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Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2006 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

ah yes, if only our girl had her wits about her then, it would have read much like this.  Glad to have you join us crazy writers!  Good stuff, Zuisa!


Author's Response: Thank you!! I obviously need one more distraction from actually doing my homework ;) So fanfic will suit me nicely for that, I think! Haha.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2006 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed your version of Casino Night.  Especially loved this line - "All the hopes and desires of the past two years were wrapped up in this one perfect little moment."  Congrats on your first fic - hope we see more from you!



Author's Response: Thank you very much!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2006 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice job zuisa! Aren't you glad you posted it and that's over with? ;) Now you can become a full fledged obsessive fic writer like the rest of us!

Author's Response: Yes, very glad indeed. Looking forward to becoming just as crazy as you lot ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

She had a whole other life that needed to be dealt with, but she was willing to give it up - wanted to give it up - to be with Jim. 

Yeah, this would have been nice. :)

You have done a really good job with their voices, especially for a first attempt! I can totally imagine that the conversation could have gone this way, if Pam were just a little more self-aware. Congrats on joining the club!



Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate it :-) I'm looking forward to hopefully writing more in the future!

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2006 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

aw!! Loved this fic, well done!    

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I thought that was an interesting alternate take on Casino Night.  Well done with your first fic!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2006 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for writing this other possibility!  If ONLY!!!  Casino Night was so long ago, but I remember now that I expected the 'confession' to be about the transfer ~~ this is a really interesting idea to follow through.

I like how you worked "Once" back into the dialogue, too! 



Author's Response: Thanks! I actually started watching the show like 2 weeks ago (bless DVDs), so I guess I forget that Casino Night was a long time ago for other people, hah! And thank you for emailing me about the typos, I appreciate it!

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