1 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2020 04:09 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
This is just top to bottom hilarious.
While reading this not particularly long fic, I genuinely laughed out loud at:
"I am driving 137 miles an hour right now. That is how much I want to get home and hurt you with frying pans"
"“Well, I can’t help but compare myself to this Josh character. And I now feel inferior and emasculated.” “You do not. You feel smug and mischievous and very pleased with yourself.”
"And you could have just said ‘no thank you’, but instead you said something very sarcastic and mean-spirited. Do you remember?”/ “I don’t remember exactly…”/“You said, and I am quoting you verbatim here, you said ‘I haven’t seen Busty Blonde Nurses 1, so I don’t think I’ll be able to follow the plot.’ That was just petty, in my opinion…”
And while I did not LAUGH at the end, I do appreciate the visual you have provided.
Well done.
1 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2018 04:43 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
I ADORE this story. So wonderful and so incredibly in-character. My favorite is Pam's spot-on retort: "You feel smug and mischievous, and pleased with yourself." Wonderful!
8 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2009 07:54 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
I loved this! So cute and funny and some awesome lines - "‘I haven’t seen Busty Blonde Nurses 1, so I don’t think I’ll be able to follow the plot.’ and "Pick up some whipped cream".
Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar. Those were my two favorite lines as well.
Date: April 19, 2009 06:21 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
HILARIOUS. Great premise and excellent characterization.
Author's Response: Thanks for the super groovy review, LoveFool.
Date: April 19, 2009 11:20 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
Hilarious - very well done. And maybe a little too close to home.
Author's Response: Thanks, jazzfan.
Date: April 19, 2009 09:44 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
Breakfast for dinner is definitely something awesome. Funny fic and I love that Pam is trapped in a car listening while Jim is narrating going through the files.
Author's Response: Anyone who likes breakfast for dinner is a-okay in my book. Thanks for the nice review.
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 08:58 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
LOL
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 18, 2009 07:40 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
MrReg, is that you? Have you been spying on me?
Nice job, RomanCandle, a really fun read.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, NanReg. Also, I am not your husband in disguise, so don't worry about that.
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 06:33 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
This is great! Fanfic writers and their secret files - such a private world. I love that you wrote it all in dialogue.
Author's Response: Thanks, the all dialogue is kind of a feature of this series. Just like using the word "arrtard".
Date: April 18, 2009 03:53 pm Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
I really love this series! I can really relate to Pam in all of these stories...I wonder why? Great job, I love it!
Author's Response: How funny, I'm glad you feel that way.
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 09:22 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
LMFAO love this. Poor Pam lol.
Author's Response: I feel sorry for Pam too, Mrs. Halpert, but I think she'll get over it. Fancy New Beesly is a tough cookie, after all. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 08:35 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
That was hilarious and adorable! Pam may want to go ahead and set a Windows password on her computer. In fact, I think I will do the same!
Author's Response: I don't think Pam will set a password...I have a sneaking suspicion she wanted Jim to read them! Be sure to keep that in mind before you set a password. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 08:32 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
PURE. GOLD.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Mrs. Halpert. Those two words make me very happy, especially since you used all caps. Way to drive your point home!
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 07:52 am Title: Breakfast For Dinner!
hahaha!! I love this!!
"There’s like fifty stories in here.”
“Well a lot of them are different chapters in the same story, not unique stories."
Great idea! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the super cool review, Liv. You're my new BFF. Be sure to check out the other two stories in this series if you haven't already.