1 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2018 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is just lovely. Really in such a painful, hopeful, uncertain way, it is lovely. Beautiful imagery at Pam's doorstep. Bravo and thank you!
Date: February 28, 2011 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sad and wonderful at the same time. Glad I got to read this one again
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2008 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
"it might just kill me" < that line killed me dead!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
Date: October 02, 2007 04:50 am Title: Chapter 1
ahhh i liked thatt!
i wish i knew what happened nextt [x
but it was very sweeetttt
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the same line that Luna Mystik loved.
I was also just thinking that, damn, it really must suck to be one of the characters on the show, because all of them have really fucked up lives.
8 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2007 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely. I'm reading a lot of good, darkish, angsty fic today, and yours was really good. Nice work :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2006 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
so good!!!
Date: December 19, 2006 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Sorry about that,” he says, “I didn’t mean to make you…wait.”
So perfect! This whole story feels very real, that perfect dying of little deaths this show does best. And I love drunk Pam.
8 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love how they're so mixed up and twisty in this. Pam's line about thinking she hates Karen was perfect in its confusion, as was "He likes her and she knows it, so that makes her a horrible person for kissing him. But what does that make him for kissing her back?"
Really, really intense and well written.
Date: December 19, 2006 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope you continue with this becasue I'd like to see where you go with it.
Date: December 18, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, the sweet angst of this! It just might kill me.
(Psst... don't forget your disclaimer!)
Date: December 18, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Agh! You're killing me over here. (But in a good way.)
Date: December 18, 2006 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, this just broke my heart with surgical precision. Wonderful details (love Pam feeling like the mother, sitting in the front seat and Jim sounding like he's from a movie or something.) Beautifully written and made me want to cry (and pls take that as a compliment!)
9 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2006 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. This is haunting and bitter - and wonderful. Thank you!
Date: December 18, 2006 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So bittersweet but the end seemed promising - why else did he drop Karen off first?
9 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2006 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Karen is practically her new best friend, and Pam hates her?" - life's a bitch, eh Pam? I loved that you included this line, b/c it's true in a way. I'm a total Jam fan, so I wonder if it's wrong that I felt bad for Karen at the end...which is a sing of a good fic.
Date: December 18, 2006 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
*shivers* I suddenly got the chills when reading those last couple of sentences. And can I just say that it's great that you make Jim hesitant about this? Because when we really face it Jim/Pam (/Karen) as if stands is not a healthy relationship at all. And if Jim has something with Karen, he's not going to just drop it all the second Pam says 'yes', because he's not that guy, and that's why we love him.
Doesn't stop from breaking my heart, though.
Thanks for this.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: December 18, 2006 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you killed me with your words. That was just so sad. Don't get me wrong, it was very good (and I'm glad to see you're writing again!) but my poor heart! I really care too much about these fictional characters...
Date: December 18, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, angst and Xmas smooches... this got me right in the pit of my stomach. And all most of us want for Christmas is Jim :o)