Date: December 22, 2008 12:22 pm Title: Your Ex-Lover is Dead
Wow. That's all I have to say. I like that he's more aggressive with her and she is as well with him. I wasn't surprised she had some lingering problems with Roy but I hope they've moved beyond it now and can focus on their future. Smutty filled future. Cannot wait for the next part. Love this fic.
Author's Response: Oh yes, I think Pam is finally moving on and realizing that she has a good thing going for her right now. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2008 07:28 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
possibly my very favorite jim/pam story, made even better by your great taste in music and love for j. crew. keep writing! i can't get enough.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Date: December 19, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Brighter Discontent
Sorry, I don't have a lot of time to review right now, but just want to let you know that I love the story. I love that Pam is conflicted, it makes the story so much more interesting when there are two compelling options, rather than Roy always being an idiot and Jim being a total hero.
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for the review. It's always great to hear what readers are thinking- I'm a sucker for people telling me what needs fixing and what works so, yes. Thank you!
I love David Denman. I think he's such a great actor and I feel like Roy deserved to be shown in a different light than what we have seen on the actual show. :)
Date: December 19, 2008 05:38 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
I feel so repetitive with my reviews, but I can’t help it. This chapter was amazing. It was HOT, it was FUNNY, and it was CUTE… It was just all kinds of awesome. I love how Pam got upset about Roy; it really suited her character to have her do that.
God, you’re an amazing writer and I never want this story to end, I want to see them move in together and become teachers lol =)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Damn Roy always getting to Pam. I should get all soap opera-ey and send him down an elevator shaft. Haha. Just kidding.
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2008 03:37 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Been reading all along, just haven't gotten around to reviewing. Love this story! They've still got the Jim and Pam dynamic, while still being believable in a completely different context. Very cool. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot that you took the time to tell me what you think, and I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. :)
Date: December 19, 2008 09:55 am Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
I love Neruda's poetry, and I love the regular updates to this story! I felt a little bit like Kelly in this chapter because I wanted more details on sex with Jim! For first time smut, this was really good, so keep it up. (That's what she said!)
Your characterization of Roy is very interesting to me. I never really thought about it before, and I'm surprised the writers on the Office haven't entertained this idea either, but he does totally seem like the type of guy who would want to get married just for the sake of being married. Any chance of an awkward run-in between Roy and the new S.O. and JAM?
Also, thanks for your response to my last review :D They say that the 2nd day after your wisdom teeth are taken out is when swelling is at its peak. So yesterday, I looked like a chubby chipmunk, and today I just look like a chipmunk. I am feeling a lot better, and it helps to have good stories to read such as yours.
Author's Response: I love Neruda, too, and I spent forever and a day trying to find the perfect poem that would speak from Jim's heart and express all that he wanted to say. I kept thinking, "Hmm... Neruda, too cliche? Has it been used too much?" But that poem is amazing, so I hope it worked out well. :) I agree that Roy totally just wants to settle down, and find somebody to do his laundry and have dinner on the table when he gets home, which is why Pam is just so much better off without him. Jim allows her to be her own person, which is really something special. I'm still entertaining the idea of an awkward run-in with Roy. I'm also trying to figure out if I want to bring Pam's parents along for the ride, so we'll see. ;) I'm glad to hear you are feeling better!
Date: December 19, 2008 08:11 am Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Sorry I am so sporadic in posting. I love a drunk Pam and totally can understand her being upset about Roy. Kelly and Angela are just so great in this story.
Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad to hear you're still with us, and thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying Kelly and Angela as they are definitely my favorite characters to write. I almost want to start off a fanfic just about those crazy chicas. Haha.
