Date: January 02, 2009 08:26 am Title: all of my past mistakes and all my too little, too lates / Hot Girl
Cute conversation. I giggled at Jim's assessment of Dwight's thirsty Schrute babies.
Author's Response: Yay for giggling. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 02, 2009 06:47 am Title: all of my past mistakes and all my too little, too lates / Hot Girl
They're so cute- you continue to create voices that sound just perfectly right. Good work!
Author's Response: Yay! That's my main worry, so I'm glad I continue to succeed in your eyes. :D Thanks for the fabulous review!
Date: January 01, 2009 10:28 am Title: i'm just a little bit caught in the middle / Basketball
I have absolutely loved reading this so far. I can see Pam and Jim actually doing this, and you got their characters spot-on. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: I just got back from a vacation and I am continuing with my writing ay-sap. The hiatus is making me go crazy from JAM withdrawl! After I'm finished with Hot Girl, it's on to the angsty season... Oh, boy. Anyway, thank you so much for the awesome review! Please continue reading! :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2008 09:41 am Title: i'm just a little bit caught in the middle / Basketball
This continues to be very, very cute. It is all so in-character and the voices are perfect. Congrats on your first non-IM section as well!
Author's Response: Hooray for amazing reviews! Thanks so much. :D I'm actually writing Hot Girl right now, so get your excited faces on! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 12:47 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
I *really* like these and hope you continue.
Thanks for being amazing. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing/reading/being so sweet you give me diabetes! :D It means a lot, I'm definitely planning on writing more.
Date: December 22, 2008 07:52 pm Title: i'm just a little bit caught in the middle / Basketball
You continue to rock at the IMing.
KEEP GOING as you said yourself JAM makes the world go round. This is def JAM to me.
Author's Response: I'm going to have to agree with myself on that one. JAM does make the world go round. :D Thank you for your kind words - I will try to write Hot Girl as soon as possible, that one should be interesting!
Date: December 22, 2008 07:46 pm Title: the fight for you is all i've ever known / The Alliance
Why do you not have more reviews??
This is great!! It was a successful milestone! *feels for Jim for the billionth time* It still seems REAL! *love*
PBeesly: You’re so sweet I’m getting diabetes!
JHalpert: You’re so cheesy I could make you into one of my famous sandwiches. :-)
PBeesly: Lightbulb! I have a plan for the alliance scheme
Author's Response: Thanks, Snoz. Reviewing has been going a bit slowly, but I can't complain. I like doing the writing in general (although reviews are definitely a hefty bonus)! I'm so glad you felt like the non-IM part was real, I was very worried about that. Thanks again! :D
Date: December 21, 2008 08:44 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Sorry I haven't commented on this yet. I am really enjoying it and I remember each episode. You are very good at this kind of format.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're remembering the episodes, I was worried about leaving gaps and people not getting the quotes from the episodes. I actually write these as I am watching the episodes. :) Thank you so much for your review & your kind words!
Date: December 18, 2008 11:20 pm Title: babe i know that it's your soul but could you bottle it up? / Health Care
I'll tell you what this isn't - un-awesome. Ahh I love double negatives. Keep going Jamfan! Nothing beats a well written IM Jam fic nothing I say!!
PBeesly: What was the big surprise?
JHalpert: I'll tell you what it wasn't: existent.
JHalpert: Well, I have to go bang my head against the wall and remind myself that I will not have to work with Michael and Dwight forever.
PBeesly: As long as there is a God
Author's Response: Ah yes, I believe I am against my own TV schedule - I seem to go on hiatus whenever The Office is on and I seem to write fanfics when The Office goes on hiatus. Hopefully I can break the cycle! I have so much fun writing these (but it's even more fun to get complimented on them)! ;) Keep reading, reviewing, and... I can't think of anything else with an r. x) But anyway, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2008 07:17 pm Title: babe i know that it's your soul but could you bottle it up? / Health Care
I loved the Project Runway part, because I know Jenna loves that show in real life. Is that where you got it from? So cute!
