1 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2018 08:46 am Title: Superheroes
So clever! I literally laughed out loud at times because oh my you hit those characters right on the head! Oh, and that ending was perfection. Thank you for this hilarious treat.
8 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 04:33 pm Title: Superheroes
That was a funny and entertaining ensemble fic. You captured each character's voice perfectly, and the dialogue sounded very real.
Author's Response: Thanks! Capturing the voices is one of my goals; I'm glad you think I succeeded!
Date: June 20, 2008 09:01 am Title: Superheroes
Very cute. Perfect for killing time on a lazy Friday at work. And this? This is perfection:
Michael looked around, wide eyed. "Wow. I am so impressed with you guys. You could have been working all afternoon, but you came up with this? So awesome!"
Author's Response: That turned out to be one of my favorite lines, too. :) Thanks for the review, nq!
Date: June 20, 2008 08:52 am Title: Superheroes
This was so good! So in character and FUNNY! Great work here.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2008 07:38 am Title: Superheroes
That was good fun. You do a great job with ensemble stuff. The Dwight stuff here was my favorite, dead on and very funny. Great work.
Author's Response: Dwight almost writes himself sometimes. :) Thanks, brokenloon!
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2008 07:04 am Title: Superheroes
Oh wow...I loved this SO MUCH! A great ensemble piece, you captured everyone perfectly, and I loved the ending. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! Wasn't sure about the ending; glad to know it worked for you.
Date: June 20, 2008 05:15 am Title: Superheroes
This was so hilarious! I loved it! This line made me laugh out loud:
"Mutant genes?" he asked. "Dwight's talking about his family again?"
So funny!! You really portrayed each and every character so well! So thank you for writing this, because I really enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Hey, Dwight is always good for a laugh! Thanks for reading and for commenting!
8 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2008 11:02 pm Title: Superheroes
Hah! This definitely made me laugh. It was a clever little piece, very enjoyable, and I thought you did a great job with the different characters.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kestrel! I appreciate it.
Date: June 19, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Superheroes
I second that! Funny and cute. Didn't think Jim would get that intense about Call of Duty :)
Author's Response:
I suspect that whole Call of Duty thing might be one of those things that simmer on the back burner for Jim Halpert. Not something he'd pay much attention to until someone else brought it up, but then it would be a sharp and bitter memory of failure and humiliation. To which he would not react well. :)
Thanks for reading!
Date: June 19, 2008 04:04 pm Title: Superheroes
I LOVED THIS!! That was so much fun. Thank you! I don't watch Heroes or those other shows but it was still hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.