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Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2008 06:57 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

Lol that was great and really well thought out. I actually went back and reread the whole story. How did I not mention that the first time? :)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 10:19 am Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

OMG you wrote this??? I read it such a long time ago and had no idea! This is one of my favorite stories -- loved how happy and enthusiastic Jim was about planning the wedding (LOL three cake testings and begging to come to the florist). I had an inkling that it was for his wedding...something about the several "oh Roy wouldn't have done that" comments. And Jim's conversations with Mark. And the big revealing ending!! *happy sigh* So yeah, I really love this story. LOL ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 08:33 am Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

This is a wonderful story.  The twist, for me, came completely unexpected.  I was dialed in for a tiny bit of angst and Jim planning another man's wedding...  Even up to the very last minute with mention of Roy's waverunners... then all of a sudden, no, here they are, getting married.

So well done, really well done.  The only small hiccup in it was the part with Roy, which seemed unnecessary.  But otherwise, a fabulous fic.  Great job!! 

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 07:35 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

Loved it! Something always told me it was Jim from the beginning, because I'm a fluff and I read too much fanfiction, but it didn't make the actual wedding any less rewarding. ;) Loved it! The only tiny peeve I have about it is the fact that Jim didn't help her from the beginning, because he seems like the kind of guy who'd do that.

Either way, though, it was brilliant and perfect for a rainy morning. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 06:38 am Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

I liked it and the reveal was good. The only thing I scratched my head about was the fact that Pam was doing all the planning alone at first because I'd think Jim would so be into helping her. Nice job!

Author's Response:

Honestly he would want to help her from the beginning. But if you notice, it was hesitation on Jim's part and I wanted to add a part in discussion why he didn't...mostly because she didn't let him or think he'd be interested.

But I might write another story that ties into this one that explains it. =-)

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 05:24 am Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

aw, when it was jim standing next to her at the altar i started to cry :) it was so cute, great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! That means alot to me. =-D

 

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 09:44 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

Awww, fluff.  Love it so much!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 08:35 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

Oh! You totally tricked me. I had to read it again once I knew. Very cute!


Author's Response: Then I was successful. =-) Thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 07:44 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

What a cute idea for a story!  I was so happy to see that it was their wedding he was helping plan - I was afraid it was Pam/Roy!  Didn't like Roy barging in at the receiption but I was glad he didn't do it at the church. Totally understandable though.

Author's Response: Yeah I felt Pam was really bogged down planning her wedding to Roy and Jim wasn't going to let that happen, even if she expected nothing from him.

Reviewer: Petty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 07:13 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

I loved this! I was wary of him helping her at first, because how much torture can one man take? LOL

But it just worked, especially as it helped open Pam's eyes. So great! definately write more!



Author's Response:

This was a tester. Now Im inspired!

 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 05:24 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

very sweet.

Author's Response: THANKS!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 05:02 pm Title: The Pink Wedding Planner

Awwww, this is so sweet! I love the "reveal" that it is their wedding, and not her wedding to Roy. You've got their banter and their friendship down beautifully.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was so worried people would get that at the beginning. Its good to know it was hidden a bit.

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