1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2019 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know, I think Jim and Pam do pretty well with tricks...but I really like this story. Thanks for writing it!
Date: July 14, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
So it's like July of 2007, but I think you should make a second chapter of this for this coming halloween. Only we'll pretend a year hasn't passed.
Date: February 16, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just loved the images of Jim making abig deal over the kids' costumes (pretending to be scared, how him.) But even more, the image of a stunned Jim, dropping the candy in shock when he realized it was Pam. Awesome image. Great job.
8 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2006 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like brave Pam here. Halloween truly is the perfect day to do what she did.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is lovely! Lovely! What I wouldn't give if she'd do this...and what I wouldn't give to see the look on his face!
Date: October 24, 2006 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Me, too. As in really nice :) I love how you have Jim on Halloween - of COURSE he would rush home for the trick-or-treaters and take the time to talk to them all!
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a cute story! I loved this line - "She was too afraid that by being afraid she was setting herself up for a life of missed moments and ignored holidays"
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet! I love take-the-next-step Pam! Really well done.
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now, that's an original idea for a reconcilliation. And seasonal too! Loved the image of Jim dropping the candy on the porch when he realizes who it is. Very sweet.
Date: October 24, 2006 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Um, treat," he said, still sounding slightly shell-shocked. "Definitely, treat."
Heh heh heh heh.
Loved the sight of Jim handing out candy. I loved the scenes in "Take Your Daughter To Work Day" when he connected to those kids so well. I can just see Jim acting as you describe with a bunch of costumed kiddies. They'd be back over and over at his door--especially if their mothers had a say in it...
8 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very Nice treat for us readers.
Date: October 24, 2006 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! Thanks for writing it, and thanks to Par5 for inspiring it! I do love that Jim is ready to give her a handful of candy... he's so generous!
Date: October 24, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! I get the credit because this is lovely and you even managed to work "moxie" into it! Thanks for a sweet pre-Halloween treat and there can never be enough excuses for Pam to get herself over to Stamford.
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
His eyes widened, and candy slipped from his fingers, sounding like pebbles scattering when it hit the door frame and the porch.
LOVE THIS. I can see the picture in my mind.
Definitely a treat. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it!! thanks!! and I swear I'm not making fun, but there is a typo in the beginning "Sheberated"....and i laughed out loud thinking it was a real word at first. perhaps something to do with sherbert
Author's Response: LOL - thanks for the heads up! Glad you liked it :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. Sooo, sooo nice. The repeating of the "too afraid" refrain gives it a wonderful rhythm and really plays with the Halloween theme. Gorgeous and sweet and yay!
Author's Response: thanks - I'm so glad you liked it!