5 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2016 10:36 pm Title: The Morning After
The first chapter was very good. You should have stopped there.
Date: December 30, 2009 11:56 am Title: The Morning After
Well, well. Sweet, saucy, sexy, and really just perfect. You are very good at this fic stuff, you know.
Author's Response: Right back at you. :) Thanks lis!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2009 09:33 pm Title: The Morning After
Oh my, please tell me I'm not the only one who got excited when he said "Twice," because I thought of when he told Michael she turned him down "twice" and... my brain isn't working correctly! I'm loving this one and hope to see one more :)
Author's Response: I'm hopeful I'll add to this as the mood strikes me - so hopefully there'll be more...someday. Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2009 12:30 am Title: The Morning After
Mmm hot and delicious. I love how you have Pam acting at the start, I can really see her emotions getting the better of her :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you found that believable. I try and imagine how they'd sound - it's nice to know when other's think I've gotten it right!
Date: October 21, 2009 08:30 pm Title: The Morning After
Very believeable and fun. I especially loved that she ordered and ate two breakfasts. Food tastes so darn good in the second trimester, so that really rang true. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: I'm glad it rang true because my only frame of reference is the internet and my pregnant friends. :) Thanks so much for reading - and reviewing too!!
Date: October 21, 2009 07:13 pm Title: The Morning After
Ooooh I love this. First off, I was NOT expecting her to say that she'd fallen asleep DURING sex. That was awesome! I quite literally laughed out loud at that one! And poor Jim's confusion over whether she wanted him to be mad or not. lol. Then the final wonderfully naughty exchange...was indeed perfectly filthy.
Author's Response: I hear it can happen. Then again...it's been awhile. :) So glad you liked it!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 04:36 pm Title: The Morning After
oh my god. that was fantastic! i love how you go from anger to happiness and still show how they love and care for each other all throughout. always a pleasure to read. great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm glad that you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 03:56 pm Title: The Morning After
I'm so glad you kept going with this! It's so lovely with sentimental and sweet goodness all wrapped in. While I think it's pretty much a given that Jim Halpert would be the best husband ever, I actually really felt sorry for Pam. I mean falling asleep AND eating two breakfasts - that baby's making her crazy!
Favourite part: "Guess what?"
"What?"
He spoke softly, his voice full of wonder. "I married you yesterday."
Awww. :D
Oh Oh and also (sorry, this wasn't supposed to be this long...): "Stop. You are not. You're the best wife I've ever had."
Too cute. Thanks xoxoxo for my big smile!
Author's Response: Thanks M&S!! I love hearing I made you smile.
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 11:43 am Title: The Morning After
Ooooo! There's more! There's more!
"You're...well..." His fingers tugged on the knot of her robe, a satisfied smile on his face as it finally fell away. "...filthy comes to mind." Squeeeeeeeeeee! Fact: one of my absolute favorite things to read in a fic is Jim referring to Pam as "filthy." Don't ask me why. Love this. Funny and hot--a winning combination. And I don't think the tighty whities are the norm either. They were for comedic effect IMHO ; )
Author's Response: Well alrighty Nan. Glad I could...help you out?? LOL! Thanks so much!
Date: October 17, 2009 05:36 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
I had a download of Forever. Then deleted it. Now I've gotta go scrounging around to find it again!!!!
Haha, the last wedding I was at I had to escape to the bathroom to find some peace. The bride however, seemed unaffected by all the craziness.
Trust me Pam, he knew you'd end up there eventually. He always knew. It melts me heart just thinking about it.
What? Jim isn't perfect? I have a good mind to stop reading right now!!!
Can she tell him where Creed gets his hair dye?
Such a scary warped photo alblum those two have
I wish I had thought of the tissue box thing. I seriously ran around my friend's reception barefoot. My shoes were killing me in the ceremony, I got to the reception, and I saw screw this. Left them under the table for the entire night.
Best ending ever!!!
It really should be illegal to read such happiness so soon after I wake up. I'm not sure why, but I think it should be.
Author's Response: EH - I should reply sooner simply b/c your reviews are the greatest ever. Thank you so much!
Date: October 16, 2009 04:01 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
He's not perfect, far from it, but she knows he's completely perfect for her.
Awwww....
"Are we talking about those kind of pictures right now? Because I have a lot of those..."
Awwwww x 2....
Cute moment, a snuggle. I love it. Just what I need after all that wedding cake...
