9 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2010 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Intimate and sensual and just so delicious.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: August 03, 2010 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1
"...and she grins and catches an inch of skin on his neck between her lips and flicks her tongue until his breathing becomes a little less sleepy and a little more hungry."
Oh...I really like how you capture their knowing and comfortable intimacy in such seemingly small, yet telling moments and gestures. Good stuff!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! My favorite sort of writing is short little vignettes like this, of little moments that mean more than hours and hours, you know? Thanks again so much for your review!
Date: August 03, 2010 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Very lovely. I love those sweet and simple stories about them just waking up together in the mornings because really we're talking about a few moments, but it all seems so intimate and momentous and you've captured that perfectly.
And Pam - I'd rather wake up that way every day as well ;)
Author's Response: First of all, thank you for your review! Secondly, yes! I completely agree; little moments are the ones that really count. I myself would love to wake up with Jim too...but don't tell my boyfriend. Yikes! Haha, thanks again for your kind words!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2010 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
and keeping her back against his chest like one of those safety bars on a roller coaster.
^^THAT is such an amazing line. I really enjoyed this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! It is so great to hear specific lines people enjoy. Thanks again Oldleaf! :)
Date: August 02, 2010 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. So intimate. Just the two of them waking up. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: You're the sweetest:) Thank you so much for your review, ivy!
Date: August 02, 2010 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2010 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE LOVE LOVE this!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your enthusiasm:)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2010 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was SO good. I really am addicted to new Jim and Pam. That time where they're discovering new things about each other, and just how perfectly suited for each other they are. You better write more like this, yo :)
Author's Response: You are so kind! I love the newness too, just when they're realizing how perfect one another is. :) Thank you so much for your review, and I'll write as soon as the mood strikes, have no fear! Thanks again, Hannah!