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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2009 05:55 am Title: Chapter 4

Holy inspiration, Batman!  Another one?!  Wow!  Not a cop out at all, xoxoxo, I think you handled the wedding just fine, just touching on it rather than spelling it out.  Pam's love for this baby and for Jim just pops off the page.  I'm feeling all swoony :) *sob* and *hiccup*

Author's Response:

Yeah I know.  I had a lot of time on my hands. ;) Glad to know you liked it.  I had this whole other letter in mind but realized I didn't want to go into details about the wedding at all - just sort of what Pam was thinking that day you know?

I guess you do - since you sort of said so. LOL!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

YAY they gots married!!! loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved her deep, real feelings of how not to let go of someone special and making bad mistake in our lives, there's a chance to make it up that mistake and be happy again. I loved it! =)

Author's Response: So glad!!  I think J+P know how that feels best of all. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

So sweet! And hearing the heartbeat? Yeah. It's beyond wild.

Author's Response:

This was so nice you sent it to me thrice. :)  I deleted the other two btw.

So glad you like it.  I'm trying to write a bunch of what I think I'd do...and then make it realistic that Pam would feel the same way.  Hopefully that continues to come across!

Thank you!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

But then there are days where I honestly can't even remember what it's like to not be waiting for you.  Love that so much.  *sigh*  I'm glad you're enjoying this and it's so easy, 'cause I'm loving it.

Author's Response: I really do imagine that's just how Pam is feeling about now.  I'm so glad it resonated with you too.  THank you so much for the review - 'cause I'm loving them. :)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

::sigh:: Jim has a baby folder with articles that never leaves his side and has made post-its about things like life insurance.  I think I love him...No wait - I do love him. 

GREAT chapter. 



Author's Response:

Get in line LoveFool.  Get in line. :)

THANK you!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Blurry little photos of alien babies <3<3<3  Only a person with a very good imagination can even tell that's a baby.  I'm still amazed when an ultrasound tech can point stuff out.

Jim buying life insurance is kind of hot.  (Who knew?)



Author's Response:

I never know what to say when someone shows me their sonogram pic.  Oh so cute - doesn't quite seem to be appropriate.

And yeah.  The man can make insurance coverage hot.    What's next?  LOL!  Thanks so much for the review Ms. Hoo.  I really do appreciate it!

Reviewer: standinginthedoorway Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love love love the idea of Jim scribbling little post-its about life insurance. Such a lovely fic.

Author's Response:

I know.  I can just see him doing that.  I really don't know how Pam stands it. :)

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3

This is so sweet--I'm really enjoying it. 

The list of people not allowed to babysit-hilarious. And this "Jelly. Bean." is just awesome :)



Author's Response:

Thank.  You.

I really appreciate the review.  Thank you so much for taking the time.

Reviewer: FictionInReality Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 10:05 am Title: Chapter 3

"He should know better than to say things like "Hope that King sized bed gets here before there's no more room left for me in this one.""

Such great characterization on both of their parts. These are fantastic and I can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response: I'm so happy you think so.  Oh - and the next one was just posted. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 09:33 am Title: Chapter 3

Ahhhh best letter so far, I freaking love Pam, she's so adorable, and aww Jim getting all excited and freaked out about being a dad... PERFECT! I love these letters SO much!

Author's Response:

Awesome. 

I'm pretty fond of Pam myself.  And that other guy - what's his name?  Yeah he's alright too. ;)

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 09:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Awwwww that put me in tears, I love it!! =)

Author's Response: Awww!  Don't cry.  Here's a tissue. ;)  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loving these. I hope you'll continue these throughout her pregnancy... and maybe some from daddy?

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying them!  I intend to continue and we may see something from Jim but this is really Pam's story.  Don't worry - you'll get glimpses of him and what he's doing throughout. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Freaking adorableeeeeee!

