever read, but since I'm not 1005 sure, I'm going to GO read this chapter again!
Author's Response:
It's best to be sure! Thanks, kaystar ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG - you went full-on dirty on us! Pam+Jim+water+you=dangerous....but so much fun! Great job, you're really good at writing Jam smut.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Luna! Good to know you like tha dirty ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gulp!
Um....
Uh...
Yeah, that works.
My coherence, it is gone.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks, Beth ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was very hot sex (fans self). And the admission at the end that they don't sleepwalk (anymore) was sweet and cute.
But the line that had me laughing so hard was "When I saw he had a knife, I got behind him. One goose with my antennae and he dropped it." Poor Dwight. Goosed by a lake monster and then manhandled by Jim. Um, on second thought, Dwight had a pretty good night too!
Author's Response:
Ha! You're right, Dwight had a good night! Probably more than he got from Angela (*snark*)
Thanks, hireath! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 11:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my god, hot. Jesus christ woman, you're trying to kill me, I know it. I love it when you're amazing writing gets all sexy like that.
And this line? "She doesn't know if the stars she's seeing are real or not." Brilliance.
Author's Response: Thanks, proposals! I promise I'm not trying to kill you ;)
Date: September 12, 2006 10:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Have mercy. It's not so hard to write garden-variety steamy stuff...but to make it truly erotic takes skill. And this was that.
Author's Response: Thank you, Colette! I really appreciate that ;)
Date: September 12, 2006 08:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Je.Sus. Jesus. You need to write more smut. Seriously, I'm considering printing out that last chapter to keep next to the bed... ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks, mcmuffins! Glad it, uh, worked for ya ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 06:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Do you know what I thought the first time I met you?" "Looonnnggg,"
K that was perfect. I loved those lines cause you know we are thinking the same thing.;)
Author's Response: Hee, thanks, gotkona ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1
GAH. I have no words.
OK. That's a lie. I have many.
That was stupendous.
Hotter than hot.
Let's hear it for WetJim. *swoon*
Seriously. Really, really fantastic. I was kinda missing the steam of the original version but this was better by far and totally worth the wait. You absolutely did not disappoint.
Author's Response:
*yay* WetJam!
Thanks, Krissy ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 04:14 am Title: Chapter 3
Umm....uh....guh. You just about killed me. Perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 02:14 am Title: Chapter 3
Excellent! The turn of DiveMaster Jim! Ah, that was hot. Totally worth the insomnia.
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks, GreenFish - hope you get to sleep eventually ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad that you decided to expand this! For as much as I liked it as a oneshot, I think you managed to capture the Jim-Dwight interaction pretty perfectly here. Oh, Dwight. He just manages to make everything so ridiculous, right? I also loved this line:
I traded a pristine Kirk with Tribbles for those. Original packaging.
Oh man, I don't even know what that means, I just know it's brilliant. You rock shan!
Author's Response: Rock on, pennylane, glad you liked it! Final chapter coming soon...
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh. Awesome, Shan, just awesome. And you have Dwight's voice nailed also, by the way!
Author's Response: Yay, thanks, girl7! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 12:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, such fantastic Jim/Dwight interaction! There were at least a dozen lines that were so brilliant, and so perfectly Dwight, that I can't even list them all. Excellent!
Dwight pulling out the knife and Jim frantically trying to get to them was so tense, especially describing the water as a "feeding frenzy." I held my breath for a moment, worried Pam might've actually gotten hurt. I'm glad she wasn't, but it turns out WorriedJim+SaviorJim=SexyJim. Hooking his elbow around Dwight's neck and pulling him away? Surprisingly sexy! Not because of any Jim/Dwight connotations (because no), but because he was so forceful and direct in his worry about Pam.
Ooh, and BoldPam! "Promise?" Awesome! And flashing a breast?! Wow[/Jim], now that's bold! Can't wait to find out what happens after "And giggles." Yay for more WetJam!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Shroom! Glad Dwight worked for ya.
Also, I like your Jim equation ;D
BoldPam will be back...
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
"No! Serendipity waits for no man!"
Hee! Terrific Dwight. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Beth :)