Date: August 11, 2008 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad he said what he said about not wanting to be second best. It so easily could have gone that way. This was really beautiful, sort of sad and poignant, but hopeful, too.
Date: July 19, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This was fantastic. I just got back from a really emotional road trip of my own and this was just so perfect. Thank you for writing it!
Date: September 08, 2007 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
oh... my... god. so lovely, so wonderful. heartbreaking. there is such a heavy mood hanging over this piece and it's gorgeous.
Date: July 28, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
God I just want to read this forever. I just want to look at the west through your superb writing skills and watch Pam and Jim stumble around each other until they get it right. Jeez why is this not continued?
Date: June 06, 2007 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely and perfectly angsty. I really enjoyed it, especially since there's hope at the end. :)
Date: April 14, 2007 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn. Just brilliant and beautiful and sad and I believed every freakin' word of it. A polished little gem of a story. Poor Jim. Poor Pam. I loved this.
Date: January 28, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fics like this make me cry - not at the sad parts but at the happy ones.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying going through all your stories. Your prose is beautiful, and renders everything beautiful and intense.
Date: July 17, 2006 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was gut-wrenching to read. I could feel Jim's pain. Well done.
Date: July 17, 2006 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Sigh. Lovely and sad and heartwrenching... and then hopeful. Perfect.
Date: July 17, 2006 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1
But he wants her to be ready now. Because he’s been ready for so long...
That right there? You nailed it. Just perfect.
Date: July 17, 2006 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohh, bless you, that was fantastic.
*tears*
Date: July 16, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sweetly sad! I loved it!
Date: July 16, 2006 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story. Sad, but hopeful.
Date: July 16, 2006 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This was heartbreakingly sad until she finaly told him she loved him... and then I smiled right along with Jim.
Date: July 16, 2006 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* Wow. That's... that's all I can really say.
Date: July 16, 2006 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Your stories make me ache. Thank you for another exquisite moment.
Date: July 15, 2006 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous! I love Jim POVs, and you've done this so well. In my heart, they keep driving.
Date: July 15, 2006 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This made me cry. It's so lovely and bittersweet and perfectly Jim and Pam.