Reviewer: Liv Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yay! Another chapter! Amazing, as usual. :D

Author's Response: Thank Liv!  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: rm2000 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 10:39 am Title: Chapter 2

Really nice. Captures Pam perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank so much!  I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 09:43 am Title: Chapter 2

Bean!  We call our little monster 'Bean' and she's now two.  And yeah, gaining too much weight the first trimester isn't really a problem, since my appetite was shot.

Love Pam trying to explain the camera crew to the bean.  And I relate to wanting to strangle the daddy.  *sigh*



Author's Response: Hee!  I think calling the baby Bean is the cutest thing (obviously!)   I do tend to believe Jim is practically perfect - but I do believe even he has his faults. ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2

So happy to see an update, xoxoxo.  I thought your details were perfect, and I agree with your timeframe insofar as when "Bean" is to be born.  Pam couldn't have been more than a few--maybe four--weeks along when she found out, right?  Anyway...this was the best:  If you don't mind, for the purposes of these letters I'm going to keep calling you Jellybean.  For one thing I think it sounds cute and for another (and this is going to sound weird and/or gross - I apologize) your dad insists that once upon a time I used them as a method to seduce him.  Hee hee :)  That Beesly is a sly one. 

Reviewer: FictionInReality Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 06:16 am Title: Chapter 2

I really cannot handle how adorable these are. As long as you keep writing them, I will keep reading.

Author's Response: I really can't ask for much more.  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: stjoespirit04 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2009 05:33 am Title: Chapter 2

I actually can't wait to see that footage, because let me tell you Bean, the look on his face that day was completely priceless.

And I'm done. Gone. That was the most glorious statement I think I have EVER read on MTT. Pam telling her Bean about Jim's reaction (ie, utter elation) = perfection. You. Are. My. Hero.

Author's Response: Well thank you!  Not sure it's all that heroic ;) but I'm so happy you liked it!!!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

so cute...and this totally seems like a pam thing to do. haha

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is terrific, xoxoxo. Love it! We called this girl I work with's baby 'the bean' when she was pregnant. :)

This part is particularly fabulous and encapsulates both Pam and Dwight in a way that made me grin:

I mean, I noticed today that Dwight was furiously writing down notes while staring intently at me.

It could totally be related to work - or he absolutely could be trying to figure out when I had my last period.

If he figures it out before your father and I do I'm going to be really annoyed.

Not to mention totally creeped out.



Well done, lady!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  I didn't think calling the baby 'the bean' would exactly be original but it seemed to fit perfectly.  It sounds in my head exactly like something they would do.

These two are in my head A LOT.  It's a bit of a problem. :)

Oh Dwight.  You know he's going to bust out some farm yard metaphor when he finds out about Pam being pregnant.

So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you're continuing this! Poor Pam. She sounds so uncomfortable right now. I love her comments about Dwight figuring out when she's due! And I'm having fun imagining Jim getting a kick out of pregnant Pam. Even if he is risking his life. ;-) If you do continue this, it might even be fun to read a letter from him as well. But if you want to keep it just Pam, that's great too. I love the way you write her.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're glad!  Stay tuned.  You might hear from Jim...eventually ;)  There's one chapter I have determined will belong to him.   But it'll be mostly Pam for the bulk of it.  I keep saying this - but this is really fun to write.  It's been a long time since I felt that way so it makes me happy. :) Thanks so much for the review.  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved when Pam is telling orders to stop making her sick and etc even though it's not born yet. You should defintely write some more! Your writing is great!! Keep up the good work! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!  I liked that part myself.  I will definitely be continuing this so stay tuned!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww!!!!!!!!!!! so cute! first of all, you have to keep writing these. i love the internal monologue. Pam's a rambler and you captured that PERFECTLY. i love it. i love that she freaks out about call Jim Daddy, and accidentally mentions sex (but didn't accidentally have it), and tells her kid not to do drugs. it's so stereotypical and momish, but still SO PAM. gah. i just love it! there aren't anymore words. just gushing at your preciousness. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much RoJ!  It makes me very happy to know the bits that you particularly liked.  Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me so!

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