1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2020 10:45 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
This is lovely - a charming portrait of a dramatic, fraught relationship settling into normalcy and regular life. After all that, it does seem like something Jim and Pam would relish and have earned the right to.
Date: April 01, 2010 04:16 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
You are SUCH a good writer! Since you posted your new story, I've been re-reading your old ones. They are all splendiferous!
Date: August 27, 2009 02:27 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Came across this looking at NanReg's favorites. I love it, too! It is so sweet that the everyday things are the ones that Jim loves the most. Love the end.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2009 10:27 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
The story was so, so sweet and endearing! I loved how you showed Jim and Pam are settling into their relationship and becoming more familiarized with each other. I'm agree that Jim doesn't care what Pam wears because he's just so happy that they're together at last. Great job!
Date: March 09, 2009 06:03 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
I have to say, I just read this again, and it is without a doubt one of the best JAM fanfics in existence. Period.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much. That's pretty much the nicest thing you could say to me :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 03:47 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
This is so lovely. Very in character and great moments that you've captured. It's very "slice o' life" - good job!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much Crystalized. I'm so pleased you find this in character, I did worry the excessive fluff might just take over. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Perfect, I can so see this, and Jim being all dreamy lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a lovely review, glad you found this realistic :)
Date: September 14, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Guh. This was lovely fluff. And a sweet thought for those of us who are past caring if our underwear matches. I bet they both walked around in a state of 'pinch me, I must be dreaming' for quite a while. I would.
Author's Response: Thanks so much lisahoo. Yeah, I think their early relationship was just full of little 'pinch me' moments :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 01:40 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Absolutely. Yes. I adore it. Perfect. Wonderful. Molto Bene!
Just, seriously, I loved it. This embodies them so perfectly.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I love that you loved this, it pretty much makes my day to hear people enjoyed this.
Date: September 14, 2008 10:23 am Title: Car Crash Underwear
oh, I forgot to mention... I don't know if you intended it or not, and feel free to ignore my comment, but the quote from the story you put up on the main page gives away the entire fic. Or summarizes it? I don't know how to put it without sounding critical, which this absolutely isn't- merely a comment. Still loving it, btw ♥
Author's Response: You know, I totally know what you mean. That line I used in the summary has been in my head for weeks and I sort of structured the story around it so when I came to post it, I just automatically used it as the summary. But of course the story I ended up writing doesn't actually use that scenario until right near the end. I suppose if it draws people in to read this it's ok, but I totally see what you mean. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: September 14, 2008 10:03 am Title: Car Crash Underwear
Adorable. And so true about the matching undies (I tend to call them 'knickers' :) ).
Author's Response: Lol, I call them knickers too. Thanks :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:32 am Title: Car Crash Underwear
This was really, really lovely. You definitely know these two well, because I can completely see both of them behaving this way. Especially Jim, we all know how sentimental he is.
So well done, in fact, that I will absolutely be checking to see what other stories you've written.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for such lovely comments. I'm so pleased you think this is realistic for Jim and Pam because it's always worrying writing pure fluff that it'll stray into being too unrealistic. Yeah, I have such a soft spot for Sentimental!Jim.
Date: September 14, 2008 07:51 am Title: Car Crash Underwear
I love that he's so gobsmacked at the idea that they are finally together. I think that's incredibly accurate. Beautiful job creating and sustaining a joyful tone throughout!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for such lovely comments. I'm glad you found this accurate, I totally imagine Jim being a bit in awe of his dreams finally coming true. Bless him. Thanks again :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 11:37 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Really enjoyed this. Loved all the details you slipped in there.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review :) I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: September 13, 2008 11:32 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Completely love this! I can totally see Jim acting like this in the first weeks of their new relationship and it just feels right. Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I have such a soft spot for sentimental!Jim, so I'm glad you found this realistic.
8 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
You've really captured the joy of new love in this. I love being able to read about the early part of Jim and Pam's relationship that we didn't get to see on the show. Especially when it's written this well. Great job. I've got warm fuzzies all over.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for such lovely comments Blanca. I love early Jim/Pam too, it's just so much fun to write, plus because we never saw it, you can pretty much do what you want with it. Thanks again :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 08:29 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
I'm in the middle of rewatching Season 3 right now, and this is just what I needed to help counteract the emo awfulness of S3 JAM. I love the first dozen paragraphs, how there's no dialogue and just descriptions of all the love between them. Very nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing Corking. I'm really glad you picked out those paragraphs because they were a bit of a departure from my usual style, I'm glad you liked them. And yes, s3 should not be rewatched without happy fic or s4 clips on hand for when it gets to be too much :)
5 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
This fic made me feel SO happy :) Thanks for the goosebumps and the giggles!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review. I'm glad this story made you smile, because I had fun writing it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 07:37 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
shootingstars, this was divine, and I'm adding it to my favorites. I loved every word, every image. Wishing your soccer team a winning streak and your muse an endless supply of caffeine to keep her awake : )
Author's Response: NanRed, have I told you lately that you're awesome? Well, you are. Thanks so much for your comments, I always appreciate that you take the time to review. And I'm beyond thrilled that this makes it into your favourites :) You keep reading, I'll keep writing :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 07:30 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Oh, so sweet. I totally had a smile plastered to my face as I read it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) This is exactly the kind of reaction I was hoping for, because I had a goofy smile the whole time I was writing it.
Date: September 13, 2008 06:03 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
This was very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Sweet is exactly what I was hoping for, glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 05:25 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
GORGEOUS. And terribly sweet. Any time you describe Jim's voice, I pretty much have the same reaction as Pam, haha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much flonkerton. I don't do a lot of out and out fluff so this was a fun to write, I'm so glad people have enjoyed it. And yeah. Jim's sexy voice should be carefully rationed, I can't be held responsible for my reaction to it in high doses.
Date: September 13, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Car Crash Underwear
Aw, I felt really warm and fuzzy after reading that! Your writing makes me want to have that. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely comments. Warm and fuzzy is exactly what I was going for. Glad you liked :)