10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2011 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
How have I not come across this before?!?! Nomadshan, you are a goddess. This is delectable.
Author's Response: Thanks, NanReg :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2009 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I just can't stop gushing about your stories. I love the way you used so few words but managed to convey everything. The need, the want, the desperation that Jim and Pam felt. The sex was smoldering without being graphic, the happiness the next day was just right. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, bkwrm! I should probably go back and read some of these -- see if I can learn anything about how my writing's changed. Glad it worked for you!
Date: February 19, 2007 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I never read ficlets, because they always leave me unsatisfied. Too short for my epic fic tastes.
But WOW. It is amazing what you have conveyed here in less than 300 words. Hot and wet and...guh. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks, lapdogdesign! :)
Date: October 26, 2006 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Water damage, no charges, but fired.
This could be the six word challenge -- love the searing hotness of this -- JH and food ~~ a lethal combination. mmm
Author's Response: Thanks, lisahoo! Jim's barely cooked on the show, and eats really boring stuff - where do we get these images of him and food? Must be our own perversion! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
So little words, that say so much. You always do such a good job of portraying the heat between these two.
Author's Response: Thanks, Luna! Their heat is VERY inspirational ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, loved this. You are so creative to come up with such a steamy fic from those words - and so darn fast! I've never wanted pancakes more.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks, kaystar :)
Date: October 13, 2006 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just... wow. Another one to keep next to the bed! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, mcmuffins ;)
Date: October 13, 2006 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Since I was the snarky wench who twisted your words and used them against you, you'd think I would have reviewed last night when I first read it. However, I was much too busy trying to cool down. Yikes, woman! I love the use of the refrain to make it like a poem, or a song, or a hymn to their love. Just lovely!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks, Par5 - glad you enjoyed! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 05:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Great prompts and a great fic.
Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Water damage, no charges, but fired.
And totally worth it.
Ye gods. This is sheer poetry. Eleven on a scale of ten.
Can I be you when I grow up?
Author's Response: Heh, thanks, NeverEnoughJam! :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my damn.
Poetry. Extremely HOT poetry.
Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks, Shan!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
So hot, and I love the rhythm you set with your words.
Author's Response: Thank you, Krista!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
oohhhhhh ... nice
Author's Response: Thank you ;)
9 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Guh.
I'm really, really trying for constructive. But I think my brain melted.
Author's Response: I appreciate that, Leely! Sorry about your brain ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hurrah! So. Very. Hot.
Author's Response: Yay, thanks, Jonah5 :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
The way he catches her by the waist and drags her back inside - echoes of the deliberate Jim we saw stride up to Pam and deliver the infamous kiss....but I digress. This is wonderfully spare and each word resonates. Like a poem. 'He is blind'...hottest line I've read in a while.
Author's Response: It was that image of Jim catching her waist and dragging her back inside that drove this one for me. It was SO clear - and yes, very much like his stride in Casino Night. Thanks so much, Colette, for your comments about word choice! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was amazing. Hot, sexy and so creative. Thank you!
Author's Response: No, thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
My goodness, shan. How do you do this? This is like a tiny pebble in a fast moving stream that has been polished to perfection.
Author's Response: In something this short, I challenge myself not to use the same word twice (except for the repeating refrain). I think I managed it. Thanks, so much, Lis! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you. Just what the doctor ordered. Shan. Your words have amazing healing powers. I feel better already.
Author's Response:
Poor bruised Krissy. Damn laptop cable! Not to mention the lack of Jam in tonight's episode.
*reminds self: Winter before summer, winter before summer...*
Glad it helped :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOLY GOD! I know there's been discussion lately of leaving reveiws containing constructive crticisms and specific examples of the reasons we liked or didn't like it, but DAMN! All I can really say at this point is HOLY GOD! Umm...Flashfic...is this a new term or is this something that's normally done? 'Cause I think I like it.
Well done lady, well done.
Author's Response: I think technically flashfic is very short (up to 1000 words), but I also consider it something quickly written. Thanks, justkaren! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, shan. This is so great. You certainly have a way with words.
Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your prose is perfection, as always. Shan, I would read novels by you. About anything, no matter how long. Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dang, how do you do it, woman? What was that, twenty minutes ago someone issued the challenge? And you come up with this hotness?
Color me impressed.
Author's Response: I had the scenario in my head as I drove home. And it was, like, 14 words long, so... ;)