Date: March 24, 2011 06:27 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved reading that again -- you write beautiful intimate scenes -- never rushed -- but intense -- and it all was in perfect character. You're a talented writer.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2010 03:16 pm Title: Epilogue
This is at first achingly sad then so wonderfully beautiful. You did such a fantasticjob of finding, describing and expaning on the flaws of Jim and Pam, finding how the flaws would/could effect their relationship. You showed how neither ar perfect and despite what WE may want to believe, the relationship is not perfect,yet if they work through the things that are imperfect, they can and will have a great shot. That includs as painful as it is, the past was not going away, it dad to be dealt with and you did a perfect job doing that. Absolutely beautiful story.
Date: May 25, 2010 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just found this story; don't know how I missed it when first posted, but I'm thrilled I found it now. Awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2009 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the ending. What can I say, I'm a sucker for the angst. Loved the whole thing, of course but that BOOM at the end was just perfect.
Date: September 08, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ewwwwwwwwww Karen's panties:(
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww nice way to end it, loved it. Added itto my favorites and will be reading again =)
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2008 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Seriously, it's like you are actually pam lol. You wrote that like it happened to you, amazing, excellent, spot on!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2008 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
GUH you killed me ded. Hot angsty Jim sex is magical.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2008 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
LMAO Question, why do you have a present? classic Dwight, as Jim and Pam, you nailed him. I love it, I also think that Jim''s birthday was around John's, so well done lol.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2008 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Again, I can't say how brilliantly you have nailed the characters. Everything I'd thought about Pam, you wrote, the way Jim must have felt... you really are fantastic. Never stop writing J/P LOL.
Date: August 18, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love your style of writing so much and you seriously always leave me wanting more. Mmmmmm Jim!
Date: August 18, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG cliffhanger or what. I can't bear Jim and Pam angst yet I can't stop reading lol. Brilliantly done!!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 01:33 pm Title: Epilogue
ok, how many times can I review you? Is that like giving blood :)
Anyway, fabulous story. You keep me coming back for more. Please tell me there's more. I know I'm not the only one who's enjoying them!!!
Author's Response: As many as you want, my friend. As many as you want. There is no limit to reviews (at least not for me -- the more the better)! Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
9 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2008 09:31 pm Title: Epilogue
HAA HAA! You know, I totally didn't get the title until that last line? Is that bad?
Sooo sweet- I really have no idea how I got through this story without crying... I was really cutting it close there in chapter 6, but I was able to get by with just a couple shaky sighs... Beautiful!
Author's Response: You know, I didn't really know how I was going to tie in the title until the last line ;-) Sometimes things just work themselves out. So it's definitely not bad that you didn't get it right away! Really glad you like this story (and glad I didn't make you cry!). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: March 18, 2008 12:53 pm Title: Epilogue
This is such a great story. I have just spent the past couple of hours reading all of your posts and can I just say: wow! You get the balance between angst, fluff and smut just right. Are you working on anything else? I would love to read more. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Blind Assasin! That's really nice! I am not currently working on anything new because when I write I fall into a black whole of obsession and ignore everything else in my life (laundry, hubby, kids, etc.). PLUS I'm trying to work on some other writing projects (non Office fic). But you never know . . . when the mood hits, it hits! (Plus, the benefits of writing smut are making my hubby not mind my time spent fondling my keyboard so much.) Anyway, keep an eye out. You never know when I may get the itch! (And reviews make me more likely to write!)
Date: March 11, 2008 05:20 pm Title: Epilogue
the “bonfire of the green panties” in his Weber grill.
Wow. All kinds of joke material there...:D
“You’ve got frosting in your chest hair.”
Okay THAT is one of the sexiest phrases I've ever read in fanfic. In fact, I want them to use that phrase on the show.
Good story. I enjoyed it all very much!
Date: March 11, 2008 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I found the idea of Pam being jealous a little hard to believe, that's just me, but this rang ABSOLUTELY true to me:
the sting of humiliation when she thought of how pitiful she must have seemed to Phyllis and Kelly and others who only knew part of the story.
Pam has a certain amount of pride under that quiet exterior, and I think this kind of humiliation would really linger with her. I like the way you brought it out.
Okay, and Dwight and the head cheese? Genius. I bet he and Mose make their own.
Date: March 11, 2008 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like the phrase Iwishyouwould resounding in Jim's head. It's the kind of catch phrase that might stay with him when all the carefully thought out speeches fail (which, with these two people, is most of the time!). Just the kind of thing that would echo in his head until it made him nuts. Well done!
Date: March 11, 2008 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
the surprisingly silky skin of his neck, the velvet of his ear lobe...the round tightness of his ass
It's the little, sensual details like that that really make a story. Love every little detail you give us here!
I love the cucumber wrestling. I can see this happening.
She was ready, hungry, desperate for him. So he had followed her lead.
Go, PAM! So nice to see someone writing Pam as aggressive, take-charge. I think that would really turn Jim on, and it's a side of her we don't get to see very often. And then Jim "on a mission"....wow. I mean....wow. Hot, much?
He never left her without kissing her. Awwwwwwww.....how sweet!
a pair of lime green panties from Victoria’s Secret.
Wow, Jim's gonna look hot in those! Kidding, I know where they're from. But just for a moment, that image was in my head. Thank you for ruining my composure. :D
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2008 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this whole thing. It was sexy and angsty AND you really nailed the issues that they needed to work out. FWIW I agree with you that Pam sort of needed to step up and REALLY tell Jim how she felt - lay it all out there like he did.
Great job! Love your writing :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Kells! I really appreciate it!
Date: March 08, 2008 11:03 am Title: Epilogue
Bravo! That was such an amazing story and I loved every second of it. It's great when a story that wrecks your heart in the middle can still manage to make you laugh by the end. Fantastic job
Date: March 08, 2008 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
To thank you isn't really enough to say how much I loved this story. From the first word to the last it was captivating. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much. I can't believe how much I've enjoyed writing it and posting it and reading all the comments. It really is immediate gratification. Anyway, thanks for reading and taking the time to review. Hopefully I won't disappoint with the next one!
Date: March 08, 2008 06:42 am Title: Epilogue
Ah, now that is some lovely sheet music. Nicely done, wendolf.
Author's Response: Ah, yes. I was struggling with how to tie in the title better (I really just came up with it out of my ass when I posted the first chapter, solely based on Pam's changing of the sheets). Luckily it all came together in the end. Thanks so much for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2008 04:55 am Title: Epilogue
Wonderful! If this hadn't already earned a blue ribbon (and I wish you many of those...nudge, nudge, wink, wink), I would have nominated it for one. Thanks for the sticky sweet fun. Looking forward to more from you, wendolf.
Author's Response: Hee! Yes I wish myself many of those as well! ;-) Thanks so much for the comments!
Date: March 07, 2008 11:29 pm Title: Epilogue
I wish there was more.