8 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2009 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
one thing i did notice: after the "mary tyler moore" moment, (adorable, btw), you suddenly change from past tense to present.
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2009 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
"One of your girls had an accident" Pam said, her head motioning toward their guest.
Jim's eyes went wide, "Pamela!" he faked surprise.
heeeeeeeeeeee....
Date: June 21, 2009 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
adorable! that's all i've got for you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2008 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now that's sweet. I love me some fluff, and Daddy!Jim fluff is the perfect kind of fluff. Loved the part where he was teasing Abby. That's cute. Awesome job.
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite Jim/Daddy fics, perfection!
9 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2008 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww that was so cute and fluffy eek :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was fantastic!!!
so beautifully written! like poetry!
Author's Response: Thank you! what a lovely compliment. I love getting reviews for stories that are years old...sometimes I forget about them. :o)
8 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was funny. I can't believe that sneaky Abigail tried to steal Jim's fuzzy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. Beautiful. I absolutely fell for this story.
Date: February 11, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
She holds him tight and she knows, this is how it's supposed to be.
::sigh:: this IS how it's supposed to be!!!! PLEASE NOTIFY NBC! Ugh...Loved it! More please. ;-)
Author's Response: I'll get right on it... and Im thinking of turning this into a series, youre not the only one who has asked for more, so I'll see what I can squeeze out of my brain
8 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWW. O this is so sweet. So warm. Loved his teasing his daughter about the "fuzzy". Loved his catching the kiss and returning it later. The thing about Jim I love the most is the hint of domesticity beneath the surface, that this is an ordinary guy looking for an ordinary life with a family and a woman he loves. He has always struck me as the kind of guy who would be more focused on his family than his career, who would make a great dad. Thanks for fleshing out (ahem) my fantasy Jim.
Author's Response:
I always got that vibe from him...or at least I wanted it. Seeing him with Sasha and stuff...what a cutie
thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1
i didn't review this yet? unbelievable.. you know i love me some jam, and i love babies. and then you give me not just jam, not just jam and a baby, but jam and TWO babies? i love you. i really really do.
Author's Response: thank you starshine! I love you too!! :)
Date: February 07, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was the sweetest thing ever! Pam and Jim and two JAM babies - who could ask for anything more. And the last line was just beautiful.
Author's Response: I am so glad you said that! I was really worried that my ending was too cheesy, but the other night when i really was up to my elbows in spaghettios and ready to cry I wanted to have that in the story somewhere and have Jim make everything alllll better
Date: February 07, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love me some Jam babies. Fighting over the fuzzy was so cute it made my teeth hurt!
Author's Response: the question is...who doesn't love Jam babies?
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2007 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeeee, so cute and precious!!
"That's my fuzzy!" made me giggle.
Author's Response: yay, I love causing giggles...thanks for reading!!
Date: February 07, 2007 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a cute story. If you can muster up another chapter, that would be cool...very good!
Author's Response: I have a few ideas...so we'll see...thanks for reading!
Date: February 07, 2007 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1
aww, it is sweet. and that is a very weird logic, pants, shirt then tucking in.
Author's Response: That was based on real life, my boyfriend dresses this way and I really don't understand it...hah
Date: February 07, 2007 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
You know what this made me want?
Babies. Jim Halpert's Babies. Damn you fool for making me want for something I cannot have!
Oh so beautiful!
Author's Response: I also want JIm Halpert's babies...which is why I have to live vicariously through my stories