1 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2018 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh so very sweet. Sigh.
Date: December 15, 2007 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so sad and beautiful and I was not expecting the ending but I love it.
Date: October 03, 2006 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I was prepared to end up sad but you surprised me beautifully! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I want our Jim to be happy. He deserves it:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the rythm (sp?) you used here - how every section mirrored the others. And the happy ending was a bonus!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was crazy beautiful. So sad, and then - so right! Such a sweet ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I gasped out loud at that, tears in my eyes - honest to god. That is just breathtaking, quite literally. Because I could so see her just appearing and holding up that bare left hand....WOW. Beautiful stuff, seriously.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!! If only our little Pam had done that, huh? I know I would have been happy:) Appreciate the kind words.
Date: October 02, 2006 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Very creative and evocative. The emotions here are spot-on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It means a lot:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
If only it happened that way. I wish it would have
Author's Response: You and me, both!!! Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: October 02, 2006 05:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Another heart wrencher. Lovely writing, very evocative. Big sigh at the end. Nice.....
Author's Response: Thank you so much:) I really appreciate it.
8 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that's lovely!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you!!!!
9 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you structured this story with the description pushing the envelope a bit more each time. Lovely story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much:) Appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You may be my favorite author on here. Fantastic stuff. Your writing always evokes so much emotion from me. This piece was no different. Really really good.
So good that it prompted me to write my first review on here. :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! You are so sweet. And you totally made my Monday!!! Thanks for the kind words. They mean so much:) Thanks for the review!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful - I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this made me cry- something about the way you described his dreams. Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Puff!! That means so much:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
adorable!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Appreciate the review:)
Date: October 01, 2006 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow....that was good
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Molly!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
That would be the absolutely most rocking way to get them back together. Fun! :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it:) Thanks for reviewing!!!