Date: December 19, 2008 06:43 am Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
I think what I like best about your depiction of this Pam and Jim relationship is just how...normal it is. That it's about the little things and that the little things don't need to be perfect or overly schmoopy or anything. They just are and the fit and it makes the relationship come off real and fun and so very enjoyable to read about. Your dialogue flows really well and I loved the Kelly/Angela banter in this chapter as well. I think the touch about Roy(and ha! to kelly bringing it back to When Harry met Sally again!) was also interesting and I think Pam's emotions were spot-on. I'm curious if there will be a meet up with Roy again in the future. Also curious if we will see more about Pam's relationship with her parents. Either way, obviously looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm still iffy on bringing Pam's parents in the story (a.k.a. I'm honestly just really nervous about writing two brand new characters so late in the story, and being lazy, haha) ... but at the same time, I think Pam has come to realize that Angela, Kelly and Jim are her little family now, which happens, I guess. You grow up, move out of your parents house, and find your own gang that takes care of you. However, I'm still entertaining the idea. It would be interesting to see just how different Pam is from her actual family and discover what caused such a bitter separation between the two parties. And I'm so glad you find Jim and Pam's relationship normal, because that's been my main concern throughout this entire story. I want it to be relatable, not some fluffy fairy tale that just isn't realistic at all. Not that those aren't fun to read, just that's not necessarily where I wanted this story to go. So, thank you! And I love writing chapters that include Kelly/Angela. I don't see nearly enough fanfics out there that shows Pam interacting with fun girlfriends that she's actually close to, so I thought I'd try something a little different. ;)
Date: December 19, 2008 06:07 am Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
You know, Pam's reaction to Roy's engagement and her subsequent cute drunkness is something I really love. I mean, I think it would have totally turned me off to this fic in general if it had went something like this: "Hey, Jim's the most perfect boyfriend in existence, is great in bed, and I love him so much! Roy who!?" so yeah, really loved how you handled that. (What? No! I'm not bitter because I've read one too many fics like that. Why do you ask!? ;) Oh, by the by, you are very good at the smut thing. Wow. So hot and lovely and just.. hee. I love Angela too. And Kelly, god she's hilarious. And for some reason, the last line just cracked me up. I could SO picture that, hehe. Awesome job indeed and I love you so much for giving me something to read/look forward to when I get off work at 7 in the morning. :D
Author's Response: Coming home at 7 in the morning? Yikes. Those are some long nights you're working there, huh? I have to be at work at 5:30 tomorrow morning and I'm not looking forward to it. I can't remember the last time I've ever been up that early. Anyhow, thank you so much for the review. My main concern with this story is to make sure I keep it real and somewhat relatable because, let's face it, true love isn't always this magical fairy tale, right? And I'm thinking- who wouldn't be ticked off if someone who proposed to you TWICE turned around and got engaged a mere four months after promising you the world- Seriously? No matter how good Jim is in bed, that would completely suck. Poor Pam. :( So I'm glad you're still enjoying the story and that I haven't turned you off so far. :) And I'm glad to hear you think I'm an okay writer with the whole smut thing. It's a little uncomfortable when writing at first, but then it just sort of... Happens, I guess? haha. Thank you for another awesome review!
Date: December 19, 2008 03:30 am Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
this is my favorite! Drunk Pam, a starved-for-sex-details Kelly and Angela--it all had me giggling.
Date: December 18, 2008 10:49 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Awh I love how Jim took care of Pam
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2008 10:25 pm Title: Brighter Discontent
God I usually avoid AU stuff, especially stuff that doesn't take place anywhere near Dunder-Miffin .. but holy crap, I love this so much, I've been reading it since the first chapter. You do such a great job with it, I love seeing another chapter up. =)
Date: December 18, 2008 09:40 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
:D I always love drunk Pam. and that was excellent smut. I actually understand why Pam would be mad about Roy getting married. But she's definitely got it so much better without him.
lol Pam loves Jim's penis
Author's Response: Haha, Pam so loves Jim's... parts. I would too if somebody got me four times in one night, what the hell? That boy sure is talented, that's all I have to say.
Date: December 18, 2008 09:37 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Reviews as anti-drugs, eh? Well I mean I don't want people to turn to drug addiciton....
I liked it :) Jim being so thoughtful and getting her food when he was there. And Angela/Kelly/Pam is just awesome. Lovely job! Can't wait to see more.
PS I love that you are accompanying your story with a soundtrack! So great!
Author's Response: Ah, I always believed a good story should always be provided with a decent soundtrack, so I hope you are enjoying the music throughout the chapters. And thank you for the review! You have officially saved me from jumping ship and turning to drugs. Of course, my only drug is espresso and as far as I know, it's still legal... haha.
Date: December 18, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Every chapter is more impressive than the last. It's so exciting to see a new chapter everyday. YEA! Always love drunk Pam. I’m almost shocked that 'Roy getting married quickly' wasn’t an actual story line in the show. It's hard to believe that your Roy hasn’t called to rub it in her face. I guess we'll see!
Author's Response: Thanks for the amazing review; I'm glad you're enjoying the chapters as they come along. Drunk Pam is too adorable and so much fun to write. :) I, too, am surprised Roy hasn't already moved on in the actual show. Maybe the writers will read this and steal the idea?? Haha.
Date: December 18, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Well I think Jim handles Pam's worship of his penis very well indeed. And I think there should be more of it.
I love the Angela/Pam friendship in this story. I'd love to see more Angela/Jim interaction. She's got such a great bullshit detector, I feel like Jim would be kind of afraid of her and I'd love to see him getting the Angela stamp of approval.
Oh, and I can't remember if I said this before, but can Jim and Pam please go for brunch at 11 City Diner? (South Loop, 11th and Wabash).
Author's Response: I have a feeling you will be getting both of those wishes very soon as far as Angela/Jim interaction and 11 City Diner. The next chapter I've mapped out has Jim and Pam eating breakfast and I already had a place in my head, but after checking out 11 City online, I have decide to move them over there instead. Just for you! You have me wanting to go there for brunch this weekend. If only the weather wasn't so awful.
