1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2018 04:23 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
This is achingly adorable. I really really enjoyed it!
Date: February 27, 2011 07:33 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I love this story. I've been thinking about this, but didn't remember what the title was or who wrote it, until someone rec'ed it on the forums... Glad they did. Adding to my faves, so I don't 'lose' it again!
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2011 06:45 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Very cuteeee!
Date: February 27, 2011 02:43 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Short but sweet story, good stuff please keep it up.
Date: February 27, 2011 03:36 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I really loved this story, and the two boxes Jim sent to Pam are the cutest thing. No wonder Pam opened the other box too! ;) I really liked how all played out, and him coming at the end made me squee. Good writing, and good fic!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 07:38 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Really, really nice! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate the review! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 04:27 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
AWW. That was sweet and adorable (I told this to my sister a bunch of times and she ended up saying "OMG JUST SHUT UP!") I loved it.
It's the way you showed everything that made it so nice. Like, how there were 2 boxes. Positive and Negative, because he wasn't there with her in New York. It's just really sweet.
You got each character well sorted out and I can actually imagine each scene unfolding... one by one. It's amazing.
The gifts that Jim gave Pam was also very nice, to help her through these times. You made Jim sound like one of those Perfect Fathers (which I am pretty sure he will be) and it was really nice.
I loved it and keep up the GRRRREAT work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the lovely compliments! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :o)
Date: August 22, 2008 10:08 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
i like this a lot
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks so much grammarfreak!
Date: August 22, 2008 08:30 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Loved this! Most of the time I cringe when people try to write letters in character, but you've really got Jim here and I could totally picture him writing those exact words to Pam. Great job :)
Author's Response: I'm very glad my writing wasn't cringe-inducing. I always worry about staying in character, but i'm so happy you felt it worked. Thank you so much for reading :o)
Date: August 22, 2008 01:58 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Finally someone gives Pam a reason to be drawn closer to Jim while they’re separated. It’s been so gloomy around here lately. Loved this story. Thanks for the happy thoughts-Great Job.
Author's Response:
I agree. I love the authors who've been writing the gloom, but it's just not my thing. Pam has never struck me as the kind of girl that would get so lost in her art and decide she's too good for Jim...she loves him way too much.
okay, enough from me. But thank you for reading, and I'm glad I could share the joy of jam in love :o)
Date: August 22, 2008 06:13 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
This was great! :) One of the best oneshots I've read this summer by far. You captured them so well down to the little details. Looking forward to reading more from you soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much. This is seriously one of the nicest reviews I've gotten...you're too kind. I really appreciate you reading and sharing your thoughts. :o)
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 09:27 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
That was an awesome story. I got a little teary like Pam did. I love his note to her in the negative box. "I'll get you next time." Adorable. Really, a beautiful story, I loved it. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response:
you are so very welcome :o)
thanks for reading and for all the lovely compliments!
Date: August 21, 2008 08:25 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
That so was adorable :) I especially loved Jim's letter to Pam. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you so much! :o)
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:04 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
That was sooooooooo cute, I can see him with a phillies onesie all excited aw
Author's Response:
boys getting excited over kids is kind of my weakness
thanks for reading!
Date: August 21, 2008 07:23 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
So cute!! I love the letter and everything...almost makes me wish it was positive! Great job!
Author's Response:
and that my dear, is exactly what I was going for.
thanks so much! :o)
8 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 06:17 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Jim's gifts were so thoughtful. And him coming to NY to be with her was the sweetest thing ever. Really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: thank you! I'm so glad it turned out to be enjoyable. :o)
Date: August 21, 2008 05:09 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I am such a dorky softie... I loved it.
Author's Response:
dorky is the best kind of softie. :oP
thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 02:53 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
This was so sweet. You did a great job on both of Jim's notes. I like how the negative note still tells Pam that a pregnancy would've been OK with him. Don't worry, I'll get you next time. It's such a great way to let her know that he's really in this relationship 100%. And the positive note is so reassuring and full of love. They both are Jim's voice. I like the gifts he included in the positive box: the Phillies onesie and the baby name book show how excited he is to have a child with Pam; the prenatal vitamins are Jim to a T - he'd start taking care of them right away.
Very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love reviews that tell me exactly what people liked...it's very helpful. I really appreciate it! :o)
Date: August 21, 2008 02:15 pm Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Gah. That was so compelling. A non-proposal that kicks ass, even. I cannot wait for Jam!Babies for real.
Author's Response:
me either lisa my dear. I've been wanting Jam!babies since like, season 1. haha.
I thought you should know, my Jim's bulletin board desktop is very inspiring ;o)
thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: August 21, 2008 11:50 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I really enjoyed this story! Great job!
Regards,
B
Author's Response: thanks so much! :o)
Date: August 21, 2008 11:37 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
So cute, I just wanna cry.
Author's Response:
I totally read that in a Kelly voice, it made me laugh.
thanks! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 10:33 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Hey, how nice to see something new from you! Different is good. I loved this. I could see sweet Jim doing exactly this. I really loved the note he left in the "negative box." Glad you posted it. :)
Author's Response:
It makes me very happy to know my work was missed. It's tough to get back in that groove again, but I think I'm finding it so hopefully you'll be seeing new and different from me more often.
Thank you so much for the kind words :o)
5 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:41 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Awww, I really enjoyed this story :) Great idea on the negative and positive boxes and I absolutely loved Jim's closing line "Promise me you'll never get a mom haircut." HA!
Author's Response:
mom haircuts are an epidemic.
thanks for the review!
Date: August 21, 2008 08:26 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I completely love this! Wonderful work!
Author's Response: thanks so much Jenn! I really appreciate it :o)
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:21 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
This was super sweet. How very Jim to make up two boxes for the possible outcomes. And the fears he confessed to her thinking maybe a 'little life in Scranton' wouldn't be enough was very poignant. Must echo the love for the 'Esteban' detail too :) Nice job!
Author's Response:
I thought the fears would be important to touch on...you can tell that's where the Jim arc was/is heading. I'm glad you're an Esteban fan...haha.
Thanks for the review! :o)