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Reviewer: ficklevillain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

it's weird. i was all set to hate this (i'm one of those crazy ones that gets irritated at the very thought of jim or pam being with anyone else), but after reading it...well, crap. i *really* liked it. so, good on you. you must be ridiculously good. :0)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Maybe I just picked the wrong Halpert" - oh, wow. Jim would *so* freak out :-)

I love, and I'm sure girl7 does too, how Jonathan has become canon. All we need now is for TPTB over at NBC to sign Scott Foley on as a guest star and we're all set.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

The "one time she did" reminds me of that old song - "If you can't be with the one you love, love the one  you're with."  Very nicely done.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 07:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Delicious! And I'm glad my snarky response to Moxie made you laugh! Sometimes I blur the line between real life and TV! TV is my friend...

Author's Response: Haha... I know, you're not the only one.   But honestly, I couldn't say I disagreed with you -- I was thinking any normal guy would be like, "Keep me away from this weeping, flirty mess..."  We know the Halperts aren't just ANY men, though.  *wink*

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was great and thanks to girl7 too for developing Jon so well for all of us.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot.  I have to say, honestly, it couldn't have been done without her.  I love Jonathan....

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was fun.  Really great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! These were a lot of fun. I really love that girl7 has created a character that fanon has adopted. You did a great job- but poor, stupid Pam.



Author's Response: Oh, I know.  I had to read over all of girl7's stories again to remember where and when we met Jonathan throughout fanon, and, man, I kept getting so mad at Pam.  That feeling probably carried through ...

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 04:34 am Title: Chapter 1

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!  oh my god!  Okay, first of all, how honored am I that you wrote this?? WOW.

Second of all, I'm torn between major squee and serious guilt at how excited I am about your final line!  (I take it back! I take it back!  Jim and Pam must be together!)  ....But ah, what a lovely diversion....

Couldn't believe how many great lines I wanted to mention, but I forced myself to narrow it to this one:

"Something, anything that would remind her of what it was like. Just to feel him again, even if it wasn't him."

That is the perfect way to frame a kiss between these two - because you could totally excuse her for this.  Now, could you figure out a way to make it okay for Jon to kiss her back?  To go with it?  Eee!

Also - I was laughing out loud at your Drunk!Pam - you wrote her voice so perfectly. 

LOVED THIS.  Take Jonathan anytime, sister!  (TWSS - or HS!)



Author's Response:

Haha!  I'm so glad you liked it!  After all, it was inpsired by your work ... 

In my mind, if Jim really did get "serious" with Karen, I could totally see the last scenario happening -- and I imagined (no, I am totally NOT admitting that this scene went on in my head) that Jon might actually kiss her back because I totally think he's attracted to her but he's always done nothing because of his brother and the fact that he was so loyal to him.  But, you know... Jim's dating Karen ... Jim's not around ... Pam's drunk ... let's say Jon's maybe had a few ....  welllll ... there might be some requited sexual tension going on there, let's just say.  

Wow, I just had to fan myself thinking about it.  Whew.  

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 02:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Totally.  I mean, yes.  If Jim does get serious with Karen, I fully expect Pam to get together with Jonathan (what do you mean he doesn't exist in canon?)



Author's Response: I KNOW.  When are they finally going to bring Scott Foley onto the show -- are you listening, TPTB??

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1

oooh - the implications from 'the one time she did'!  That was lots of fun!!! 


Author's Response: Thanks!  I had a lot of fun writing it, especially since I've always thought Jonathan was a little touchy-feeling, it didn't seem that far off that she might think that....

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