Author's Response: Yes! Brownie points to you for noticing! I am a faithful reader of JFisch's blog & I started watching Project Runway because of her. I'd like to think that one time Jim heard Pam talking about it and he started watching it just to get close to her. <3 Thanks for the review!
Date: December 18, 2008 09:13 am Title: babe i know that it's your soul but could you bottle it up? / Health Care
Cute chapter. :) The STD parts were cute.
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much. I don't even know if ten STDs even exist, but I'm sure Jim could make some up. ;)
Date: December 18, 2008 09:11 am Title: can't get no love without sacrfice / Diversity Day
That was cute. I liked the jail part. Ha.
Author's Response: Yeah too bad Pam turned down Jim's offer to rot together. x] I very much appreciate that you took the time to review!
Date: December 18, 2008 09:10 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Aw, this was cute. The banter is great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Jim and Pam are already so perfect I'm always nervous I'm going to make it seem fakey, it's very hard to keep it real. Haha - I just seriously used to word keep it real. :D Thanks for the review!
Date: December 18, 2008 06:23 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
This continues to be really cute! Don't be a stranger, we need Jam fluff!
Author's Response: Of course we need fluff! It makes the world go round! for some reason the good JAM times have generated more angst fanfics, have you noticed? Well, I'm going to end my babbling by saying: Yay fluff and yay you for your support and reading! Thanks so much. :)
Date: December 18, 2008 06:01 am Title: babe i know that it's your soul but could you bottle it up? / Health Care
Hah! I love that he goaded her into a TWSS. This is a fun read!
Author's Response: Yes I had fun writing those! Now I know how the Office writers feel writing Michael. :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 18, 2008 05:57 am Title: can't get no love without sacrfice / Diversity Day
I love that he teased her about falling asleep on him. :)
Author's Response: That would be the Jim way to go. Guilty flirting = <3. Thanks for the review!
7 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2008 05:54 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Hee! This is really fun. Off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's fun enough to keep reading! That's what I'm going for! <3
Date: September 21, 2008 10:54 am Title: can't get no love without sacrfice / Diversity Day
Awesome. Not too wordy and it definitely fills in their thoughts. Very them- funny and clever but not too smartass-y. I adore how their humor is kind and positive, not too sarcastic.
I can definitely see these going on- they're short enough to be done between tasks.
Love it so far, hope reviewing keeps you going :)
Author's Response: Reviews most certainly do keep me going, especially reviews like that! I'm so glad you think I captured Jim and Pam well, and I will definitely strive to write more! =]
Date: September 21, 2008 07:09 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Welcome to the MMT Writers Guild! I like your first piece very much! You have the repartee down!
Author's Response: That means a lot coming from you, Vampiric, thank you so much. :D
Date: September 21, 2008 06:23 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Cute! Nice first effort; welcome to the fic family!
Author's Response: Happy to be here =]
Date: July 07, 2008 01:17 am Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
I love it, love it it, and I want more. Now.
...that's what she said.
Author's Response: that review was amazing, as if reviews aren't amazing enough. i know i've been on a hiatus for... oh, i don't know... forever? but i am going to start my IM conversations again! yay me! :D stick around & review, review, review!
Date: July 06, 2008 10:01 pm Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
Favourites:
PBeesly: Ooh! Ooh! Pick me! I know!
JHalpert: Yes, that pretty little lady at the desk.
PBeesly: Hey, don’t pick Angela!
JHalpert: I’m picking you, psycho.
Loooove subtle flirting. And:
JHalpert: I wish. He killed my beautiful fort with his phone.
PBeesly: Oh, please don’t fake cry, Jim.
^^ That just proves that JAM = Awesomeness.
It's fun isn't it? Told you it was fun. I'm excited now! Keep going! It'll be awesome.
Author's Response: since when did it need to be PROVEN that JAM = awesomeness? ;)
Date: July 05, 2008 07:35 pm Title: i can tell that we are gonna be friends / Pilot
good job!
Author's Response: thank you so much for being my first reviewer ever!rnrn*bows*