10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2011 06:16 pm Title: I swear I won't say anything
So happy to have you back! I really felt for Jim and Pam, and how much both of them are missing the closeness of the friendship they previously shared. I look forward to the journey ahead for everyone in this awesome AU!
Author's Response: It's nice to be back! I've really missed this. The writing and the reviews. Thanks for sticking with me this long.
Date: January 24, 2011 06:02 am Title: I swear I won't say anything
I'm glad you're on a roll! Great chap, italianfood--deliciously angsty. Great use of Grandma Halpert ;) The last two lines in particular killed me.
Author's Response: I've got more angst coming your way. The last two lines were actually a quick addition to that chapter. I've had this one written for a year, but just needed to write the chapters before it first. Thanks for reviewing, it's good to see readers from the first time around still here.
10 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2011 01:31 am Title: I swear I won't say anything
Ahhhh this is really good. I love that Jim's Grandma thinks that Jim and Pam are engaged and not Roy and Pam lol. I need more. Updateeee!
Author's Response: Reading consecutive comments from the same poster is by far my favorite thing. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Date: January 24, 2011 01:21 am Title: I was thinking out loud
Uh oooooooooooh. Jim's gonna get it lol. Yeah love where this is going!!!
Date: January 24, 2011 01:10 am Title: I can't do this without you
Noooo Pam. I actally just said that really oudly as I finished this chapter lol. I can't believe she is taking him back. LISTEN TO YOUR HEART lol
Date: January 24, 2011 01:02 am Title: I can't marry you
“Anytime, but you need to buy me dinner. First base isn’t free.” - lmfao that was hilarious.
Don't overthink things, and post. You're fab!
Date: January 24, 2011 12:49 am Title: I won't let go
Awww Jim is so cue. Defending Roy, just to spare Pam's feelings. I don't wanna hear from Roooooooy. This is fab x
Date: January 24, 2011 12:22 am Title: I could make you happier
Ooooooooooooh I don't know wy I hadn't started reading this before, but poor Jim. This is really interesting. I ove your AU's :p
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2011 12:37 pm Title: I could make you happier
Pleas keep up the good work...I'm not one for AU type stories, but this one is so good, you have me anxiously awaiting the next chapter....GOOD work!!
Author's Response: Well I hope to one day make you an AU type of person. Mostly because it's the only thing I ever seem to attempt. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 23, 2011 08:15 am Title: I swear I won't say anything
Another great chapter! I feel so bad for Jim! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, BluetimesTwo! More is on it's way very soon!
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2011 08:15 pm Title: I could make you happier
LOVE IT! I'm hooked! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. New chapter will be up later tonight!
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2011 08:11 pm Title: I was thinking out loud
How has no one reviewed this yet? I was so happy to see this updated! Poor Pam, right back where she started. I'm really interested to see how this story plays out, so please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm going to keep updating it this time. My lack of a full time job has really freed up some time for lots of writing again.
Date: August 11, 2010 08:16 am Title: I can't do this without you
I really like the unique angle of this story! Of course I HATE that Jim caved and not onlt helped Roy, pleading his case to Pam thereby crushing Jim's chances at least for now, but the fact that he was selling Roy's lie about missing the dinner when he knew the truth, Roy was completely neglectfl , just about killed me. I was so sad that after Pam was ready to face her feelings for Jim, he crushed her. I hope you are sticking with this because I can't wait to see where it goes next and I'm of course really hoping for Jim and Pam together by the end! REALY hope you update SOON!
9 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 06:47 pm Title: I can't do this without you
Ahhhh please please update this! Such an intestine dynamic, and I love your Jim and Pam relationship so much, I'm so curious to see where this goes. Love it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2010 10:22 pm Title: I can't do this without you
It's so good to see you writing! I hope you continue postingwith this one. It's something I've not seen before and it's interesting having Jim have to play the part from the middle, instead of just on Pam's side. I'm really looking forward to more!
Date: May 19, 2010 10:11 am Title: I could make you happier
Well, I'm a sucker for an AU and an unfinished WIP... Just promise me you'll finish this one and not leave me hanging like you are with the sequel to Dunder Hall. ;) Can't wait for more.
Date: May 18, 2010 07:41 pm Title: I can't do this without you
Oh boy. I had a feeling she would cave. Poor Pam, Jim needs to give her some kind of sign!
Date: May 18, 2010 04:26 pm Title: I can't do this without you
nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! omg no back to him....stupid jim why didnt him kiss her back?!?!? xD
hei girl great story! total drama and loving every minute of it ;)
Date: May 18, 2010 11:40 am Title: I can't do this without you
Roy and Jim are brothers!? I definitely haven't read this story before today, and I'm really mad at myself for not reading sooner! I'm so completely intrigued I was really bummed that there was no 'next' button after chapter 4. What I really like is that Pam is so open with her feelings for Jim, even if it's inner monologue. And she's in such a sticky situation, and I hope you continue to be inspired to write the rest of this very original and extremely interesting story. :)
Date: May 18, 2010 11:36 am Title: I can't do this without you
This chapter has successfully made this story far more complex, in a good but also slightly painful way.
This segment seems to mark a change in the overall direction of your story. Where before Jim seemed to be the "good" guy, suffering in silence, he now appears partially responsible for creating the status quo. The Roy/Jim dynamic is also much more real and understandable now, if also more uncomfortable. In fact, there is hardly a person in this chapter that the reader doesn't have reason to question or become upset with. For example, you paint Jim's father as sympathetic to Jim - or at least aware of his situation. But if so, why the fishing trip and why the silence during the brother's exchange? Tom is another unforeseen complication with a myopic perspective, and lovely Pam seems unsure, even fickle. In short, a bunch of intriguing moments.
I really look forward to seeing where you go with this. I've enjoyed some of your other AUs, so I have no doubt this one will be equally as fun to follow.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2010 06:18 am Title: I can't do this without you
Because you've been so kind and given us some Italian Food back I would be more than happy to feed your Review Monster.
How proud of Jim was I when he really let Roy know how wrong he was for taking Pam for granted. But how disappointed was I that Roy managed to weasel back and get Jim to call Pam to apologize for him. Sad face...
I look forward to what happens next.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2010 04:33 am Title: I can't marry you
Welcome back! It is good too see an update. I am hoping that there is more where that came from...
Author's Response: Thanks! I was so nervous that it had been so long that people wouldn't take to my crazy AUs again. Definitely more where that came from. I'll post another after work tonight.
Date: May 16, 2010 08:30 pm Title: I could make you happier
Ahh I'm so excited to see this story updated! And what an update it was!!! I really can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Me too! I promise I will not leave you hanging like last time.
Date: May 15, 2010 03:56 pm Title: I can't marry you
Holy cow, I was so happy to see you posting again! I love your stories and am so glad you're keeping this going :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Bayjb. I'll start posting some other stories once I get this one out of my head. This time one story at a time though.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2010 02:53 pm Title: I can't marry you
no wonder it takes so long for you to post something - because they're so perfect and you obsess over every detail! lol. although that is extremely annoying (because i don't get to read anything), i do appreciate it because every word of this story was amazing.
just fyi, that was all meant in the most joking and sarcastic manner - just to let you know that you're amazing and i love your writing even though i've never met you. anyways, this is fantastic. i'll be sitting right here at my computer waiting to read your story whenever you feel ready to post it, because i know it will be amazing.
great three chapters and i'm glad you posted them anyways. all of your writing is fantastic, i'm sure and i'll go read it over the summer and write you reviews proving just that!
Author's Response: Thank you for that amazing review. It really helps to hear that after not posting after forever. It's like the boost of confidence I needed. haha.