Date: February 12, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Something to Give Up
I love that - I have no regrets when it comes to you, and I loved the idea of the dollar bill! So great, post more!
Date: February 11, 2007 08:39 am Title: Something to Give Up
Keep going, I'm dying to know what happens. Great story and I love the role reversal. But seriously, my heart i breaking......
Date: February 08, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Something to Give Up
This is heartbreaking, and wonderfully done. Your writing style is terrific. I have been trying to work through this idea myself, and I find myself liking your take better. :-)
Keep going.
Date: February 07, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Something to Give Up
this story freaking rules, but um...it is not fluff.
Date: February 07, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Oh, man. Excellent story. You are great with the angst. Your whole story is so realistic. I can see all of those things happening. Please write another chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat!
Date: February 07, 2007 09:46 am Title: Something to Give Up
holy hell, you can't leave it like that! there has to be more! fluff, i tell you! fluff!
Date: February 05, 2007 09:00 pm Title: Something to Give Up
I loved this line: "I gave up my marriage for you." OMG. I can so see this happening. I so want this to happen! It isn't fair for Jim to use his relationship with Karen as something holding him back when Pam gave up her marriage. So awesome, I can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the awesome review. I am actually writing the second chapter now. So, it will be up in a few short days.
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Jim interrupted as he put his hands on her arms, “Don’t. I don’t want to hear that.” OUCH, painful, but perfect phrasing! I can definitely hear Jim saying that. Great job on this fic, I hope you'll continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I appreciate all the support!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Damn!!!
Author's Response: Haha....thanks for the review.
Date: February 05, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Yes, please do continue! And soon! I don't know how long I'll survive with my heart ripped out from this chapter. Wow, you can write the angst!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review. I appreciate you taking out the time to read such a LONG story and go the extra step to review it. It means alot to me!
I will be working on another chapter shortly. I have some ideas in mind and will be jotting them down this week. Thanks again.
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Very intense but I'm glad you made Jim feel a little of what Pam was going through that night.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review. I love to hear what the readers are saying about my work. I am thankful for people who leave comments! So, thanks and keep an eye out for another chapter!
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Something to Give Up
first of all, i just wanted to say that i think your writing has dramatically improved in such a short time. this was really really good and i think i might have been holding my breath at the end there! great job.
i know it is a recurring theme in a lot of fan fic that pam shows jim what it was like to have this bomb dropped her (turnabout's fair play, indeed!), but you did a great job with it. i really liked it and sooo....
secondly: yes, please continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your REVIEW!!! I appreciate it soooo much. Thank you also for the compliment about my improvement. I have felt like my stories are getting deeper and more meaningful. I have a great BETA reader who takes care of me...so, thank Peskipiksi too! Um, thanks again and I hope to create another chapter.
Becky
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 11:12 am Title: Something to Give Up
Nope, nope, nop!
Nope, sorry! You simply CAN NOT leave it there!
That was seriously one of the most heart wrenching stories I think that I have read here!
Pardon me, while I grab a tissue...
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!! You're comment made me smile. I appreciate all the support here on MTT! You all are great. I hope to be writing another chapter to this story so keep an eye out. Your review was great. Thanks!
Becky
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 07:28 am Title: Something to Give Up
This is great! I loved how realistic this was!! I loooooved this line, “I gave up my marriage for you. Goodbye, Jim.” Poor Pam. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you sooooo much for the wonderful comment! You have made my day! I appreciate all the support from this site! I hope to continue...so, make sure you keep looking out for another chapter soon. Thanks again!
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 05:48 am Title: Something to Give Up
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. It's definitely a unique perspective and I'd be very sad if it happened in real life.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didnt want to leave it that way because, I am a total JAM fan, so I would really like to see them together too...so, I might more to this...thanks for your review...
Date: February 05, 2007 05:44 am Title: Something to Give Up
good story. as much as i hate the ending, its incredibly realistic. i mean, yeah.but continue so we can have them be all happy together
Author's Response: Thank you for your Review! I hated to leave it that way too, so I might add somemore to it. Thanks for reading!