Date: March 01, 2023 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohhhh.... got us at the end there...ouch!
But, what a great thought train.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow...so good, so painful, so tricky! I really loved this--I totally glossed ove the subtle signs at the beginning so the ending was definitely a punch to the gut. Nice to see Jim happy, but so true that he would probably carry thoughts of Pam around with him forever.
Author's Response: thank you!! that is exactly what i wanted to happen to the reader when they read the subtle signs -- gloss over them and not realize. you hit the nail on the head for your last comment!! i totally agree and that was, once again, what i was going for. =)
Date: September 11, 2006 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Ouch, ouch, ouch. Well done, but Jim marrying someone else? Just ouch!
Author's Response: i know!! it is very sad but it is still an unfortunate possibility! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh so sad. Let's hope that doesn't come true.
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
so sad and so beautiful. i was like "awww, he's marrying pam ... wait, pam doesn't wear her hair in bun ... oh."
i'm very sad that they didn't end up together but at least he found happiness with someone else. let's just hope that actually doesn't happen on the show =)
great job, once again!
Author's Response: thank you!! i'm so glad that you see the story the way it was meant to be seen! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor bride...makes me wonder if she knows the history she's getting into. Well-written!
Author's Response: thank you! while you're supposed to feel sorry for the bride, you're also supposed to see that jim loves her very much. he was just reflecting. =)
8 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo! Sneaky and evil. And I can't help it. It just makes me so sad....
Still - good job. You totally had me fooled - except when you said something about her wearing her hair in a bun. I was like...wait...that's not Pam....
Author's Response:
thank you!! i was waiting for someone to noticed the hair! i considered changing it but i figured it would be a subtle warning of what was to come!
i have to say that i love your stories, so it's an honor to get a review from you!! thank you times 2!! =)
8 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 05:33 am Title: Chapter 1
*Sigh* If Pam rejects him, he'll always have that scar, won't he? This was bittersweet- in the good way, like dark chocolate.
Author's Response:
thank you! yes, he'll always have that scar but i like to think that his new bride is really the new love of his life.
i love dark chocolate by the way! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, so sad. :-( That's why they have to get together, because if they don't, they'll always wonder.
Author's Response: thank you! yes, i think that jim & pam need to get together. yet it would be slightly weird if they did.. that tension would be gone and their realtionship wouldn't be the same..
8 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 01:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, god. You're... evil. You definitely tricked me there. Very effective in this because while reading you're all happy and giggly with the Jam-ness but then you get the to last line and it's especially heartbreaking, because it isn't Jam at all. Evil, I say.
Author's Response:
i am confused by whether or not you actually like it.. lol!
like i said earlier, the plan was to make people think and to make them sad. so hopefully i was able to accomplish it!! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2006 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG Kate. You made me cry. that was so good. and omfg. so cute, but poor jim. OMG!! did JIM MARRY the COMEDIAN WH0RE?!?!? that would suckk!!
Author's Response: no he didn't marry the comedian whore!! duh!! she doesn't have auburn hair silly goose!! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2006 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I literally gasped when I read that last line. zomg, that hurt, man. Give a girl a warning! ;) Well done, even if I do need to go read five tons of JAM fic to get over my pain.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for not giving you a warning! =) but i am very glad that you liked it.. at least the tiniest bit. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2006 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah. I loved it, so well written, so beautiful. Then I got to the last line and my heart broke. Twice. Once for him marrying someone else and once because he shouldn't be thinking of Pam while standing with his new wife.
Author's Response: YAY!! i'm so happy that you liked it!! =) i wanted people to be slightly saddened, but hey! he is happy with his new wife!! let that be your comfort!! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2006 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I fudging love you, you whore!! Why are you so fricking amazing? I should punch you in your mouth. Now.
THIS IS MY SISTER, PEOPLES. SEND HER NICE COMMENTS OR I'LL TELL B.J./RYAN THAT YOU HAVE CANDY AND HE'LL BEAT YOU UP. = ]
Author's Response: Haa. Yes, thanks sis. Ever so kind of you. =)