10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 07:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Love it! Pam is taking charge. Go out there and get that boy! I really like what you've done with this story. More please!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 07:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Aha! Creed has supernatural powers? Very interesting turn of events! On to the next chapter...
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 09:14 am Title: Chapter 3
"Sam". Hee. I love the surreal quality of this, and the way that Pam is slowly putting the pieces together. It's really a wonderful, creative idea. Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see if the magic that is Google will be assisting Pam in her upcoming search for Jim.
By the way, this fic is amazing. Alternate/parallel universes are fascinating.
Author's Response: Well, Google is very powerful, isn't it?;) Thanks for the review;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
...guh. Wow. I'd say something, but there are no words. =P I love this, I love the idea, I love the implications behind it, I love how you've thought of a lot of things [like the different version of the Dundies, and how Pam realises she was probably different in the Jim-less world], I love Creed [obviously], and...I can't wait. I can't wait for her to find him, I can't wait for him to go uh, who are you? [or maybe you'll have him remember Pam, too!! I mean, chances are low, because that'll make it unbelievable, but still...], I can't wait for them to be happy together, because I've been waiting for that since the start of the show, and it certainly hasn't stopped since then.
That's it, I think. Keep updating, because you know I love this! =P
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm flattered:) I'll try to post the update soon:) (There are going to be about 11 chapters in total, btw)
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, great chapter! The kaleidoscope explanation was actually quite... pretty? Even though it was sad. And I love how Creed, even in his mysterious wise man role, is utterly clueless. ("Sam," ha!) And "Whatever your job is, you totally suck at it" was laugh-out-loud funny. And the scene in her apartment when she truly realizes how significant Jim is to her was so wonderfully done. And that last line was just right!
I hope she finds Jim SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to make the scene in her apartment rather intense, so I'm glad it worked for you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Absolutely loved this chapter! You have Creed down so perfect - especially his calling her Sam. And the kaleidescope analogy was so perfect! I especially loved the last line. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think that's the chapter I like most so far, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it too:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is such an enjoyable story! I love the analogy of the kaleidoscope. :)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: October 13, 2006 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such an original concept - and so sad. On the show at least she knows where he is.
Your use of Creed is sheer perfection. God knows where that man has been - or what he's been involved with. LOL!
Author's Response:
I had to be pick someone from the office to be the, uh, supernatural one - and no one seemed a better choice than Creed:D
As for sadness, yeah, I think it has to be sad. It's a very extreme way for Pam to learn what Jim means to her. Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm really loving this - it's such a cool concept. Update soon!
(Creed repeatedly calling Pam Sam - hilarious)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow - Normally I'm not a big fan of AU-type fics, but you've really grabbed my attention with this one. It's well written and thought out and I can't wait to see where you go with it!
Author's Response: Thank you:) I'll try not to disappoint:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how you write Creed. He's too funny.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3
I love it! The way that things are different now is really heartbreaking, as well as the thought that Jim won't know her now. I loved Pam saying that Creed sucks at his job! Because, well, he does!
Author's Response: Thanks:) I tried to show how Jim influenced her life even if she wasn't fully aware of it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 3
i love this story! this chapter was sooo painfully good :) the kalediscope analogy is a great idea! but, how is pam gong to find jim if he could be anywhere :( i need more!
Author's Response: Maybe she won't? No, I'm just kidding;) Thank you for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god, this story is amazing! Such an original premise, very well-written and I'm loving Creed's apparent role in all of this.
Author's Response: Thanks:) There'll definitely be more of Creed;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, no! Not different like that! Change things back, Creed, change things back!
Author's Response:
Hm, I think that's what Pam should say in the next chapter:D Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Didn't expect that. A world without Jim is not a world worth living in. Great job at creating the creepy/crazy feeling of a topsy-turvey universe. Can't wait to know exactly Creed's role.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks, actually creating that feeling was rather difficult and I thought I made it too chaotic and failed. So I'm glad you liked it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Man, this is so amazing. I love that Creed has a hand in this, the weirdo. Creed!love
Author's Response: Yeah, Creed seems to be the highlight of the fic:) Thank you for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
A world without Jim, say it isn't so! Can't wait to see what lies ahead.
Author's Response: Heh, thanks for the review, kaystar:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG, it's "It's a Wonderful Life." Except with Creed as the angel, it makes everything freaky! This is amazing, both parts. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Woah... a universe without Jim.
I'm intrigued and sad. Damn that Creed.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review:) If a universe without Jim is what makes Pam fully appreciate him, I'll do it;)
7 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gah! Why would Creed think that was what she'd want to be different? I only hope this is a "Jim never worked at Dunder Mifflin" universe, and not a "Jim never existed" universe! Still intrigued...
Author's Response: Intrigued is what I'm going for:) Thanks for the review;)
Date: October 10, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this made my heart twinge sadly! How horrible would it be to realize she imagined it all? I can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..... OK, what the... I'm totally intrigued but a little bummed at the same time! Is that what you were going for??
Author's Response: Yes, I think your reaction is quite correct:D But don't be too bummed, there's more to come:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
A world without Jim! What a cruel thing. Creed as the angel (Very "It's a Wonderful Life) is quite funny. I'm looking forward to reading some more!
Author's Response: Oh, yes, it's cruel and hopefully Pam will realize this sooner rather than later:) Thanks:)