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Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwww! So lovely.

Author's Response: Awwww!  Thanks!!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh this is so cute. so pam. =]

Author's Response: So glad you thought so!  Thanks!!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

This line?

 

I know he'll take the very best care of you. I can tell by the way he takes such good care of me.

just did me in.

Love this so much.  An ongoing journal of Pam's letters to her unborn child will help get us through the summer hiatus.  And no one does this fluffy stuff better than you, hugs!  Can't wait.

 



Author's Response:

My work is done then. :)

So very glad you liked it.  For the first time in forever I can't wait to write more.

It's a nice feeling. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, xoxo, that's just lovely. I love your Pam voice. And you convey the surreality and the ambiguity of the emotions in that moment just beautifully. I mean, even when you've been trying, there's just something about finding out that leaves you stunned. They're going to be brilliant, aren't they? And mostly because they love each other so much- much as I love you and your lovely, fluffy stories!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear you liked her voice - because I really struggle with making sure that she doesn't sound too much like me. 

They're going to be flat out fantastic.  And right back at you sister. :) 

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Aaaaand now I'm a weepy mess on a beautiful Thursday morning. Not that it's a bad thing but...yeah. See, my mom wrote me these kind of letters throughout all of my babyhood and it reminds me a lot of that. And it's so beautiful and spot on and just...yeah. Really really well done.

Author's Response: That is so great about your mom!  I think that's the sweetest thing ever.   I'm so very glad you liked it!

Reviewer: hann Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1

That was perfection. So very much so. Xoxoxo, I loved this and I can't wait to see how the letters progress as Pam continues with her pregancy. :) This will do a great job of holding me over through the never-ending summer break. Keep up the fantastic work and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE updated again soon!

Author's Response:

You are too sweet.  Thank you so much! 

I started the second letter earlier today so I hope to update ASAP. 

This one is a lot of fun to write.  It's so much nicer to write a story like this one when it's actually happening on the show too. 

 

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1

That, my friend, is some good stuff.  A beautiful and creative idea, and you pulled it off wonderfully.  Your Pam voice is right on the mark as always. 

The ending signature is my favorite part.



Author's Response:

Sorry I've been too anxious and impatient to give anyone a sneek peek lately.  I'm in this mode where I feel like if I don't post it right away I never will.  Weird.

But thank you.  I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Liv Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1

"The minute we got in the car he attacked the GPS, found the nearest shopping mall and bought out Barnes and Noble."
^^Love that! I KNOW Jim totally did that!
and the ending totally brought tears to my eyes. :)

Author's Response:

I think it's a pretty good possibility that he did.

Obviously. :)

So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: iamapam1883 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, xoxoxo, that was so sweet and beautiful. I have to say with all the CP fics popping up, it's refreshing to see a different approach and I love that it's from Pam's POV. Wonderful job! :)

Author's Response: Yay!!  Thank you so much!  I'm so happy you liked it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Guh.  This is so romantic and sweet, xoxoxo.  I can envision Pam writing this in the wee hours.  This:  We got home and he skimmed through every single one of them and that's how we found out that right now you're about the size of a poppy seed...We think...You could be a jellybean."  I found that so touching.  You'll add to this when the spirit moves you, right?  I hope I hope...

Author's Response:

That's my favoritest part of the whole thing.  And yes - I'll add to it.  Many possibilities are already swimming around in my brain.  This'll be fun.

Thanks so much for the review.  I very muchly appreicate it.

Reviewer: SlumDunder Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh I love it! So in character, so earnest.

Author's Response:

That's lovely to hear.  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 05:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Love everything this letter to Jamlet chooses to be. <3

Cannot wait to see a pile of "What to expect" books on Jim/Pam's desks, next to the 5 photos of each other (and maybe an ultrasound!) in the fall.

This just about gets me teary eyed: based on the way it finally happened I know without question that there is no one else in the world I'm meant to be with.  

Nicely done, xo  



Author's Response:

Meee too!!

I'm sooooo glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Warm and sweet and....guh....so Pam!  You definitely captured Pam's excitement and her need to quickly set it all down on paper.  

Author's Response:

THANK YOU!  I tried really hard to stop sounding like me and start sounding like Pam. 

I'm so glad it did not disappoint.

Reviewer: InternationalBusinessTraveller Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm pretty sure that there's going to be a lot of sickly sweet 'a baby's on it's way' fics coming our way ... but this isn't one of them! Well done - you manage to captured the odd combination of disbelief, excitement and emotion very well. I can remember feeling that way myself when I first found out that I was pregnant the first time.

Author's Response:

Awesome - because I tend to think I get stuck in sickly sticky sweet fic from time to time.

And seeing as I'm not writing from personal experience - I am happy to know it sounded realistic to you.  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Elle Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2009 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was beautiful and sweet. You captured Pam's voice very well. I'm getting all emotional like your Pam. Really a great story. Thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I was kinda worried about it so I'm glad you liked it.  You're very welcome.  My pleasure. :)

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2009 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, that's cute! I really love how you put Pam's thoughts on the letter how when they found out about the baby and how she is going to feel when once the baby is born. Also I can SO see Jim doing that, going to the nearest store to get baby books right way because he's just so elated and excited about the pregnancy, he wants to learn and be there for her along the way. It's so sweet!! I hope you write some more! =)
-Dani

Author's Response: Thanks!!  I wrote this late last night because I couldn't fall asleep!  LOL!  Anyway I'm so glad that it seemed realistic to you.  Thank you so much for the sweet review.  More to come!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2009 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

::sigh:: Oh I'm dying. This is...ugh...you just took out my heart and like gave it a good squeeze!  I LOVE that they went and bought books immediately and I LOVE that Pam is writing a letter, and I especially love that they're calling the baby Jellybean because she's the size of one...holy cow. Beautiful.

Author's Response:

Nice!  Did you get your heart back?  I don't want you to die via fanfic. 

My mind is so bizarre - the jellybean thing is what I thought of on my way home. I thought it was perfect. 

 

And I've clearly got a problem. 

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2009 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah! Adorableness times ten! Love that you made Pam such a spaz, lol. (:

Author's Response: I just had a feeling she'd be a tad overwhelmed.  Thanks so much!!

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