9 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 08:25 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
“I would marry you in liquid hot magma, Pam. This is serious stuff, stop laughing.”
This is my favorite line. I love how you can bring the fun in even in the serious moment.
Date: February 12, 2007 04:44 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Your stories are always sooo visual and this one has all the best visions wrapped up in a lyrical package.
Absolutely fantastic. Thanks so much for sharing.
Date: February 11, 2007 11:07 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Two Words: Simply AMAZING!! It's just breathakingly beautiful and awesome. I love your imagery and just cute/adorable moments. Thank you for this!
Date: February 09, 2007 07:25 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
This is really sweet, and I noticed that you might be continuing it. I'll put it on my favourites list, just in case.
9 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 10:14 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
His laughter gets trapped beneath her skin and between the bedroom walls and in the corners of the ceiling- everywhere.
I always love the way you use words, unfold. Amazing. This was so sweet and warm and happy. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: February 07, 2007 10:57 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
This is so rich. I could hear the sound of the sheets and feel the quality of light. Beautiful work. I always look forward to something by you.
Date: February 07, 2007 07:55 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
This was so sweet. I loved Jim saying he'd marry her in a volcano and her saying she'd marry him on a glacier. So cute and cuddly.
Date: February 07, 2007 03:03 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Love Maria Taylor (seriously, the second Maria-inspired fic I read today) and love this story! Can't wait for more.
Date: February 07, 2007 11:14 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Fluff of the finest variety. So like them. So like I imagine.
He smiles that smile that makes her want to cry because she never thought she could make someone this happy,
OF COURSE. Pam wouldn't. Sigh. Love them. Love you for writing them like this. Just...LOVE.
Date: February 07, 2007 09:20 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
This was really beautiful and very hot. Lovely proposal. Wonderful job.
Date: February 07, 2007 06:14 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
He smiles that smile that makes her want to cry because she never thought she could make someone this happy
This is so beautiful. It's light as air and bright as sunshine. So much nicer than my latest angst-fest. Thank you for this.
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2007 05:38 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Oh, this is so precious, and perfect, and so true to these characters. I love it.
Date: February 07, 2007 05:08 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
You can feel the warmth and the love and the heat and everything good and lovely practically *radiating* off the screen, and I love that; I'm supposed to be working on getting population statistics for Singapore and this is the perfect way to lift my mood [lighten it, if you will; MichaelJoke!].
I especially adore the bits without the speech, the little descriptive parts that get you into the mood of the story right away. I adore that the way he proposes is while they're feeling that strange energy that comes before complete exhaustion [which is a freaking perfect description, by the way], the way it just slips, like he means it fully but he was brimming over and it just spills from the top, you know, like his happiness reached a saturation point and all he could do was leave the rest of the happiness out for her to feel...oh, what a lousy description.
He smiles that smile that makes her want to cry because she never thought she could make someone this happy: absolutely lovely. I love that you've gotten that feeling across; not just Jim and Pam but JimandPam in that one sentence, how it's like they bounce off each other and they're all they really need. Perfect.
Volcano! Glacier! Oh, JimandPam. Please get together before I smack your heads together.
That last sentence sets a tone, too; I like that it's like a finish, but there's a bit of a beginning, too, and traces of a something-in-between, too, which is brilliant. And it's this feeling of something caught between freedom and satisfaction, and it makes me feel so warm I could burst.
Perfect and gorgeous and all sorts of brilliant. Something I'm probably going to read three more times after these first four times. I'm going to be late for my lecture.
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2007 04:04 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Ok, the proposal was HOT, I'm not ashamed to say it...
Date: February 07, 2007 12:05 am Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
Unfold...SO GOOD. Just what I needed tonight. Although TickleFest '08?? For Realsies? Dude that's a long time...how about it happens TickleFest '07&half? haha. Good stuff.
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2007 11:57 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
love.
Date: February 06, 2007 11:49 pm Title: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.
aww yay! i love love fluffy mess like this! I'm anxiously awaiting the volcano/glacier wedding!