Date: February 08, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
I was wrong - Jim is able to fix things, yay! You can really feel his conflicted feelings when he was talking about it to Karen - he's attracted to her but she's not Pam. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: February 08, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
aww, that last line was so sweet! I think that you wrote karen well, i think that if she knew the whole truth she would leave gracefully...i hope the next part will be more happy, cant wait to read it!
Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
I don't think that I've ever read a story when Jim tells Roy about what happened on Casino Night.
Much less one where Roy actually encourages Jim/Pam.
It's different, revolutionary.
and SPECTACULAR.
(though, I'm not sure Roy would take it as well as he did here)
I cannot wait for the next part.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
I love how you had Jim & Roy connect and instead of having a huge fight, they are understanding and more adult about it. Nice change to what most people do. Please continue soon!!
Date: February 08, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
wow, this keeps getting better and better (and yet worse and worse for the characters).... there has to be a happy ending, right?