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Reviewer: Obviously_Blonde Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2024 01:38 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

I was a bit confused about the timeline, but the storyline makes up for it in spades. I love to read about Jam dealing with a tragedy, especially if it brings them together. Great job!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2021 03:58 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

This is awful and brutal and brilliant and healing all in the same fic.

Reviewer: Nard Dogg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2010 10:53 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

REALLY good story.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2010 07:42 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

This was beautiful! Amazingly well written and the way you flowed from one time point to another was perfect. Great job, and I hope I can read something new from you one of these days!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2009 10:30 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Beautiful.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 04:13 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

That was freaking amazing!

Reviewer: variella Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2008 11:32 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Looks like I'm not the only one who clicked because of the title :)

I signed up just to leave a review (only reason I leave a 9 instead of a 10 is that there are a few word and phrase choices that I think could be polished)- the theme of the story is the kind that is easy to write bad fic about- the theme itself is emotionally charged enough that people can coast on it. You didn't do that at all, I think you handed it beautifully.

The title fits perfectly... not sure what else to say except this broke my fanfic reading little heart, and the ending mended it without overshadowing everything important that came before.

loved it.

Reviewer: Sunday Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 04:52 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

i clicked on this story because i absolutely love sufjan stevens & i'm so glad i did because this was so beautifully sad and moving

Author's Response: Oh I love Sufjan Stevens more than I think is healthy. I'm glad other people share my love!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 09:19 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

This was sad and happy and beautiful throughout. I like the way you mixed the chapters up - and I'm so glad there was such a sweet, happy ending.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was going for sad and happy and beautiful! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 10:06 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Lovely - I think you did a great job of showing the spectrum of emotion and pain they'd go through if this happened - not able to let it go, even years later, even though they hadn't even known they had anything to lose in the first place. And the ending was very rewarding after all of that :)

Author's Response: I had actually planned to have the end be the beginning (if that makes any sense) and decided that it would be much better if you learn they have the baby after all of that pain. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2008 08:57 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

This was so powerful and beautifully written. The tandem of angst and fluff and romance working together. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I was all about leaving it on a happier note.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 11:17 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Wow, what a beautiful story. It made me cry in sadness and in joy. Wonderful job.
Why does the title sound so familiar?

Author's Response: Are you a Sufjan Stevens fan? The title is the name of one of his songs. It's an absolutely beautiful song, and it just happened to be what I was listening to while I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 07:49 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 07:08 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

oh wow...one of the best stories i have read in a while...it was kinda confusing with the switching back and forth, but i figured it out...hope to read some more of your work soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was going to be too confusing, but I'm glad you figured it out!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 06:42 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Guh.  Baby!Fic combined with Pam & Jim taking a chance and getting the heck out of Scranton-fic.  Wow.  Nicely done, sillyrabbit!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I could just see them being all artsy together somewhere that wasn't Scranton. Somehow in my mind, Pam would be awesome at sculptures. Not sure why...

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 12:54 am Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Fantastic. Wonderful, loved it. I don't know what else to say.


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 09:42 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Oh that was so beautiful!! I love how you fragmented the timeline, it worked really well. =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, I wanted to balance the depressing part with the part where they are happy and okay and moving on with their life.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 09:36 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

Lovely story.  I like how you go back & forth in time.  It really works nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 09:09 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

"It's okay to cry and to be sad, but know that it will be okay." Moms always know what to say, don't they?

This was really good--made me happy, amazed and full too :) 



Author's Response: I think it's a Mom thing. My mom always knows what to say. Maybe it kicks in when you have kids? I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Binxbaby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 08:51 pm Title: I am joining all my thoughts to you

You made me cry. Because that is exactly how I felt when it happened to me. Beautiful writing.

Author's Response: I hope making you cry is a good thing? And not a terrible, how dare you thing? I'm going to hope it's the first one. Thanks!

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