Date: January 05, 2017 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done. We don't need any surprises, such as a guy in Pam's room or Pam drunk, etc. This story was realistic and respected the relationship!
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2008 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Really loved it!
Date: October 26, 2008 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your story, and I love that Jim was finally able to verbalize what he needed to Pam. It doesn't come easily to him.
Many years ago Mr. Jazz and I did the LDR thing and it's hard to stay in sync some days. Being able to just say "I need this right now because I've had a crappy day" without the other person wondering about it is a great help.
Great job.
Date: October 25, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
As someone who did the long-distance thing for a while, I can say for certain that you capture something truthful here. Really, really nice.
Author's Response: Thanks, nqllisi. That's precisely what I was going for here, and I'm glad you thought it was nice. :)
Date: October 25, 2008 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Am I the only one who's noticed that we've NEVER heard Pam utter those 3 little words to him! They're too sneaky! Love this fic, I've read it like 5 times now!
Author's Response: No, I've noticed it too. I want to see them say it to each other one of these days...
P.S. You're not the only one who has read it over 5 times...I keep reading it over and over again, too! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2008 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: October 24, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was perfect. Everybody needs reassurance in any relationship. I could feel the tone that you set when they said they loved each other. Really great!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your review!!! I'm glad you could feel the tone, that's what I was shooting for.
Date: October 24, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great postscript to the episode! I'm willing to bet there's plenty of times one of them calls the other just to hear those three words and make the seperation tolerable for a while longer.
Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I agree that this would have probably happened between them, I just wish they'd put them in the episodes. I miss my JAM :(
9 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2008 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was really touching, malaz. “I need to hear you say it.” Never in my life did I think I’d hear those words come out of her mouth, let alone be directed to me...My voice drops, and I match her tone. “Say it again.” I was't expecting that. You knocked the wind out of me. Such a simple concept and one that I can see going through Jim's mind. I hope his girl comes back soon!
BTW, nice job : )
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I knocked the wind out of you :) rnrnWhat do you think...should I write one of these random oneshots after every episode? It's working out pretty well, so far...
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am SO excited about them watching The West Wing, it kills me :) This was amazing by the way, I love how he so badly needed to hear her say those magic words =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Hannah_Halpert! I'm glad you liked it!rn
rnMaybe I need to start watching The West Wing now...