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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

I was wrong - Jim is able to fix things, yay!  You can really feel his conflicted feelings when he was talking about it to Karen - he's attracted to her but she's not Pam. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

aww, that last line was so sweet!  I think that you wrote karen well, i think that if she knew the whole truth she would leave gracefully...i hope the next part will be more happy, cant wait to read it!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

I don't think that I've ever read a story when Jim tells Roy about what happened on Casino Night.
Much less one where Roy actually encourages Jim/Pam.
It's different, revolutionary.
and SPECTACULAR.
(though, I'm not sure Roy would take it as well as he did here)

I cannot wait for the next part.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

I love how you had Jim & Roy connect and instead of having a huge fight, they are understanding and more adult about it. Nice change to what most people do. Please continue soon!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

wow, this keeps getting better and better (and yet worse and worse for the characters).... there has to be a happy ending, right?

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