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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 07:08 am Title: Chapter 23

Well, how delectable. And in my own private time zone, it's now 5:10...tapping my foot here....

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 06:51 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh, my.  This was really sexy and sweet, and still very them.  Great work, as always.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 06:32 am Title: Chapter 23

OMG, is it 5:15 yet?  This is delicious cotton candy!

Love the reappearance of the red top and Hooters!  HA!  And I can totally see the Jim smiles -- those are spot on!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2006 02:13 am Title: Chapter 22

Snow Patrol’s “Chasing Cars” filled the background, candles flickering and casting shadows on the wall.
 

YESSSSSS!!! I write JamFic with this song playing. Yes!!! 

 

Thank you for this very sweet scene. :) 

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2006 10:48 am Title: Chapter 22

What a great, great chapter. What with the proposal, the mousse, the letters and the squeeing...

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

Loved this chapter - and loved this line - “It’s okay now; if it took those moments to bring us here, then I wouldn’t change a thing about the past – because I couldn’t ask for more in the present.” Such a beautiful sentiment. I just love this story!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 22

HELLO! :D

You're a good writer, but I'd really like to see you step out of your comfort zone. So many of your fics are incredibly repetitive. Please try something new, something that doesn't involve Jonathan Halpert, 10 hour long Jam conversations... something different and concise and strange. I would love to read it. :)

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 22

Yeah, I totally squeed reading this. Sounds weird. Go with the feeling. Lol.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 21

Don't know how I managed to miss this chapter last week when you updated - but I was glad to read it today!  Such a hot and steamy and Jammy chapter. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 22

OMG, I LOVE how the boards are making it into the fic.  Truly awesome.  I think I would fall into a bliss-induced coma if I ever heard JK/JH utter the word 'squee'.  And I have visions of the Emmy pic of Jenna, John, Steve, Rainn & BJ where John is down on one knee.  But in his boxers is possibly the only image better than in his tux.  Possibly.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

Squee!  Enough said. :-)

Very fun, very well written. Right now I'm kind of afraid to read  your WIPs so I don't accidently borrow all the good ideas, scenes, etc. that you've had!

Luckily I believe there's plenty of Jam love to go around.... 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 11:16 am Title: Chapter 22

So you’re telling me you’re all squee over me?” 
Arent' we all? Great chapter

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 07:29 am Title: Chapter 22

So sweet and absolutely touching.  And, I love that Jim was all about Aidan!  Whoo-hoo!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 06:27 am Title: Chapter 22

Of course, I'm over the moon about the proposal! I just have to crack up about "Chasing Cars" again. My husband keeps hitting repeat when that song plays in the car and I secretly laugh because he has NO IDEA that you've permamently burned that song into my brain associated with steamy Jam thoughts! And while I may possibly be the only person with a vagina who hates "SATC", I think it's hilarious that Jim has a working knowledge of the show. You do so know how to brighten my day!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 05:29 am Title: Chapter 22

Awwwwwwww. Best proposal scene I've read yet, I think! Beautiful.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 04:59 am Title: Chapter 22

"When I got down on one knee in my underwear, I successfully made you squee."

That. That right there just...made my month.

And now I'll leave because this chapter is enough to put me in a high that will leave me making absolutely no sense. WOO!

Reviewer: kath Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 04:51 am Title: Chapter 22

Somebody, somebody, ssomebody, somebody, somebody, somebody's getting MARRIED!! YAY...I can't wait for another chapter tonight!!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 08:19 am Title: Chapter 21

Ooh, love the sexy banter in here. After all the angst, it's good to finally see both of them just let go and...be.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 21

I owe you a huge apology.  I read all of your stuff and I almost never review, so I'm sorry about that.  You should know that the way you write them floors me - every time.  You write strong emotion between them, and for me, that is essential.  So thanks.  As much fun as the steamy stuff is to read, I love the reverence you show them feeling for one another...realizing they are a gift to one another... not taking their connection for granted..you make it feel (as corny as it sounds) holy....Now, I should get some sleep, because I'm gettin' sappy.  Thanks again for all the time work you put into your writing - you bring joy to many people.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh.  my.  Too many delicious lines to single even a few out.  Wow.  PLEEEASE keep writing!!!  (We are quivering chocolate pudding in your hands!!!)

Reviewer: justjaded Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 21

If someone could package Jim in this chapter into a pill that all men could take and then become Jim, it would sell better than fucking Viagra. Christ.

Reviewer: tizzy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 11:12 am Title: Chapter 21

Hottest line chapter ending ever,

 

Instead, she asked inanely, “What about dessert?”

 

He paused, but only for a second, then – with a mischievous gleam in his eye – “I promise you, I’ll work it in somehow.”

 

Okay seriously I don't mean to rush you of course but damn! Please update soon, because you're right that ending was mean...and now I have to work for the rest of the day? girl7 this was just, I'm gonna freaking melt! Blah I literally can't think of anything else to say...

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:27 am Title: Chapter 21

Tortured!Jim really SHOULD be an action figure...I'd totally buy one...as well as a Shower!Jim....

Brilliant chapter, hilarious banter, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:14 am Title: Chapter 21

I promise you, I’ll work it in somehow.”  Nice, now we can't wait to see how he works it in.  Of course my smutty mind is thinking of more then one thing.;)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:10 am Title: Chapter 21

"All I've wanted for longer than I can remember is you.' I'm a goner when I read stuff like that. You really know how to get a girl going!

And seriously - you are the high priestess of the looooong build-up. Haven't you tortured that boy enough, woman? Pam must have a will of steel, because, man...I'd be pudding in his hands before I'd even raised my fork. Love how you upped the pudding ante (sp?) to mousse...cannot wait to see what kind of use it gets put to. Breathlessly awaiting the next  installment...

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