8 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2009 09:31 pm Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
These were all so good, even this one. While reading another fic where they were doing it in Jim's bed on the first date all I could think of was, "Did Jim have time to change the sheets?" Great job!
Author's Response: thank you for your kind review, kaystar! yeah, i've read a lot of fics like that and i think exactly the same thing. makes me feel a little icky, haha. thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2009 03:15 pm Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
OI. LOVE IT, and the whole series so far! Sadly, I know that I would not have been able to kick him out though, haha ;)
Author's Response: thank you, IThinkWeBrokeHisBrain! i am so glad you like the series thus far. and i'm with you... i'd have a lot of trouble kicking out either j kras or jim halpert :P
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2009 12:48 pm Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
oh, ouch.
I'll be fine, though (:
Author's Response: oh no! i hope i haven't caused any permanent damage, Mixedbreedgirl :). thanks for your review as always!
Date: April 21, 2009 10:22 am Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
P.S. Thanks for the clarification about Karen! I suspected it was something like that. For me it makes this less unhappy and more...sexy.
Author's Response: no worries, NanReg. i would hate to upset one of my favorites! i knew i could count on you to find the (sexy) silver lining :)
Date: April 21, 2009 09:18 am Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
Hmmm, I'm thinking this is the evening of the day 'The Job' took place... I admit I've always been a bit squicked by the idea of Jim and Pam having sex on the first date if he'd slept with Karen the night before or that morning. Haven't read any of the chapters before today, and I really like this fic!
Author's Response: you are 100% right, variella. i realize now that the timeline could really be ambiguous, but the night of "the job" is exactly what i was thinking of. i'm the same way with the whole first date thing. thank you for your kind review and i'm so glad you like the fic!
Date: April 21, 2009 07:53 am Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
Hmmm...I'm intrigued, josephine. Not happy is certainly correct. Still well written though. What brought this on? I can't imagine our boy, Jim, would cheat on his one and only. I'm going to visit Alphabet Soup again ; )
Author's Response: i realize that there is some ambiguity in terms of timeline-- thanks for bringing it to my attention. this chapter takes place the day that jim turns down the corporate job, so he would have been with karen in the morning but would have been on a date with pam that night. i'm going to go back and add this to the description. thanks for working through it :) and you know i'd never say a bad thing about our boy jim!
Date: April 21, 2009 07:02 am Title: debris, or pam learns about the detriments of knowing the (almost) enemy
this may not be happy, but i like it. b/c honestly Jim was being a horrible person at that time in his life and he would have had sex with Karen that morning... and then tried to get with Pam that night. and if i were her, that'd be hard for me to swallow too. ok i think my review might be longer than your fic, i just needed to say nice job. :)
Author's Response: thanks for your review, rulesofjinx! i'm so glad you enjoyed it. yeah, i think that jim had a lot going on during that time, and considering that he'd been holding these feelings for pam inside of him for years it doesn't surprise me that it would go as far as it did on the first date. if i were pam, i wouldn't be stopping him either ;) thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2009 05:51 pm Title: alphabet soup, or pam learns about the benefits of having an artist's eye
ha, that is very niiiiiiiice (:
Author's Response: hahaha! thanks, Mixedbreedgal. you have been such a faithful reviewer of this story, and i really appreciate that :)
Date: April 17, 2009 08:19 am Title: alphabet soup, or pam learns about the benefits of having an artist's eye
"A" for "Awesome" :)
Author's Response: and "b" is for "best reviewer ever", which is you! :)
Date: April 13, 2009 07:58 pm Title: constraint, or jim learns about the benefits of hypothetical situations
omg, again.
you're good, dude (:
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 07:54 pm Title: constraint, or jim learns about the benefits of hypothetical situations
omg, again.
you're good, dude (:
Author's Response: :) thanks again for such a lovely review, Mixedbreedgirl!
Date: April 13, 2009 07:26 pm Title: constraint, or jim learns about the benefits of hypothetical situations
Mmm 55 words of gloriousness. I love these little snippets. Keep 'em comin; :) (aaaaaaand TWSS)
Andplusalso, I counted myself, and I came up with 55 words on the dot.
Author's Response: beautiful TWSS! thanks for your review, stjoespirit04. and thanks for counting the words in this chapter, because there is an epic battle happening between mtt and my microsoft word counter, and we all must know where our alliances lie. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 01:05 pm Title: delicate, or jim learns about the benefits of lead feet
really cute (:
Author's Response: thanks, Mixedbreedgirl-- i appreciate the review and the rating!
Date: April 13, 2009 12:22 pm Title: delicate, or jim learns about the benefits of lead feet
josephine, so nice to have this tasty little sumpin' sumpin' from you. Very good use of words :)
Author's Response: thank you, nanreg! i feel like no matter how long i'm away, you're always the first to know when i come back :)
Date: December 28, 2008 09:06 pm Title: radiohead, or jim learns about the benefits of search engines
These are great! I'm loving this series, you're amazing at painting such cool pictures with so few words! Oh, and my OCD took over and I counted a couple of the stories and MTT is definitely the incorrect one!
Author's Response: thank you so much for your kind review, nandance! i appreciate the compliment :) and i am SO GLAD that you counted a couple of them too, it makes me feel better about my math skills, haha. glad to hear that i can count in the double digits!
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2008 07:06 pm Title: personal foul, or pam learns about the benefits of extracurricular activity
Welcome back, josephine! I just had the absolute delight of reading all four of these little gems, and they are ridiculously fun. Bless you and your dirty mind :) I only wish they were longer (so greedy). More?
Author's Response: nanreg! so good to see one of my favorite MTT friends :) oh, my dirty mind. i'm working on cleaning it up, but it's quite a process, i'll tell ya. thanks for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2008 06:57 pm Title: radiohead, or jim learns about the benefits of search engines
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
Author's Response: hahaha! thank you for your very precise, one-word review, hannah_halpert!
Date: December 27, 2008 01:38 pm Title: fifth date, or jim learn about the benefits of yoga classes
I really love these. You pack a lot of heat into 55 words my dear!
Author's Response: thank you so much, lovefool! it's fun seeing what all i get can into the word limit ;)
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2008 11:10 am Title: radiohead, or jim learns about the benefits of search engines
Loving the last line of the second chapter. These are very cute ^__^
Author's Response: thank you, elliehalpert! i'm glad you like them :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2008 11:04 am Title: 7/11, or jim learns about the benefits of bathroom stops
I am loving these !
they are so cute && petite && definitely extra extra sweet (:
Author's Response: thank you for your kind review, mixedbreedgirl! i'm so glad you enjoy these. they're tiny little things, aren't they? but they're such fun.
Date: December 27, 2008 06:30 am Title: fifth date, or jim learn about the benefits of yoga classes
Your schedule is flexible. As it turns out, so is she.
That made me laugh. This was amazing, seriously.
Author's Response: confession- i made this piece around that line. i'm glad it was worth it ;) thank you for your kind review, sea legs! it is much appreciated.
Date: December 26, 2008 05:25 pm Title: radiohead, or jim learns about the benefits of search engines
THAT was such a fabulous little treat!
Author's Response: thank you, lovefool! i was so surprised at how often i went back and edited this... you'd think 55 words wouldn't be so difficult, right? i'm glad you enjoyed it :)