Date: October 16, 2006 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
IGNORE NeverEnoughJam -- on this point anyway.... PLEASE don't end it here! Need more JAM love!!! So glad you added this chapter, 15 left me wanting more, and obviously, this one does too!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this! There are a few more chapters left, I'm thinking. ;o)
7 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
End it here!!!! Right here! This is perfect!! The two of them cuddled up together, naked, thinking up a prank on someone. It is SO JAM! One more word would be too much. I like to think they'll spend the rest of their lives just like this...plotting mischief and making love.
Author's Response: I'm sure you're right, but I gotta take it farther - if for no other reason than to satisfy my own need for happy Jim/Pam interaction, in light of the zilch factor on the show right now. Thanks for the review!
7 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 17
“Jim.” It was a whisper, a gasp. He knew without asking why she’d said his name, simply whispered back, not breaking his rhythm, “I know.”
Oh, you DEVIL! Putting Han Solo's line in Jim Halpert's mouth! Sent shivers down my spine, as well as,
“You have no idea….” His eyes swept her body, then met her gaze, his fingers brushing her cheek.
Oooo! Delicious! Running Jim's words in the Casino Night kiss back again, in a wholly different context! Very clever.
I would say only this, in the spirit of possible improvement: Jim talks too much. I see this in a lot of fanfic--women talk a lot, talk about their feelings, etc. The men they write wind up behaving the same way, but in real life not even Jim Halpert would be this articulate in the grip of raging lust. I like it that you made him growl now and then, and his voice was gutteral at the end.
More smut, please.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! And I see what you're saying about Jim talking a lot; you're right to point out that most men would be more reticient. I think I like just picturing what he'd say if he did - and more succinctly, if he could.
Thanks for the thoughtful review!
Date: October 16, 2006 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ok, gotta say that I am LOVING the whole "How dare you" line of thought -- I mean, really, did he honestly expect she would drop ten years with Roy like that? And 'bravo' to Pam for sticking up for her own growth and being her own person before falling madly into bed with Jim. This might be more than we have seen from Pam on the show so far, but it is definitely within her power. This is SUCH a great observation, girl7, and I am so happy you brought it up. As much as we love the romantic ideas of how Pam & Jim could get together, part of the magic is in their realism, and this is a very REAL hurdle that a real-life couple would have to overcome.
Date: October 16, 2006 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
LOVING the "Once" bit -- this is simply luscious. And yes, we did notice that Jim is HOT!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
He's it.
Finally. Stupid woman.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Woohoo! You tell him, Pamster! And also, I'm imagining that with all the yelling Jonathan is hearing every word. That makes me laugh.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
"She realized in full just how cruel what she’d done to him had been. Oh my god. Oh my god."
Beautiful. She needs to feel it, to know it, so she can try to make it up to him. This is painful and lovely.
Date: October 16, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
OK, I've just read four or five chapters in a row and had to stop and review. I'm bursting with excitement for Pam, here, and I'm still stinging from Jim's raw pain. I'm also glad Karen has been adiosed. :)
Date: October 16, 2006 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aw, so sweet. You really capture them so well. Thanks for this very-much-needed chapter:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yay! That made me smile the entire time. Now quit your job to write us more happy chapters. And more smut couldn't hurt either. They deserve it.
Date: October 16, 2006 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
Pranking Jon, I can't wait for that.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
Right when I thought it couldn't get any more delicious, you go and write this. But seriously, they need that encore...stat! Then they can prank away! (Sorry - you clearly need no narrative assistance, but I couldn't contain myself.) 18 chapters and still flavorful!
Date: October 16, 2006 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
ah...that was lovely. Can't wait for the prank! Very spot on characterizations, as usual.
Date: October 15, 2006 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
If I were a smoker, I'd be lighting one up right about now. How much wine did you have, girl? Hee!
Date: October 15, 2006 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
What a hot and sexy end to such a wonderful story. Thank you for the beautiful happy ending.
Date: October 15, 2006 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
This was heartbreaking. Yea for Jonathan being there to help her pick up the pieces.
Date: October 15, 2006 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
So glad that Jim brought Jon as his date. Calm and sensible Jon is just what is needed here. And so happy that Pam realized that breaking up with Roy truly was the right thing to do.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yeah! Way to go, Pam!
I'm SO sick of the innocent wide-eyed girl-next-door persona that she seems to adopt in most other fics..
GREAT JOB!!! KICK ASS, BEESLEY!
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 11:37 am Title: Chapter 17
Yeah Im going to need you to ummm...focus on finishing this. =-) Thanks. And the fight when she came to her house. After I read it, I tossed my fanfic away because we were thinking along the EXACT sames lines as to why she said "I can't"... GOOD story.
Date: October 15, 2006 11:17 am Title: Chapter 17
Very nicely done.
Date: October 15, 2006 08:40 am Title: Chapter 16
what what? I am off to the next chapter. Thank good needness you didn't leave it here forever.
Date: October 15, 2006 08:37 am Title: Chapter 15
Poor pam Poor Jim. What a great bro Jon is.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 07:04 am Title: Chapter 17
Such a cute chapter, ahh! loved it :)
Just one thing though, isn't Jonathon in the house? LOL
Date: October 15, 2006 03:34 am Title: Chapter 17
I knew I shouldn't have gone to bed so early. Fantastic. No need to blush. And please give us more happy fluffy smutty Jim and Pam. They deserve it. And so do we since we're forced to watch them be apart.