1 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2023 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I enjoyed this!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
this story is so good and i can't wait to start chapter 2 right now. i love the idea of jim and pam passing notes to each other. :)
Date: March 15, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw! So sweet! I know you've decided to head back to school to work on a literature/writing degree- but seriously your writing is very fluid and very reminiscent of chick-lit or romance novels (in some more MA cases ;-) You should consider piling together a manuscript of a story and see what happens. The realization came to me at the point in this story when you hadn't revealed what Pam's note to Jim (in the folder) had said until the end- leaving the perfect set up for the next chapter- and I hadn't noticed until that point! That, my dear, is the sign of a talented writer.
Date: March 15, 2007 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw! So sweet! I know you've decided to head back to school to work on a literature/writing degree- but seriously your writing is very fluid and very reminiscent of chick-lit or romance novels (in some more MA cases ;-) You should consider piling together a manuscript of a story and see what happens. The realization came to me at the point in this story when you hadn't revealed what Pam's note to Jim (in the folder) had said until the end- leaving the perfect set up for the next chapter- and I hadn't noticed until that point! That, my dear, is the sign of a talented writer.
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 08:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay for another great supply closet story! It was sweet, with just enough heat.
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Man, I am so behind on my fic reading! I wish I'd read this before last night's episode, b/c no it has to be AU for me.
I love how such a childish game (how elementary school of Pam!) will lead to such adult...activities :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter! Pam's anxiety leading up to the meeting felt so real. And the scene in the supply closet was so sweet and romantic. Too early for smutt I think but you had just the right amount of romantic smuff.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, the second chater is even sweeter!
I loved the intensity of it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love it. The notes are very IC for Pam, and Jim will follow her lead, of course. And of course, there's something about supply closets that are kind of hot. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I wonder Jim thinks supply closets are hot, too?
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so sweet and full of promise! I love Pam's first note with the boxes to check Yes or No. (It reminds me of that George Strait song, "Check yes or no".) And her second note was so well written - awesome job on this!
Author's Response: Thank, Kaystar! And yes, I admit I did think of a country song or two when I wrote about the yes or no boxes. ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh. So, so good. And I thought it was a nice amount of smut:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
All hail the mighty supply closet! Ahhhh, I can't WAIT until they eventually get back together, this was so great, I love the idea of Pam passing these little notes in her palm and then Jim with the folder. That seems so plausible that they'd do something like that. Ah, happy.
Author's Response: Well, it didn't turn out as smutty as I had intended, but what can I say? The characters do what they want, not what I tell what I tell them to do. ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this was so good. Great reunion! I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm really dying to know how it really goes down. I just hope it doesn't disappoint me.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what kind of muse has possessed you lately, but it is making me SO happy! Yay, so much goodness to read. (Better review later)
Author's Response: Thanks. I have no idea what's possessing me lately, either. It's not that I don't have other things to do.... ;-)
Date: October 18, 2006 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVE this:
"Hey," she said, her voice rough with emotion. "I thought you were going to tell me something."
"I'm trying to," Jim replied.
Swoon. Love the last line as well, "intent on making their way back to each other." And while I enjoy some hot JAM-smut as much as the next hussy, the degree of steam in this is just right. I mean, these two have moved glacially slow so far, and although we'd all love them to fall madly in bed together, I'd like to think they care so deeply for each other that they wouldn't have their first time in the freaking office!
And I forgive you for making us wait for part 2 :o)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sweet. Nicely done even if wasn't so smutty. :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want to be a member of that club but do you have to be a writer? Can't you have reader members too? Please?
Author's Response: I certainly think faithful readers should be members too - otherwise why write it??? :-)
Date: October 18, 2006 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
There is no "d" in refrigeration.
That's the extent of my ability to be rational right now.
Boy, it's hot in here...I think I need to visit the supply closet.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
"God, how I've missed that laugh...I hope I never have to go another day without hearing it."
*sigh* I love the romantic angsty fluffy tone you gave this. Although the hussies are probably screaming for blood, I thought it was fantastic!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I made myself stop and review this chapter before I move on! I love that Pam finally made a move and when she wrote "I want you to tell me that you still love me. I want you to tell me I haven't ruined everything we had, and everything we could have. " I melted a little. Off to read the hotness!
9 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
[H]e wasn't holding onto the door to let himself out. He was holding on to make sure she stayed in.
Awesome line. This is so, so sweet. I can't imagine that it will really be this easy, but it works so naturally here that it gives me hope. Lovely!
9 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
The fire she saw in them made her realise that he wasn't holding onto the door to let himself out. He was holding on to make sure she stayed in.
*whimper*
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Big sigh. Holy cow this was excellent, Moxie - you do such a great job of building the tension slowly.
Wow. Excellent!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
No! No! no! You can't stop here - agghhhh! Wow, this is terrific Moxie. And please, dear god please, finish it!!!