Date: April 13, 2009 10:14 am Title: Chapter 3: To Where you are....
Another AMAZING chapter. You never fail to make me cry. How Jim couldn't watch Pam being lowered in to the ground, god, the lump in my throat at that momentalmost choked me.
Michael and Jim's moment at the end was perfect.
I can't wait to find out what happens next, poor Jim :( and HOW DARE they say Jim can't look after Amanda aw :(
Date: April 12, 2009 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
This story totally tore out my heart. I died when I had my oldest son. They were able to revive me and now i'm a mom of 2.
This story also reminds me of the blog: matt liz and madeline.
http://www.mattlogelin.com/archives/2009/03/11/feb-25/
It's a great heartbreaking blog.
luchy
Date: April 11, 2009 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
This is just heartbreaking, but beautifully written. I loved the glimpse of their wedding, a nice juxtaposition to the tragedy. I'm interested to see where you take it.
Date: April 11, 2009 09:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
This is so amazing. I was pretty much sobbing by the time I got to the end of this chapter. This is so well done.
Date: April 11, 2009 09:34 am Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
Binx, you've written this so well, but you're breaking my heart. I'm hoping to be able to follow along, but it really hurts. So sad. Thanks for the wedding sex, though, that was comforting ; ) (TWSS?)
Date: April 11, 2009 07:48 am Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
Okay, you made me cry again. The way you mixed the wedding in to all of this, was just perfect and ... omg I am not kidding when I say I'm stilll crying :( You're amazing.
I can't even write a coherant review because you blew me the hell away!!!!!!!
Date: April 11, 2009 04:24 am Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
Holy crap Binx... This story in unbe-effing-lievable. I'm sitting here at my in-laws on the floor sobbing. Jim's hurt, anguish... Being devestated that Pam is gone, and somewhat feeling guilty that he's glad the baby is OK.. Wow. You captured the emotion amazingly. And then their interaction at the wedding, and being so happy, and the joke that Jim's fly was down?... Just perfect. Wow. Can I stop saying wow? Probably not, since this is probably one the best stories I've read on here.
"Don't go like this, please. Wake up, Pam. Just...we have to go home and we have to get...there's more stuff we need to get right? You want to remodel the kitchen, remember and...then we're supposed to...the studio and...Come on. Please. Just...God, I love you. I love you so much. So very much. So you have to wake... " That broke me into about 1000 pieces. Oh man.
Jim shook his head, "I'll never be ready for this." Unreal how that summed up everything in this chapter.
To a house that was now broken. He would be bringing her to a house that lacked the one thing she needed, her mother. He suddenly had no desire to do that, it was so unfair to her. But he had to take care of her, because he couldn't lose her too. And that was achingly spot on. Wow.
Holy long review, Batman. Sorry haha. But please, PLEASE keep this going! You are awesome!
Date: April 11, 2009 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
This is so sad but beautiful. I think you are doing a wonderful job of conveying Jim's emotions.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2009 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
Wow. This is amazing. You had me in tears, and I had to create an account to tell you how beautifully disastrous this has been to read...Keep up the good work!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2009 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: And for the moment you can hardly breathe
Everytime I read this story, my heart seriously aches and I'm crying real tears and I have to remind myself that Pam is alive on the show and everything's okay...
You. Are. Talented.
Seriously, tears are streaming down my face right now.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
Okay, so now I'm all ridiculous and weepy and... wow.
Because you referenced them I listened to The Fray as I read this chapter... wow.
If anyone needs me, and I kinda doubt anyone will, because I am all kinds of sobby and useless at this moment, I'll be right here, waiting for an update on this story.
Wow, just, wow.
I'm sorry Pam died too, but hopefully glimpses of the brief marriage and previous relationship will give me something to smile about through these tears.
Again, wow.
9 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
I made the mistake of reading this with my morning coffee. I cried so much I was late for work. The power of Jim's grief was written beautifully. I'll keep reading if you keep writting.
6 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
Why did you do this to us?! LOL Seriously, so, so heartbreaking
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
First thing about me: I barely ever cry actual tears.
Second thing about me: I so totally am right now. Lots of actual, honest to goodness tears.
I blame you. Goddamn you, Binx.
However, you're in luck because I like things that depress me beyond repair and make me cry like a baby, since, well . . . not many things do that.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
Oh my God, my heart is breaking. Why are you breaking my heart?! Really well written. I'm definitely intrigued and can't wait for the next chapter!
9 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
I'm going to go one more chapter... aaaaaah!
It isn't that Pam died that is so awful... it's that we have to see heartbroken!Jim all alone :(
Date: April 07, 2009 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
this is really great! keep writing!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2009 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
*deep breath*
Talk about intense. This was really excellent, binx. Looking forward to updates :)
Date: April 07, 2009 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
Wow, great job. I had tears in my eyes the whole time. Please continue soon, this is fabulous.
Date: April 07, 2009 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
OMG I'm crying. Like actual proper lump in the throat kinda crying... that was amazing. I hope you continue this. I want to see how Daddy Jim copes without Pam *sobs*
Date: April 07, 2009 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Losing her, the only one who's ever known
GUH... That just broke my heart. Poor Jim.. Poor Pam.. Poor JAMbaby :(
This: "I just want to be with her..." he whimpered. Made me not OK. Legit, tears.
Really looking forward to where this is going tho!