Date: December 18, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
I was just in Chicago, but I couldn't find me an indy!Jim. I want one by the way, maybe you could just type a script for my boyfriend. haha I love this story. By far one of my favourites.
Author's Response: Where's indy!Jim? I want indy!Jim! Sure, I will script out your boyfriend for you. Perhaps one of Jim's friends? :P
Date: December 18, 2008 07:47 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Aww poor Pam. But that's the sign of a real keeper if he holds your hair. Glad to hear Roy's engaged so he's not a threat. Of course, more smut please :) Cannot wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you! I honestly don't know anyone in my life who would hold my hair if I started hurling over my kitchen sink, and I seriously doubt I would be that brave myself so, yes, Jim is a real keeper. Haha.
Date: December 18, 2008 07:34 pm Title: Cheer Me Up, Thank You
Not gunna lie, and sorry if this is completely TMI.... but I have a good feeling I'd love Jim's penis, too.
I'm just sayin' lol
I love this story completely. How Jim's belongings are slowly mixing with Pam's, how Pam went out and got completely plastered when she found out about Roy, Kelly's urging Pam to tell her about how Jim is in bed... Loved it all. You = awesome.
Author's Response: Your review = awesome times awesome. Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. And no, definitely not TMI, especially since this chapter made me feel really dirty since it required me to think about Jim's... business quite a bit... Maybe that's TMI. haha.
Date: December 18, 2008 01:56 pm Title: Break the Ice
I tell ya, this is the second fanfic I've read today that has the song "Pictures of You" in it (:
it's a good thing though, 'cause I'm STILL loving this story.
Author's Response: Really? Aw, love The Cure. I'm glad you're still enjoying it!
Date: December 18, 2008 01:56 pm Title: Break the Ice
AH! You stop there!? The smut was very well done...but I'm feeling unsatisfied ;) You have nothing to worry about in that department. Well written, not cheesy or too hardcore...perfect balance.
I did have a question though(again haha...sorry I'm the one that keeps nitpicking about little things in your story, it's honestly just genuine curiosity) Would it be feasible for Jim and Pam to own a nice apartment in Chicago on just two high school teacher's salaries? I was just wondering what the logistics of that would be. I know that a really nice house in Philly, like those beautiful brownstones, are upwards of a million dollars. Craziness. While reading I was just wondering what it would be like for them in Chicago.
I was definitely mad at Jim for that whole scene in the car. Jerk. haha. But I am in love with English teacher Jim. He is my absolute favorite AU portrayal so kudos :) The book of poetry was poignant and charming at the same time. What I wouldn't give to have a guy put together a book of poetry that reminded him of me! A girl can dream right? Keep this story coming! It was such a wonderful post-finals gift to see that you updated!
(PS~ Is it the Muppet Christmas Carol?! If so, I LOVE that movie!!! I commend you on your good taste hee)
Author's Response: As a shout out to you in the next chapter, that question will totally be dealt with. Leave it up to Kelly to bring Pam back to reality. ;) I love the thought of Jim as an English teacher, especially since it's supposedly one of Krasinski's secret ambitions had he not gone into acting. Sexy. Glad to hear finals are finally over. Hurray! Also- YES! I was definitely watching a Muppet Christmas Carol. It just isn't the holidays without the muppets.
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2008 09:52 am Title: Break the Ice
good job
Date: December 18, 2008 04:32 am Title: Break the Ice
Hey, I have like this petrifying fear of even writing smut ever. So you already are awesome for even having the courage to do it and trust me, it was aaaaaamazing. /Kelly. I really loved this entire thing, honestly. Just the playfulness and the emotion and their declaration of love to each other, aaah, so them? I've decided that this is totally how Jim and Pam would be if they were not.. Jim and Pam. If that makes any sense, lol. But yeah. Awesome job, per usual you, and I obviously cannot wait for more. One day I'll post a comment about how much all of this sucks. Watch. ;) (Also, Dangerous is one of my favorite songs, I can't help it, it's so addicting! So yeah, bonus points indeed, hehe!)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, your have made me feel so much better about myself now. And "Dangerous" is addicting. The song was constantly in my head after I heard it on the radio the other day and I had to figure out a way to bring it into the story. Haha.
Date: December 17, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Break the Ice
hey no it wasn't bad smut at all. You really don't give yourself enough credit. I really liked that they just fully talked about it before and like asked each other if they wanted to. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you didn't think it was too terrible. :) I am my own worst critic, I guess.
Date: December 17, 2008 08:22 pm Title: Break the Ice
Awesome chapter. Definitely glad we're getting some smut. More please! I love Milwaukee too, great place. Really loving this fic. Cannot wait for the next part.