10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 11:24 am Title: October 17th
aww. that was so sweet even with the ending! i love this story so much. too bad we all didn't know they were honeymooning in puerto rico before you started. darn. but this is still amazingly well done and oh-so realistic. fantastic job and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL. Yeah too bad I didn't know. To be honest when I saw this week's episode I thought...aw man! Puerto Rico...I can't have them go there! lol. Hahaha...good thing this is FICTION, huh? (I had to remind myself) and then I let them stay in Niagara. I'm glad you're still enjoying this!
Date: October 17, 2009 11:23 am Title: October 17th
I'm a complete sucker for Jim taking care of Pam bits and this was just gorgeously written. :)
Author's Response: Well Liv, that makes two suckers then...because I am too. Thanks so much for such wonderfully kind words.
Date: October 17, 2009 11:19 am Title: October 17th
First, apologies for taking so long to review. My bad. Second, ditto everything Talkative said. My lazy.
But let me add, the dialogue in this chapter is particularly fine. From so sweet: He let his lips linger there while he inhaled the scent of her shampoo. Who wouldn't want a mom who always smelled like apples? To so funny and effortless to imagine coming out of Jim's pretty kisser: "That's...don't listen to what my mom says. She has no idea."
As usual, your little bits are totally addictive and so satisfying.Author's Response: "My lazy"...you kill me Colette. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story and extra glad you liked the apples line. That was a VERY last minute addition. Thanks so much for being such a great supporter!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 10:30 am Title: October 17th
LF, this story gets better with every chapter you add. First you buckle *my* knees with some of the finest short-form smut I've seen around these parts, and then you break my heart with your most recent chapter. It's beautiful and honest and I've read it three times already this morning. The dialog ("I think with planning the wedding I haven't really been able to think so much about the baby and...) demonstrates what an ear you have for these two. You've handled middle-of-the-night confusion and fear so deftly.
Brava. I can't wait to see what you share next.
Author's Response: lol. Short form-smut. You saying you read this chapter 3 times is just...wow. Thank you. And Thank you for saying that I know the characters. More than anything when I write this stuff I just want it to sound like something they'd do or say. So thanks so much again. I hope you like the latest. It's definitely different.
Date: October 17, 2009 09:18 am Title: October 17th
I'm having the same warm fuzzy feelings I wish I could get from other stories. Out of all the predictions of what the future for Jim and Pam I find this the most realistic. I don't find the type of angst some people come up with very believable because it never feels like them. This feels like them down to the tiniest inch. Truly made my morning. Thank you. I really hope you continue this story at the rate you have. I love looking on MTT and not only seeing that someone actually updated but seeing this one particularly. It's happy.
Author's Response: This is so very, very nice of you. I really enjoy your writing so it's great to hear you say all this. You know, I like angst as much as the next girl (and definitely dabble in it from time to time), but I imagine that Jim and Pam are just so amazingly joyful during their honeymoon and still have to deal with life stuff that comes up...but for the most part are really in this sweet little bubble. Thanks so much for your feedback!
Date: October 17, 2009 08:38 am Title: October 10th
I absolutely loved this chapter. It was a mix of fear, love, humor, and just sweet moments. Please keep this going! I've been reading the whole thing & love it.
Date: October 17, 2009 07:42 am Title: October 10th
More proof that Married!Jim is hot like lava -- they couldn't even put him on screen last week -- it would have killed all the fangirls dead.
Date: October 17, 2009 05:19 am Title: October 10th
I was very excited to see a new chapter on your story... I love seeing Jim and Pam as partners in everything! I really liked your line "Play your cards right and this baby will associate you with me". Too sweet and sexy too. Thanks for updating so quickly!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:40 pm Title: October 17th
This chapter was just too adorable! I can't stop reading this story, I have been waiting for your next updates on this story because your story is greatly written and have this sort of an imagination of their honeymoon that we don't see on the show. Great job and looking forward next chapter! =)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much Adampascalfan12 and thanks for being such an awesome reviewer. I'm so glad I can write something that people look forward to.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:26 pm Title: October 10th
Probably one of your best chapters yet, you're killing me - STOP IT... not really, please don't stop it :)
The whole leg cramp thing was really cute :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:09 pm Title: October 17th
awww i love this! stop updating so quickly, you're making me look bad! it's been awhile since i updated my most recent story.... gah.
Author's Response: LOL. I'm really just trying to get all these out before Jim and Pam come back from their honeymoon "in real life." lol. This week is it for me. Don't feel bad!!!
9 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:08 pm Title: October 17th
My absolutely favorite chapter yet! Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 04:52 pm Title: October 16th
nice! this was really good and i can't wait for the next chapter. it's so amazing to think how far jim and pam have come - i mean for them to realistically say what you just wrote (which i thought seemed very natural!) is incredible, considering how they couldn't be together for so long. great job!
Author's Response: It is so amazing right? To think of how far they've come....wow. So glad we all get to celebrate it now! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:45 pm Title: October 16th
I like your nuggets - very hot and spicy!! Adorable chapter.
Author's Response: LOL. Hot and spicy nuggets. rofl. Thanks Kay!
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:43 pm Title: October 14th
This was lovely x 100. You write their happiness and joy over being married so well. After their long and bumpy road to get to where they are, you just know that they are on Cloud 9. And you describe it so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kaystar. You've been such an awesome reader for so long! Thanks for always being so supportive. I can't believe they're finally married! yay!
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:37 pm Title: October 12th
I just love this line, what a perfect way to describe how Jim is feeling.
"Ever since the wedding he'd found himself in sort of this blissful state of intoxicated fatigue"
Great job (as always!!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:43 am Title: October 16th
Best. Chapter. Ever.
Author's Response:
Best. Review. Ever ;-)
THANK YOU!
Date: October 16, 2009 08:06 am Title: October 16th
The more nuggets the better :) Or any Jam you throw our way ;)
Author's Response: Thank you KatieJ! You got it!
Date: October 16, 2009 07:31 am Title: October 16th
LoveFool, coming alive with the smut! I like it. :)
Author's Response: LOL. Yeah...not typically my bag, I'll tell you that. I still think I will leave it to the experts! lol. SO glad you enjoyed it!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 06:43 am Title: October 16th
Let me tell ya, lady--this may have been a short chap but, boy, oh, boy, did it pack a wallop! Love. It. You better have a bath fic in your!
Author's Response: LOLOL. Oh no...what did I do here? Set myself up for expectations! lol. Thanks so much Nan!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:56 am Title: October 16th
Hotcakes :)
Author's Response: with syrup...or Jam? hahaha
Date: October 16, 2009 01:53 am Title: October 16th
You apologize? For this? Are you crazy? It's hot shower orgasm during their honeymoon, plus nice witty dialog ("it's completely your call." Ha!) Did you really think we'd be all "yeah, okay, but it's too short"?
In other words, you have nothing to apologize for, because this was awesome.
Author's Response: hahahah. Thanks SyK! I'm so glad my fears were completely unfounded! lol. ;-)
Date: October 16, 2009 01:02 am Title: October 10th
Even in less than three hundred words, you work your magic!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 12:44 am Title: October 16th
well who DOESN'T love a sexy honeymoon nugget? no more shower sex for YOU, pam!
Author's Response: ROFL! No more, Pam! (not in the shower anyway). lol. Thanks Flonk!
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 04:12 pm Title: October 14th
This is the best "story about nothing" since Seinfeld. You are SO good at pin-pointing how they would act in the situations you put them in, major props to you because that is a difficult task. Oh and update because I love this story a lot (:
Author's Response: Ah, megakel that's so nice of you to say! You're awesome!