Author's Response: Thanks NEJ! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2009 09:42 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
I know I'm bad at reviewing, but I can't believe I haven't told you yet how much I love this fic. Reminiscing about good times and bad (but more good) is usually a great thing. Oh, I love how you put this in there "She didn't really want to get into where they were or what they'd been doing to delay the start of the ceremony. She was sure that Michael had his own completely inappropriate explanation for where they had been," because that's what I thought while I was watching it for the first time!
Author's Response: It's OK to be bad at reviewing. I've been absolutely terrible in replying to reviews! I'm so very glad you liked it!!!
Date: October 14, 2009 09:52 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
Melt. Lovely, xoxoxo. Just lovely. Those are truly some crazy photo albums.
Author's Response: Indeed Ms. Hoo. Indeed. :) Thanks so much!
Date: October 13, 2009 10:17 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
Oh Hugs...this is so freakin' perfect. It's sexy as all get out with JUST the right amount of sentimentality. The picture you painted of how Jim looked when he found her in the lobby, with his jacket off, and sleeves rolled up...holy mother. Then the foot rubbing...and the possible foot um...fascination. Just GREAT. Wonderful trip down memory lane.
Author's Response: Thanks LF! I'm so, so glad you liked it. And that you picked out my favorite parts. :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 08:54 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
I laughed, I cried. OK, I smiled and teared-up while reading this. It was so beautifully them. And so very well written, as yours always are!
Author's Response: kay - you're the sweetest. Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 06:42 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
I got the biggest grin on my face reading this one. I'm pretty sure my husband thinks I'm an idiot for smiling this big at the computer!
Author's Response: Awww - well thanks so much and sorry!!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 04:25 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
oh my god, that was perfect! absolutely perfect. i love all of pam's memories, they're beautiful and so well written. i love the way they think of each other's hair - so cute, and then when pam opens up her eyes to see jim with his sleeves rolled up (i love how jim does that!) just adorable.
i want a jim. darn, i really do. what about you? great job with this, a very cute one-shot!
Author's Response: I'd love a Jim myself - just can't seem to find him!! Thanks pmh!
Date: October 13, 2009 03:22 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
Beautiful. Amazing dialogue. More, please?!
Author's Response: I just can't seem to stop myself so you can bet on it. :) Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 02:57 pm Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
That moment when Pam took a picture, after Jim cut his tie, was one of my favorite moments of the series. So a whole story about the mental snapshots, was just wonderful. And it sounds just like a conversation they would have had. How cool is it that Jim noticed her gray sweater was heavier then her normal ones, he really is too perfect:) Glad they escaped the reception early, after that day they deserve it!
Can't wait to see more of your work.
Author's Response: The Jim in my mind notices EVERYTHING about Pam. Not sure how true that is - but I'm so glad you liked what I did here. Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 11:15 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
Fact: This is luscious and completely divine. That is all.
Author's Response: Fact: I appreciate your kind review. That is all. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 10:52 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
That is so completely awesome! I love everything about it. Made me a little misty eyed. Something about that episode just gets me every time I watch it. Anyways, great story!
Author's Response: Thanks Deedledee! It's my favorite too - I can watch the last few minutes over and over!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 09:54 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
Wow, all those mental pictures were just, guh!!! Brilliant, I love that he finds her feet cute, and that he is in love with her hair, even when it was big and frizzy!!!
This made my day, thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks H_H! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: October 13, 2009 09:47 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
This just made me sort of ridiculously happy. It's funny and sweet and them and pretty much perfect.
My favorite snapshot might be Jim's Merger one, because I always knew that "The place looks good" really meant "Oh my god, you're so beautiful right now." But they're all good.
Men who give foot rubs without even being asked to are the best. The best!
Author's Response: SyK - That's always been my opinion too - that that comment was meant for Pam and Pam alone. :) Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 09:40 am Title: Take a picture. It'll last longer
xoxoxo, this was a great story! I loved the fact that this was from Pam's perspective and how you used their cute "taking mental pictures" and incorporated into Pam's trip down memory lane. Your Pam (and Jim) was spot on, in my opinion. Their conversation is something I can imagine them having during the reception.
My favorite part is...oh heck....I love everything about this story!
Excellent job! Also, thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: I'm so woefully ashamed I never replied to these reviews - Oct-Dec last year sucked for me basically. And I also know notifications are wacky so you might not even see this but here goes!! Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad it seemed real to you. I hope to add on throughout the season if inspiration strikes!